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Chapter 7: Unrelenting Rage

Warning! This chapter is much more graphic than my others so far. I decided that I wanted the world to be more permanent and realistic than I had at first. As such viewer discretion is advised. I have uped the age warning as a result as well.

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This eye staring death towards Max in particular, was a familiar face. Well, not exactly familiar.

After Max and Professor Oak had fled from the Nidoking and Beedrills, they continued to fight. In the end the Beedrills were forced to retreat, leaving nearly twenty of their kind dead on the ground, either torn apart or squashed by the Nidoking. However, the Nidoking took as much as it gave. The result was the pokemon losing one of its eyes, along with several dozen scars and other wounds.

Another result was the Nidoking deciding to hunt down the Hairless Mankey that dared to cause it so much pain. The first thing it did was to find any regular, actual pokemon Mankeys nests, and kill all the Mankeys, young and old. The Nidoking had lived its whole life in the deep forest, as had its parents, so when they had called humans hairless Mankeys, the Nidoking( then of course only a male Nidoran) had simply done the same, and so assumed that humans were just a different type of Mankey, or at most a strange evolved form.

The Nidoking was not satisfied with that only, it had to kill the Mankey that caused its pain personally. It had searched for days, but could not find it. Its rage only grew, larger, and more ingrained everyday it failed to find it.

In fact Nidoking had been returning to its nest after another failed day of hunting, when the storm arrived. And as if by Archeus' grace for its efforts, the very being it had been hunting for weeks appeared before it, along with some puny Bellsprout alongside it's prey. Nidoking had to stop itself from raging and immediately attacking. It waited for the Mankey to lower its guard, for it to tired and fall asleep. Then, and only then, could Nidoking let itself go wild, to unleash its rage on it's prey.

For hours Nidoking waited, its prey mumbling something to the weed besides it. Momentarily the Nidoking forgot its rage, why could it not understand the Mankey? The Bellsprout was easily understandable even from a distance, but not the Mankey. It felt something was off. It began to think through why, but then the Mankey turned itself enough that Nidoking could see both of it's eyes. BOTH!!

It's rage returned like a thunder strike, like those occurring above them at that very moment.

IT'S EYES!!! HOW DARE IT HAVE TWO EYES, HOW DARE IT HAVE ONE!! NIDOKING WAS GOING TO TEAR THE MANKEYS EYES APART, THEN TEAR ITS LIMBS, THEN EVERYTHING TO SHREDS!!!!!!

KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL,KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL, KILL

*RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR*

KIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Please let me know if this was too much. If enough people wish for it I will remove this chapter, and return to a similar manner to before. Any comments are welcomed as always

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