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It has potential... The story is kinda rush, and you shouldn't put it like descriptions (like "they did this an that"), you need to show what they do and feel... but that comes with practice. And the chapters are too short... Well thats it... Good luck an do your best!! 👍
It has potential... The story is kinda rush, and you shouldn't put it like descriptions (like "they did this an that"), you need to show what they do and feel... but that comes with practice. And the chapters are too short... Well thats it... Good luck an do your best!! 👍