Ascent (Pokemon Story)

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0_Jordinio_0

Well nobody is reviewing so may as well do it myself to start it off. Everyone else does it after all. Seems like the second person point of view is a big turn off for most though. Granted, I understand since it initially threw me off quite a bit.

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Prometheus2000

This story is pretty good, I don't like the fact that you use the stupid 6 pokemon rule but maybe in the future when he more badges you can let him carry more. I still give you 5 stars though, because your MC is not a little ***** like the most MCs of other stores, plus he gets some 18+ action and you can never go wrong with that

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bossbovatannin

Please continue this, Cobalt is my preferred Pokè Story, the over one is not nearly half as interesting as this one is. Please man, Don't make me and everyone else beg

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asaade_ragnarokm

quite good though its quite hard to read at first because it was on 2nd person and I'm not used to it, but it was a good story so its all worth it and i have gotten used to it so its good, the only bad thing about here is the way how he get some of his pokemon, you think a trainer letting his pokemon go is quite rare apparently its not and he's able to get quite a few pokemon because some dumbdumb trainer let them go and give it to him

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wolfman_tyla

At first i wasn't sure about the 2nd POV, but its actually good. It feels like im the one on the adventure. I do like the Pokemon selection also. Keep up the good work and don't drop it please, i like it too much and it feels unique, to me at least. I do wonder though if its just kanto that you plan or if you would do the other regions also, if you've thought that far yet? Regardless its off to a good start so far. I suggest if you like pokemon go ahead and give it a try for at least a few chapters, im glad i did. Thank you author.

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AllSeeingBedroom

Its a different take on the story telling of pokemon and it takes time to accept that the MC is not a reincarnated person just a talented horny **** but over all a great pokemon fanfic

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PUERKO_Senpai

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Lord_Azathoth

Please don't drop this fic, Author Kun. This is a masterpiece in itself. I hope you can continue to upload some chapters, even though it has been over 2 years since you did one.🍻

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Harem_police

I read half of chapter one and I must say, *French kiss*, you sir or madame, have nailed the 2nd pov perfectly, because while 1st shows mc's thoughts only, and 3rd shows all thoughts, you've got it right with the mc's thoughts and actions from a secondary character/narrator, plus you type perfect English, so 5 stars

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Aung_Kaung_Myat_4789

Come back Author!! >_< I want to read the other chapters Pls:> I am really invested in the story. I'll juz sit here and wait for you if u don't come back:3

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ThatsClassified

From the first review, I think i love this fanfic man. 6 pokemon rule makes it so much easier on the author and some readers. Imagine having to write about 6 different creatures that you have to command them to do multiple moves and attacks. Some fics have too many pokemon and just end up dropping the stories

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Cereal_Or_TBCYMTLC

Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story. Just wish he could have more pokemon on hand i dont like how hes ok with sending them back to oak cos i would never fo that

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Acsmaster007

love it.....hope you could do a pokemon si in this style.....it would be so.....fun......living your fantasy....anyway hope you would update more....👍🤝[img=coins][img=update]

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charn

I like it and continue the novel it is very interesting waiting of more scenes between MC and delia.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Anos_1717

good good good good good good good good good

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Isaiah_1217

Definitely quite an interesting and intriguing pokemon book especially with how u had the MC act and be focused on his goals not to mention way trains his own pokemon I'm truly amazed by how interesting this book has been and how u been able to get the readers attention truly do look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

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_Cooldude_

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