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GOT KILLED BY MISTAKE AND GOD GAVE 5 WISH SO I ACCEPT IT
NOW LETS SEE WHAT CAN I DO MUAHAMUAHAHMUHAHA
MARVEL+XMEN AND THE TV SERIES ENJOY
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It’s simply unreadable. The grammar is complete garbage . I tried to read even when the grammar was trash but when he met the ancient one, he instantly told her that her world was a comic book and showed her the doctor strange trailer.... Trash
THIS IS UNBEARABLE TO READ, I DIDN'T EVEN GET HALF WAY THROUGH THE FIRST CHAPTER BEFORE DROPPING IT. HAVE YOU EVER THOUGHT OF NOT USING ALL CAPITAL LETTERS?
yo where is this author at!! like seriously stop dropping your stuff it's good but like you use caps too much if you don't update soon i will re-write it myself.
Personally I really like the even tho it all caps I don’t really care to me it’s still an awesome book maybe it’s just bc I really like op mc but who knows and to all you who dis the author in the reviews stop it some people actually like reading theses and you killing there confidence just makes them not want to write if you got bad **** to say just keep it to yourself self
Muito interessante essa historia epero o proximo capítulo parabéns 👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
This grammar will be the death of me, so will all those caps. Can you please use something to spell check your work please. Like, spend 5 minutes and chuck it in something trash like grammarly (it is trash, but will help you). Then upload it. Something trash like grammarly will help your writing a lot. But do it chapter by chapter. You only have 6 chapters so it will be fine if you spend an hour doing it.
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MC gets bull**** powers, ****ed up background, and I don't understand why he wants to line a normal life if he is going to interact with people like Ancient One and Nick Fury. Just plain bull**** that author was trying to make it a 'slice of life' novel
Despite the pour quality it's a decent story. Bit difficult getting through but it has potential. That may be me enjoying op MC in marvel but I believe it's an alright read at the very least gives me ideas for fan fic I am working on.
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls
Good story but use caps ............. ......................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,............................................................
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I only read the chapter where he meets ancient one, quality of writing is awful. Made me drop it, only read that due to someones review got my curiosity which in turn made me watch the trailer again 140 characters characters