Another Life as Older Brother

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amaturewriter

U retarded ****....ok ..3 stars..its interesting......the MC has a dope power and its an SI......... now why its retarded.......MC is too sane/ happy/ accepting ..........considering his past......that **** should've ****ed him up badly,,,,,,,basically what I am trying to say is his character is too messy....keep him cold/ apathetic [or atleast something appropriate for someone that went through what he went through]......dont make him too trusting........also considering the power he has [something that should atleast easily be tier 5 without training and tier 1/2 with training] dont neuter him.........give him a personality similar to gil..........add some romance and fluff....just dont make MC a retarded pervert....keep him smart.......build the romance...just no NTR........if harem keep it small..........keep him OP.......also would be better if he isnt in a familia [could pretend to be with bell..........] .............anyway GL,,,,,,,,,,would've been better if the first 2 chps weren't so rushed

LV 3

Hikik0m0ri

Another novel about a hero who received a bunch of cheats, but all the girls and adventures reach his younger brother (I hate Bell) **** this novel.

LV 4

LoweCypher

Pros: Has Nasuverse powers, specifically GoB Cons: MC is a what if, author cannot decide between edgelord and self-righteous hypocrite. Gives away all information about his abilities without care as if it wont bite him back in the future. (which is questionable considering author might just shrug it off with the excuse of plot armor) Extremely poor execution with conflicting backstories that doesnt relate or even make any sense.

LV 4

LazyMaker

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LV 12

Silent_Moon

I hope Ais and Riveria are harem memebers ... Bwfjegj3yj3fbsgk3yu jwfj wr gqd gq rgqry1ryqry 1r hq ry1 5y 2 ry q ryq ry qryqryqruqfuwtu2tuwf uqt y1ry1ryq ru1r14u1 4y 1r y1ry1ry

LV 3

HiroSanada

I'm just pissed off that you have to make mc have the best girl!! I mean mc have a prostitute in his harem and bell got a waitress that fucking better than a prostitute that **** a lot of guys and mc is too trusting. I mean he literally got betrayed by his own family and he proceeds to kill them and walla! Happy happy mc! Don't you know about being realistic! Mc can't just forget about the betray that he has and give information to others about his power and he thinks "there no way they betraying me like I'm going to tell them about my power and secret and there no way they betraying me right! Right..." I'm can literally read the better novel but I waste my time because in. Want you to write better And if this novel got better I will review it again peace..

LV 6

Shadewind

Don't like a babysitter mc..... and what's the point of doing a danmachi fan-fic if you are going to give all the best girls to bell it's not even funny. If you are doing that just make Bell the mc. Reading this just make me feel extremely bad that I can't explain. This author must have a huge crush on bell I Mean romantically if he somehow can go to danmachi he will make bl with bell lol. And if you guys don't like my review then Don't read it i didn't force you to read it. I have my freedom to what i write. I didn't like this story i am gonna say it if you have problem with it then you have some screw loose in your head i suggest you go take a iq test to see if you can understand what the answer of 1+1=? If you can't understand it then go to a mental hospital and live the rest of your life there as we don't have to bear a person like you. And that will also help your closer people to take a huge burden off.

LV 5

Kurigohan

I drop this mc is bell babysister fu*k dude bye .

LV 6

Clown_Of_God

basically He's catch all the girls literally of the novel and netorare Bell's girls too and one thing BELL IS HIS BROTHER...**** netorare novel

LV 3

EspersLv6

😻😻Ryu best waifu😻😻! Best cover evah! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love you Ryu!!!!!!!!!! I would say that the reason for the five stars has been understood.

LV 14

DabanCrow

How can I put this in simple terms? ... It’s good. Like, it’s strangely good. I like it a whole lot. Like... wow. Yeah, I could totally use some more chapters. But other than that it all good.

LV 5

mutekishifu

mc is the secondary character, if you like the bell so much, make a romance of the bell mc is the secondary character, if you like the bell so much, make a romance of the bell mc is the secondary character, if you like the bell so much, make a romance of the bell

LV 4

Ttsfih

Waste of time, looks like Bell **** is mc in this fanfic ....🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁

LV 3

Acnologiia

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LV 6

FAP_Master_

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LV 11

RexVector

This fanfic is great I mean it....the character development is great it just dont have*cough*lemon*cough*yet I thing or not...The bad thing is(not actually bad but I guess for me is bad)the chapter update is not constant it just 5 chapter a week(it because I love this fanfic)....overall this fanfic is great and keep up the goodwork Author.😁👍...this is my first time review so yeah.

LV 5

Dfransginola

Pretty decent fan-fic..........................................................

LV 6

LostThe50_50

.....to be honest.....this is a perfect example of....a harem gone bad.........when the girls were few....the plot was moving and there was still minimal relationship development.....it was minimal but there was development nonetheless.......now...........it's literally just focusing on how easy it is to bull**** the MC,.....to push him around...... My score for this before was.....3.6 which wasnt bad........but then......the events just started spiralling down....inconsistent mc, messy storyline.......not to mention the grammar got worse?(i dont know if anyones even noticed)........... Yeah...this is where i leave....was a good read while it lasted. Good luck with the novel, and hope you make it succeed.