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A Simple 'Cultural' Story. Not a complex plot, or filled with braindead people infact there isn't much shown other than MC and his daily life but i would count it as a pro. Most Importantly Good English although there are a few typos here and there they are rare and often corrected. It's a simple Smut story with MC and ladies and isn't like those braindead ones where you have a new girl every chapter. Each Important character is getting fleshed out it feels. As I can say after 28 chapters IT IS A HIDDEN GEM
how much money do you want to finish your work????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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............................................................. It was a good read that we enjoyed, it is a shame that this book is left unfinished, however it is understandable if you had your difficulties and all that remains is to say thank you for everything and may you do very well in life🫂..,...................................................................................................................
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the more I read, the worse it got, especially how the relationships were absolutely deplorable. I'm glad you dropped this story since you ruined it.
One of the best Degenerate Tales, Great world building and characterization, however what I like the most is the immersive feeling and the smooth of the story... Though it's on a hiatus for a long time now, but I still want it to be back and am eagerly waiting for it.... Biggest stain on the story is that Ari was not a Virgin... it would have been alright if it was someone else but her... it really leaves a sour taste... Please Author-san tweak it a little and modify the story... though it has a little bit of significance to the story as it sheds light on Ari's past but then too it won't change much, moreover it will add a hint of innocence to Ari's character and turn there romantic journey to much more juicy. You don't even have to change much except a few lines in 4 chapters... Please ignore my request if you have planned something according to it but if it's not important then I hope you'll accomodate this little wish of your big fan... Thank You! Keep up the good work!!!!
241 chapters in, Honest review. Out of about 20+ eroge harem novels i read, this one is in my top 3. There isn't much battle action for the first 200 chapts, its more of relationship development among the harem members. The characters are not one dimensional they have their development. The story is not cringe, no constant side characters jealous/envy and face slapping. However, there is indeed a background plot brewing behind the scenes and its gonna be big. Apparently MC is the child of destiny or something. Something i personally like is we now have the academy arc where '3summoned heroes' are attending (1 male,2 females). Its like the side character perspective in an anime with the dense harem protagonist. I swear the plot writing is giving the exact vibes. But MC is gonna win in the end. Maybe that hero dude would double cross and become a villain because the other summoned heroes(his classmate/childhood friend) got stolen. For the cons, i'd say the lack of action. Some may not like this style. For a good amount of chapters, the MC is a growing kid and is sheltered. Mostly spending his days learning magic with his adopted mother who's the strongest mage. Another thing you might not like is that the mother became intimate while MC was still a child (though that was what MC was trying to do)
This novel had little success in the DAO OF IMMORALITY. I'm sure you'll find a lot of material while reading and make great strides on the road to lighting. Instead of expensive scrolls sold from world-famous sites, this novel is a better technique. It's obviously not video-enabled, but remember that your imagination has no limits. Author, please keep vomiting your imagination on us.
A novel that lives up to its name. It has everything expected of fantasy novels. And plenty of sexual immorality. I definitely recommend it if you like this type of novel. I hope the author doesn't drop it. I would love to read more.Writer-san please don't leave.
I'm glad this novel continues. It is a novel that hooks me with its obscene aspect as well as its plot. That's why I want to go all the way. It's frustrating, though, when a novel you love to read falls through. One feels helpless. I hope the author continues to the end.
Absolutely disgusting. The main character is just a replacement for his mother. Her brother (Who she lost her virg!nity to) died, so she named the MC after him, and overall, he’s just a replacement. Also, what’s with this weird thing the author likes where every single harem member likes the MC’s mom more than him? Weird.
I really like your novel, good story and I hope the chapter release rate returns to normal author and I beg you not to drop this novel, because this novel is my favorite, I'm looking forward to the newest chapter, stay strong and take care of your health author!
It was good until it was revealed that his mom and her brother were in a romantic relationship until he died, and the fact that the MC is super creepy when he talks to the slave girl, and she clearly likes his mom more than him.
Dropped? is it? I really wan to know because it was a great novel but now it has been six months since I last read it. So I really want to know if it's Dropped.
please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
looking like he dropped. or died or something. no post on patre0n since February ended at 216😐.......... ............................... .
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I love the story and the development of the characters but the one thing I don't like is delays in chapter update. This totally ruin the story.
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I like this novel characters and story but I have only single complaint regarding the new chapter release frequency. Chapters are not updated regularly.
Buenas historias y desarrollo de personaje le falta más detalles de los reinos que hay en la historia y una breve introducción de los reinos por lo de más las historias y desarrollo personaje fue buena constantemente espresava el punto de vista de los personajes
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hey author have you dropped it , when I asked you last time you tell there i will not dropped now 1 month only 1 chapter has been released yet ..if you dropping out atleast mention it dropped out ....🙄🙄
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from a very good story to a disappointment... MC became submissive was a hug let down .. i droped there 168 ch was the last i ccant really would ii ave loved to read but haaah ... but guess not my cup of tea
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Nice R 18 story ,except for stability of updates , there are no problems ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Author are you dropping the novel or are you going to write it please tell me about it , i am seriously waiting for you to write the novel..
Simply a magnificent R-18 novel with a good real story and plot told with greater splendor and magnitudes than I have ever seen .... Read. read why it feels so good. Heeheee
A Simple 'Cultural' Story. Not a complex plot, or filled with braindead people infact there isn't much shown other than MC and his daily life but i would count it as a pro. Most Importantly Good English although there are a few typos here and there they are rare and often corrected. It's a simple Smut story with MC and ladies and isn't like those braindead ones where you have a new girl every chapter. Each Important character is getting fleshed out it feels. As I can say after 28 chapters IT IS A HIDDEN GEM
how much money do you want to finish your work????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Reveal Spoiler ............................................................. It was a good read that we enjoyed, it is a shame that this book is left unfinished, however it is understandable if you had your difficulties and all that remains is to say thank you for everything and may you do very well in life🫂..,...................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler the more I read, the worse it got, especially how the relationships were absolutely deplorable. I'm glad you dropped this story since you ruined it.
One of the best Degenerate Tales, Great world building and characterization, however what I like the most is the immersive feeling and the smooth of the story... Though it's on a hiatus for a long time now, but I still want it to be back and am eagerly waiting for it.... Biggest stain on the story is that Ari was not a Virgin... it would have been alright if it was someone else but her... it really leaves a sour taste... Please Author-san tweak it a little and modify the story... though it has a little bit of significance to the story as it sheds light on Ari's past but then too it won't change much, moreover it will add a hint of innocence to Ari's character and turn there romantic journey to much more juicy. You don't even have to change much except a few lines in 4 chapters... Please ignore my request if you have planned something according to it but if it's not important then I hope you'll accomodate this little wish of your big fan... Thank You! Keep up the good work!!!!
241 chapters in, Honest review. Out of about 20+ eroge harem novels i read, this one is in my top 3. There isn't much battle action for the first 200 chapts, its more of relationship development among the harem members. The characters are not one dimensional they have their development. The story is not cringe, no constant side characters jealous/envy and face slapping. However, there is indeed a background plot brewing behind the scenes and its gonna be big. Apparently MC is the child of destiny or something. Something i personally like is we now have the academy arc where '3summoned heroes' are attending (1 male,2 females). Its like the side character perspective in an anime with the dense harem protagonist. I swear the plot writing is giving the exact vibes. But MC is gonna win in the end. Maybe that hero dude would double cross and become a villain because the other summoned heroes(his classmate/childhood friend) got stolen. For the cons, i'd say the lack of action. Some may not like this style. For a good amount of chapters, the MC is a growing kid and is sheltered. Mostly spending his days learning magic with his adopted mother who's the strongest mage. Another thing you might not like is that the mother became intimate while MC was still a child (though that was what MC was trying to do)
This novel had little success in the DAO OF IMMORALITY. I'm sure you'll find a lot of material while reading and make great strides on the road to lighting. Instead of expensive scrolls sold from world-famous sites, this novel is a better technique. It's obviously not video-enabled, but remember that your imagination has no limits. Author, please keep vomiting your imagination on us.
A novel that lives up to its name. It has everything expected of fantasy novels. And plenty of sexual immorality. I definitely recommend it if you like this type of novel. I hope the author doesn't drop it. I would love to read more.Writer-san please don't leave.
I'm glad this novel continues. It is a novel that hooks me with its obscene aspect as well as its plot. That's why I want to go all the way. It's frustrating, though, when a novel you love to read falls through. One feels helpless. I hope the author continues to the end.
Absolutely disgusting. The main character is just a replacement for his mother. Her brother (Who she lost her virg!nity to) died, so she named the MC after him, and overall, he’s just a replacement. Also, what’s with this weird thing the author likes where every single harem member likes the MC’s mom more than him? Weird.
I really like your novel, good story and I hope the chapter release rate returns to normal author and I beg you not to drop this novel, because this novel is my favorite, I'm looking forward to the newest chapter, stay strong and take care of your health author!
It was good until it was revealed that his mom and her brother were in a romantic relationship until he died, and the fact that the MC is super creepy when he talks to the slave girl, and she clearly likes his mom more than him.
Dropped? is it? I really wan to know because it was a great novel but now it has been six months since I last read it. So I really want to know if it's Dropped.
please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
looking like he dropped. or died or something. no post on patre0n since February ended at 216😐.......... ............................... .
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I love the story and the development of the characters but the one thing I don't like is delays in chapter update. This totally ruin the story.
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I like this novel characters and story but I have only single complaint regarding the new chapter release frequency. Chapters are not updated regularly.
Buenas historias y desarrollo de personaje le falta más detalles de los reinos que hay en la historia y una breve introducción de los reinos por lo de más las historias y desarrollo personaje fue buena constantemente espresava el punto de vista de los personajes
Reveal Spoiler hey author have you dropped it , when I asked you last time you tell there i will not dropped now 1 month only 1 chapter has been released yet ..if you dropping out atleast mention it dropped out ....🙄🙄
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from a very good story to a disappointment... MC became submissive was a hug let down .. i droped there 168 ch was the last i ccant really would ii ave loved to read but haaah ... but guess not my cup of tea
More hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Nice R 18 story ,except for stability of updates , there are no problems ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Author are you dropping the novel or are you going to write it please tell me about it , i am seriously waiting for you to write the novel..
Simply a magnificent R-18 novel with a good real story and plot told with greater splendor and magnitudes than I have ever seen .... Read. read why it feels so good. Heeheee