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I´ve seen some things and this like the least of my worries reading this I am not impressed in most things there are certain things that need improving. This is not masturbation material. :(
MY BOI WAS YEETING ALL UP ON THOSE SHINY DEMONIC CHEEKS!!!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is super hot fire!!! Everybody needs to read this instantly. READ! READ! READ! READ! READ! READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now!
So I do love the story, But I wish the first chapter's grammar was edited. Other than that, amazing story keep writing more chapters/stories.
Reveal Spoiler I´ve seen some things and this like the least of my worries reading this I am not impressed in most things there are certain things that need improving. This is not masturbation material. :(
MY BOI WAS YEETING ALL UP ON THOSE SHINY DEMONIC CHEEKS!!!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is super hot fire!!! Everybody needs to read this instantly. READ! READ! READ! READ! READ! READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now!
So I do love the story, But I wish the first chapter's grammar was edited. Other than that, amazing story keep writing more chapters/stories.
Reveal Spoiler