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Write a reviewLove it, the English is good, and that is super super SUPER WEIRD in this website like I've seen some **** my English teacher would kill for here, anyways I love it.
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Good english some typos here and there but nothing that makes you say GOD DAMN IT, I love it so far and is a great change of pace, keep it up buddy #good.
This is amazing, the quality is good and the author is doing something not many do, he is creating his own timeline, LOVE IT, keep it up, you get mah voteeeeeeee
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Reveal SpoilerExtremely good story and an excellent main character with some opness but not a lot and this story is one of the best I have seen in some time hope you keep up with it and keep a timely release
BRO..TRUCK-KUN INDUSTRIES?..MR. FORD?...MRS.HONDA?...its funny..nice.... its cool...OP MC...One man army style...AU or something unique..no BS romance but try to build it and make it realistic..no sad **** damn it...if harem keep it small. Just suggestions.... **: For MC's main power something like Hashiramas wood style [mixed with sharingan if you want or some BS new eye power] would be cool..I mean its has the second most powerful defense [after the gudodama-i mean it could deflect beast bombs] and its has a fucking mecha and exploding dragons..stupid powerful regeneration and the ability to adsorb nature energy easily and also the ability to control life force [to some extent] ...plus Hashiramas attacks are pretty cool....
It’s good and the only mistakes are ones you usually see at the start of most original books not made by someone who has experience with making and writing books
So I see I got a lot of reviews, thanks for liking it so far, I have a lot of stuff planned for this and I hope you guys go with me during this trip
Love it, the English is good, and that is super super SUPER WEIRD in this website like I've seen some **** my English teacher would kill for here, anyways I love it.
I love it and I want more, so give me more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
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Good english some typos here and there but nothing that makes you say GOD DAMN IT, I love it so far and is a great change of pace, keep it up buddy #good.
This is amazing, the quality is good and the author is doing something not many do, he is creating his own timeline, LOVE IT, keep it up, you get mah voteeeeeeee
Nicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenice
Reveal SpoilerExtremely good story and an excellent main character with some opness but not a lot and this story is one of the best I have seen in some time hope you keep up with it and keep a timely release
BRO..TRUCK-KUN INDUSTRIES?..MR. FORD?...MRS.HONDA?...its funny..nice.... its cool...OP MC...One man army style...AU or something unique..no BS romance but try to build it and make it realistic..no sad **** damn it...if harem keep it small. Just suggestions.... **: For MC's main power something like Hashiramas wood style [mixed with sharingan if you want or some BS new eye power] would be cool..I mean its has the second most powerful defense [after the gudodama-i mean it could deflect beast bombs] and its has a fucking mecha and exploding dragons..stupid powerful regeneration and the ability to adsorb nature energy easily and also the ability to control life force [to some extent] ...plus Hashiramas attacks are pretty cool....
It’s good and the only mistakes are ones you usually see at the start of most original books not made by someone who has experience with making and writing books
So I see I got a lot of reviews, thanks for liking it so far, I have a lot of stuff planned for this and I hope you guys go with me during this trip