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the fanfic is ok but power levels are messed up at some point it like a character is op next moment some shit happens and character start to loose like when mc went to war with WB he said WB is stronger the .he is but the at last scene where the main enemy came mc literally became strong as WB or even greater so the power system is little messed up but all over its ok i read until 150
This story is awesome from pacing to character development it is a great read.
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well, it's an ok read. (because it was finished) he skipped a lot of islands, just 2 girls: one oc and Robin, where there isn't romance. he just added, and I quote: "they had a steaming night", and after a few dozens of chapters where he said in a random chapter that he got them to a date for a few days and that's it. so no, there is no 18 and just boring training with fighting big names, and after that, the big boss who want to devour the world. it's actually boring ngl, and old, so it's up to you if you want to read it.
Above average and entertaining, but not what you may expect and not for me. I have tried picking up this novel twice and have become disinterested twice (read until zou). It is well written for a fanfic without glaring grammer issues and the story takes a unique spin on the one peice world which is not easy given how many fanfics there are for it. However the author chose to wuxia the one peice world which always felt out of place to me. i.e. new power levels like emporer realm and saint realm are totally unnecessary in a world that has a very clearly defined power structure(especially when the author chooses to use both power structures to explain eachother when one is already enough). The other reason i became disinterested is the inconsistency of the mcβs power levels and the mcβs deus ex machina abilities. One chapter he is stronger than vice admirals but weaker than admirals and can barely hold his own. Then a few chapters later he is able to hold back 3 admirals, sengoku, and Garp without and power increase? The same with his abilities, which are just introduced when the author needs them, like healing, mind manipulation, increased gravity, etc, followed by a sentence how he learned that ability long ago but didnt use it because he didnt want to or was unable to yet. He recently told his crew about increasing his abilities through exotic DNA which they should not understand at all. DNA is known as the lineage factor in one peice and is something both new and not known to common people. It is the whole premise for the vinsmoke family arc, but his crew just casually understand this because they need to for the story. Overall, i enjoyed much of this story and many will not be bothered by what i mentioned. But for me the repetative deus ex machina moments for the mc have dulled any tension or interest i had.
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To quickly sum up this fanfic; grammar is decent and writing quality is above average, power levels in the fic are all over the place with authors new system for them, OP Mc who could yeet most enemies within first 30 chapters of the novel (slight exaggeration), story just feels abit monotone and doesnβt really whisk you away.
Well done I enjoyed reading this it has plenty of chapters to binge and it wasnβt very hard to understand what was written I believe the ending might have been a little rushed but I still enjoyed it nonetheless
I know it's a fanfiction but Roger had an eternal pose for laughtale which luffy destroyed in the movie. Akinu was missing in the last war. Elean has already eaten Blackbeard's dark dark fruit
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3 chapters in and we got an MC with mastery of Rokushiki, could use all 3 Haki and have Telekenisis and Regeneration base powers. Might as well make Imu as the MC at this point. A fic with zero challenge is pretty boring.
It was a nice twist to the storyline that kept me reading to the end. It's definitely a good pick to read
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I really loved the spin on the one piece story. but the ending was like it was setting up for a continuation or a spin off. you know like what worlds they go to next and the like.
Slightly above the average fanfic with grammar mistakes here and there. The "original" (author-created) characters are boring. There's no real development or meaning for them. I feel as if I could cut any one of them out and it would be the same story. Speaking of which, the story is very standard "Strong enemy requires the hero to gather allies to fight them." Dropped at Ch 198 Final comment: Doesn't evoke enough interest/feelings to make me continue reading
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Just finished and I gotta say This book was truly a great read. Adapted One Piece as good as anyone has and truly enjoyed the lore you created.
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Great fan fic, really well written. Good story progression. The beginning was a bit slow, but it got really great to read very fast. Would definitely recommend for anyone looking for a good fan fic
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Reveal Spoiler I just started the story and author already made sure that MC will never get stranded on any island. 1. Storage ring: It could fit a battleship inside. 2. The Force: Well it's telekenesis, so he won't get trapped in Calm belt. I'm still at chapter 3, and any sense of threat towards MC when it comes to sailing was removed already, and it just leaves a bitter taste.
the fanfic is ok but power levels are messed up at some point it like a character is op next moment some shit happens and character start to loose like when mc went to war with WB he said WB is stronger the .he is but the at last scene where the main enemy came mc literally became strong as WB or even greater so the power system is little messed up but all over its ok i read until 150
This story is awesome from pacing to character development it is a great read.
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well, it's an ok read. (because it was finished) he skipped a lot of islands, just 2 girls: one oc and Robin, where there isn't romance. he just added, and I quote: "they had a steaming night", and after a few dozens of chapters where he said in a random chapter that he got them to a date for a few days and that's it. so no, there is no 18 and just boring training with fighting big names, and after that, the big boss who want to devour the world. it's actually boring ngl, and old, so it's up to you if you want to read it.
Above average and entertaining, but not what you may expect and not for me. I have tried picking up this novel twice and have become disinterested twice (read until zou). It is well written for a fanfic without glaring grammer issues and the story takes a unique spin on the one peice world which is not easy given how many fanfics there are for it. However the author chose to wuxia the one peice world which always felt out of place to me. i.e. new power levels like emporer realm and saint realm are totally unnecessary in a world that has a very clearly defined power structure(especially when the author chooses to use both power structures to explain eachother when one is already enough). The other reason i became disinterested is the inconsistency of the mcβs power levels and the mcβs deus ex machina abilities. One chapter he is stronger than vice admirals but weaker than admirals and can barely hold his own. Then a few chapters later he is able to hold back 3 admirals, sengoku, and Garp without and power increase? The same with his abilities, which are just introduced when the author needs them, like healing, mind manipulation, increased gravity, etc, followed by a sentence how he learned that ability long ago but didnt use it because he didnt want to or was unable to yet. He recently told his crew about increasing his abilities through exotic DNA which they should not understand at all. DNA is known as the lineage factor in one peice and is something both new and not known to common people. It is the whole premise for the vinsmoke family arc, but his crew just casually understand this because they need to for the story. Overall, i enjoyed much of this story and many will not be bothered by what i mentioned. But for me the repetative deus ex machina moments for the mc have dulled any tension or interest i had.
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To quickly sum up this fanfic; grammar is decent and writing quality is above average, power levels in the fic are all over the place with authors new system for them, OP Mc who could yeet most enemies within first 30 chapters of the novel (slight exaggeration), story just feels abit monotone and doesnβt really whisk you away.
Well done I enjoyed reading this it has plenty of chapters to binge and it wasnβt very hard to understand what was written I believe the ending might have been a little rushed but I still enjoyed it nonetheless
I know it's a fanfiction but Roger had an eternal pose for laughtale which luffy destroyed in the movie. Akinu was missing in the last war. Elean has already eaten Blackbeard's dark dark fruit
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It was a nice twist to the storyline that kept me reading to the end. It's definitely a good pick to read
Salah satu fanfic one piece paling luar biasa yang pernah aku baca. Walaupun singkat tapi tidak begitu terburu-buru, kekuatan karakter utama juga tidak terlalu OP jadi masih bisa diterima. Ini hanya pendapat ku dan jika salah mohon maaf. One of the most incredible one-piece fanfic I've ever read. Even though it's short, it's not too rushed, and the strength of the main character isn't too OP, so it's still acceptable. It's just p.s
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I really loved the spin on the one piece story. but the ending was like it was setting up for a continuation or a spin off. you know like what worlds they go to next and the like.
Slightly above the average fanfic with grammar mistakes here and there. The "original" (author-created) characters are boring. There's no real development or meaning for them. I feel as if I could cut any one of them out and it would be the same story. Speaking of which, the story is very standard "Strong enemy requires the hero to gather allies to fight them." Dropped at Ch 198 Final comment: Doesn't evoke enough interest/feelings to make me continue reading
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Just finished and I gotta say This book was truly a great read. Adapted One Piece as good as anyone has and truly enjoyed the lore you created.
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Great fan fic, really well written. Good story progression. The beginning was a bit slow, but it got really great to read very fast. Would definitely recommend for anyone looking for a good fan fic
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I just started the story and author already made sure that MC will never get stranded on any island. 1. Storage ring: It could fit a battleship inside. 2. The Force: Well it's telekenesis, so he won't get trapped in Calm belt. I'm still at chapter 3, and any sense of threat towards MC when it comes to sailing was removed already, and it just leaves a bitter taste.