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Listening to the professor teaching, welp that's boring stuff. I wish the class would be done now. Looking at the clock one minute and thirty seconds left. And that's class dismissed. Alright time to head ho-
Suddenly a ball coming from outside the window hit his head.
'Getting hit by a baseball ball really hurt a lot. Looks like I'm in the clinic. After organizing my memories it appears that I remembered my past memories or what do you call it future memory. It seems like something dangerous was bound to happen in the near future.
uploading chapter one per month or more?
Author:nogaRXD414
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I am giving this review to help you out. The first thing you need to improve is the synopsis and prologue because you make things happen too fast and a chapter should be pretty long as they should be at least above 1000 or 1500 words and you have that length so you can be more flexible about how you want the events to go so I recommend changing the way you start the novel off as that is the most important when it comes to getting readers as that is the part they read first. Readers don't read the rest of the book if it does not have a good intro also how the #$%! do you already have so many views
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Meh, that should be the right review for me. (Cause I suck) I'll probably get better in the future... .... Or maybe not. Anyway, writing quality I guess should be three 🤔 out of 5. Because first of all, I think it's bad (for me I guess or maybe for the others too.) And the word chapters are really short like they're around 750 to 1050 words. Maybe I can make it longer, I hope so. Up to the next topic, Stability of Updating, I only gave it one star (maybe I should give it 0..... Wait is that even possible) because sometimes I don't upload one chapter a week. Also, it's very short. Onto the next topic🙃, story development maybe I shouldn't review this first. Welp I'm going to get back to this topic in the future. Now character design, well I'm just starting to introduce more characters I guess so that's for the future review. The Last one, world background I guess this is for the future review because I'm just starting to introduce the world background. The cons: 1. Slow chapter updates. 2. 750 to 1050 word chaps. (Maybe it'll get more chapter words in the future.) 3. Noob author. (Just criticize me, I can understand it. Maybe I'll get better with it) That's all the cons I can think of for now. So yeah that it. Pros: 1. Reincarnation, Fusion of world, Gods, zombies, system and etc. These ideas have been mixed up in my brain to make a story. (Maybe I spoiled you a little bit about what might happen in the future.)
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