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An interesting concept! I just briefly skimmed through it, since I'm busy writing my own novel, but this novel has all the potential to be a great fanfic. The dungeon thing was really a surprise for me! I'd suggest that you read the novel, 'Lazy Dungeon Master' and, I forgot what the title was, but it was also a Japanese novel. (I'll update you when I recall what it was). It will be a great reference for this novel.
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great story concept adding the whole dungeon thing was a way to add a certain spice to the mix plus the fact that u can only have six max Pokemon weather alive or dead it make everything more interesting but can u plz upload some chapters
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An interesting concept! I just briefly skimmed through it, since I'm busy writing my own novel, but this novel has all the potential to be a great fanfic. The dungeon thing was really a surprise for me! I'd suggest that you read the novel, 'Lazy Dungeon Master' and, I forgot what the title was, but it was also a Japanese novel. (I'll update you when I recall what it was). It will be a great reference for this novel.
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great story concept adding the whole dungeon thing was a way to add a certain spice to the mix plus the fact that u can only have six max Pokemon weather alive or dead it make everything more interesting but can u plz upload some chapters