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Amazing! Simply brilliant. Great idea, a very nice execution. Not much to say. This is one of the best fanfic on this website. Unfortunately its dropped...
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Really good story, I already love it. You explained everything, described everything and even wrote some sort of a beginning of a romance. Love it pls make more and good Job
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I have been waiting for more chapters but it's looking like that not going to happen anytime soon but I'm going to wait some more why because I really like the book so far
Please continue to write and don't drop this, it's a masterpiece so far! I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words. I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words. I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words. I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words.
When is the next chapter release it's been a month now...?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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A very fun premise for a story and executed rather well, the main character is enjoyable, and I feel like the world is becoming more well-rounded. Looking forward to what comes nextοΏΌ
I'm loving how the story is going and the idea of it. Maybe have him meet more outcast type characters similar to his and his mothers situation as well like a yautja and some kind of serpent crossbreed that is a rival of his mother or such.
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Nice writing, I enjoy the story so far. Doesnβt feel rush. Great character. I hope youβll enjoy it. And, donβt forget to support the author
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More!!! I have been searching for a alien fanfic and this is really great (Just some letters to fill the space)hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Love this fan fic hope we get more updates and thanks for writing it I haven't seen a fan fix about the predator till yours so I hope you don't drop it it has a good storyline so far to
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Really good novel, havenβt seen a predator one before, so many cool possibilities!!! Hope you continue updating!!! πππππππππππππ
Great story so far hope you keep it up and it doesn't get abandoned like so many fan fictions these days. keep up the good work and please update soon :)
I've always wanted to do a Predator novel and so I started writing it when I saw the competition for non-human MC, which is my favourite genre by the way, the chapters will be a lot shorter then my other novels, just going over 1000 words.
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Amazing! Simply brilliant. Great idea, a very nice execution. Not much to say. This is one of the best fanfic on this website. Unfortunately its dropped...
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Really good story, I already love it. You explained everything, described everything and even wrote some sort of a beginning of a romance. Love it pls make more and good Job
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I have been waiting for more chapters but it's looking like that not going to happen anytime soon but I'm going to wait some more why because I really like the book so far
Please continue to write and don't drop this, it's a masterpiece so far! I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words. I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words. I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words. I had to fill in the rest of this review with meaningless words.
When is the next chapter release it's been a month now...?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
A very fun premise for a story and executed rather well, the main character is enjoyable, and I feel like the world is becoming more well-rounded. Looking forward to what comes nextοΏΌ
I'm loving how the story is going and the idea of it. Maybe have him meet more outcast type characters similar to his and his mothers situation as well like a yautja and some kind of serpent crossbreed that is a rival of his mother or such.
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Nice writing, I enjoy the story so far. Doesnβt feel rush. Great character. I hope youβll enjoy it. And, donβt forget to support the author
Please continue ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
itβs just perfect, I need moooooooooooorrrrrrreeeeeee!!!! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
More!!! I have been searching for a alien fanfic and this is really great (Just some letters to fill the space)hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Love this fan fic hope we get more updates and thanks for writing it I haven't seen a fan fix about the predator till yours so I hope you don't drop it it has a good storyline so far to
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Really good novel, havenβt seen a predator one before, so many cool possibilities!!! Hope you continue updating!!! πππππππππππππ
Great story so far hope you keep it up and it doesn't get abandoned like so many fan fictions these days. keep up the good work and please update soon :)
I've always wanted to do a Predator novel and so I started writing it when I saw the competition for non-human MC, which is my favourite genre by the way, the chapters will be a lot shorter then my other novels, just going over 1000 words.
well the story is great and was stuck waiting for more but sadly nomore chapters π π π πͺ π’ π« π π π πͺ π’ π« π π π πͺ π’ π« π π π πͺ π’