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Comedy is subjective. I personally didn't find it to be hilarious but I did have a few chuckles. Someone else may end up laughing their ass off while reading it. And so I would say this is a great start for a book that is supposedly trying to satire. The only thing I felt a bit off was the change of perspectives at times. In one para, the MC is being referred to as 'I' and then the next starts referring to her as 'she'. This kinda detracts from the reading. I'd suggest using some kind of scene break before it. Regardless, it's not too big of a problem and I think your book shows some promise. Keep writing!
Have to agree with the above review. The fish incident was pretty funny and though the plot and settings feel somewhat impossible, there is purpose behind the storytelling which makes it worthwhile. Ganbare!
Okay, this is hilarious! I find it a bit childish but it is worth continuing. First of all, I haven't read any reincarnation stories where a girl becomes a bizarre creature, so kudos to you for that. Then, every chapter has at least one comedy point which makes it really going. I hope you update it soon, I am definitely going to continue it. Now, it would have been great if you had detailed the FL's death a bit more, I don't know if you are planning to, later in the novel. And I think first person perspective suits this novel, so please don't change that. Rest is great, keep it up!
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Comedy is subjective. I personally didn't find it to be hilarious but I did have a few chuckles. Someone else may end up laughing their ass off while reading it. And so I would say this is a great start for a book that is supposedly trying to satire. The only thing I felt a bit off was the change of perspectives at times. In one para, the MC is being referred to as 'I' and then the next starts referring to her as 'she'. This kinda detracts from the reading. I'd suggest using some kind of scene break before it. Regardless, it's not too big of a problem and I think your book shows some promise. Keep writing!
Have to agree with the above review. The fish incident was pretty funny and though the plot and settings feel somewhat impossible, there is purpose behind the storytelling which makes it worthwhile. Ganbare!
Okay, this is hilarious! I find it a bit childish but it is worth continuing. First of all, I haven't read any reincarnation stories where a girl becomes a bizarre creature, so kudos to you for that. Then, every chapter has at least one comedy point which makes it really going. I hope you update it soon, I am definitely going to continue it. Now, it would have been great if you had detailed the FL's death a bit more, I don't know if you are planning to, later in the novel. And I think first person perspective suits this novel, so please don't change that. Rest is great, keep it up!
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