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chapter four

Raven had recieved a letter from some one she thought she would never half to hear from again the lords of eliments. "You thought you could excape us didnt you but but we are every where and we followed you we resign in the south of akusa with king hiroki we only after this world and now your kids will die right along with you" signed the lords of eliment. This letter was recieved moments after kinako left with akahido. Raven didnt no what to do so she took the letter too hatake. "Lock up the castle" hatake said too the gaurds. "No not yet" raven insisted. "Why not yet"? Hatake asked. "Our daughter is on a date and should be returning any moment" raven replied. "Oh with who"? Hatake asked. Raven didnt reply so hatake asked more firmly "with who"? "Akahido hiromi" raven replied. "What you let our daughter leave with that boy, hes our enemy how could you"? Hatake asked. Ravens anger boiled over and she shouted "hes only a child i will not stand by and let you drag a child into your fued". "You read the letter" hatake said too raven. "Exept your forgeting the lords eliment tricked king hiroki to get what they wanted" raven said too hatake. "How do you no this"? Hatake asked. "Ive been at war with them my whole life hatake i know every thing about the worthless creatures that call them selfs the lords of eliment, dont underestimate my judgement i only want whats best for all of us" raven said as shouting was heard and kinako and akahido came runing in. "Close the gates" kinako shouted as the castles gates were closed. Kinako and akahido were covered in blood. Akahido sat down and begun too cry as his poor old father and mother were murdered along with all his siblings exept his brother namuchi and sister kiyoka but both were missing. All of a sudden a knocking was sounded at the castles gates. And when it was openedin ran namauchi and kiyoka. The gates were opened only long enough too let in the siblings and closed again. Namauchi and kiyoka ran up too akahido. "What hapened kiyoka cried. "Those creatures were merciless there killed otoosan and okaasan" akahido cried in agony. The three huddled in a corner and cried together. Months latter…

Akahido, namauchi, and kiyoka now lived with raven and hatake while the lords of eliment lived in the souths castle plotting the deathcof every one in the east. But raven didnt no instead of samuel pretending too be oden, the real oden was resurected back into the land of the liveing. And samurl was murdered. Akahido snuck away back to kinako's room. The two sat on the couch together. Akahido leaned in and kissed kinako on the lips. I no we havnt known each other long but when this war is over will you marry me"? akahido asked. "Of course i will marry you" kinako said too akahido. Akahido and kinako fell asleep in each others arms. Raven walked into kinako's room right after hatake and they noticed the engagment ring on her finger. "What you want too marry him" hatake shouted wakeing both kinako and akahido from there sleep. "What"? Kinako asked sleepily. "You want too marry the enemy" hatake shouted. "Hes not the enemy otoosan hes the man i love please just give me your blessing so we can marry when this is over" kinako pleaded. "But that could take another three years are you willing too stick too it"? Hatake asked as he thought maybe in time she would find some one better. "Yes i love this man" kinako said with a smile warmer than the morning sun. "Ok then you have my blessing" hatake said too kinako. "Oh! Arigato otoosan" kinako said too hatake. "Doitashimashite" hatake said to kinako as he left the room. "I love you" akahido said too kinako. "I love you to akahido" kinako said too akahido in rey. Raven wished she never had too deal with the lords of eliment again but here she was being thrown back into the fight again as if she had never left it in the first place. Raven hated too fight she wanted too live a peaceful and quiet life but she knew it was impossible, thankfully spunvali gave raven half of his powers. Come too think of it raven was begining to relise ceresha was glowing this only happens when her kind are pregnant exept since they live for five hundred thousand years there kind have not babys but sixteen year olds. Raven was broken from her trance by an unfamiliar voice. Raven turned her head too the right there standing by hers and hatakes bed was a man who looked identical too hatake. But this mans eyes were red rather than honey brown. This mans hair was also black but medium length. "Hello sister" the man said too raven. "I dont believe i no you" raven said witch stung hatanake in his heart. "Allow me to introduce my self im hatanake sinabe i was ban ya know now im back for vengence i think ill take you with me" hatanake said too raven as he begun too step closer and closer too her. Raven backed up till she was against the wall with hatanake so close she could feel his breath on her skin. "Dont be afraid you are just what i nedd in my life" hatanake said as bit raven and sucked on her blood. Raven passed out from loss of blood. When raven awoke shecwas in an unfamiliar room laying in an unfamiliar bed. "Where am i" raven shouted. "My castle and i shall warn you when you are in vampire form your hair will be silver and your eyes the only time thell be normal is during the day when your in humen form oh and now that were married your marriage too hatake is terminated" hatanake said too raven. "You cant do this i love hatake youll never get away with this" raven cried. "No? I already have and when hatake comes ill murder him like i did all the civilians" hatanake lied as he tried too hide his anger towards raven. "Your a monster" raven cried. "Well love thats no way too talk too your husband is it" hatake spat with vinum. "Your not my husband and ill excape youll see" raven said to hatanake. "Witch is why ive put you in the highest room in the castle and made the room magic proof, so dont do any thing stupid as crocodiles await any ones arival shall they jump from the window" hatanake said too raven. "Size hatake deserves it after what he did to the women i loved" hatanake added leaveing out that he was talking about raven. "What did he do"? raven asked willing to give hatanake a chance too explain himself. Hatanake sat down next too raven. "I had met a beautiful girl who looked just like you she didnt talk much i had just bought a ring for her because i wanted too marry her i asked her too marry me she said yes but soon blood began too poor from her and my brother held the knife that almost killed her she lost all memory and now shell never be able to regain it its been years now" hatanake said too raven. Raven felt betrayed the man she thought she loved hadnt told her about how he had hurt his brothers fiancee. Even if it was an accident he should of told her. Hatake promised raven when they got married no secrets. But he held this horrible secret from her so raven made a decission and maybe she could learn too love hatanake as well. Shed stay with hatanake. "Ill stay with you willingly your brother evidently doesnt care or he wouldnt of kept this enormous secret hidden" raven said as she moved in and kissed hatanake and he kissed back. Raven felt some thing she never felt not even with hatake. One thing lead too another and raven ended up pined too the bed while hatanake sucked more of her blood. "You no you will need too eat blood too survive right" hatanake said in matter of factly kinda tone. "No way" raven rejected. " come on you can eat animal blood" hatanake said too raven. "Fine but not cute animals blood" raven replied. One month latter raven found she was pregnant again. Raven and hatanake stood in the middle of the courtyard in the eastern castle. Hatake came running out. "Raven my love…" hatake began too say but raven cut him off. "Save it i didnt come here too come back too you i came too give my children a choice of who they want too live with there grandparents or me" raven spat with vinum at hatake. "What about me"? Hatake asked. "You can die along with the lords of eliment you lier" raven spat at hatake. "I didnt lie" hatake said too raven. "No? I remember you said no secrets hatake what eles have you lied about"? Raven asked. "He didnt marry you out of love your rich and beautiful so you would give his kingdom a good name" hatanake said too raven. Yasuo decided too go with his mom while kinako decided to stay with her dad and her fiancee. "So yasuo what made you decide too come along"? raven asked. "Well you are my mom and i miss you so much" yasuo said too raven in reply. "Plus dad lied too you and hurt you and its wrong" yasuo added. "You will have a brother or sister soon dont no witch yet" raven said too yasuo. "Great, but mom how come you slept with dad and now his brother too"? Yasuo asked. "Because shes a whore" a voice said from behind them and raven knew it was hatake. "Quit this foolish behavior and come home i wont be angry" hatake said too raven. "Hatake im not comeing back deal with it" raven said as she started to walk away but hatake grabed her arm spun her around and started slapping her so raven stabbed him in the belly and watched as he fell down. "I told you ill never return too your land of lies again, goodbye hatake" raven said as she her husband and son disapeared. Marry healed hatake and told him every thing that happened because he couldnt remember. "Raven doesnt no but she has a twin sister her twin has the same metalic blue hair color but her eyes are violet i will send her a letter and you can marry her shes even richer than raven her name is willow vernon, would you like that"? Marry asked. "Yes please" hatake said in replied. "Warning though she has a teenage son named seiji nabuto" marry said too hatake. "Thats fine" hatake said with a smile. Marry sent a letter too her daughter on dexteria. A few days latter willow opened the letter adressed too her and it said "dear willow, this is your mom i promised too find you a man too marry well darling ive done exactly that the cordinates too akusa are below please do come and bring my grandson as well" signed marry. "Ready the dark abyse were going too akusa again i am too be married" willow said with a huge smile. A few days latter the dark abyse landed on eastern side of akusa. Standing there waiting was marry fenix and a man willow thought she would never see again hatake who was seji's father. He loved her but she ran away. The only reason hatake even got with raven is she reminded him of his love willow. Now willow was returning too him his willow who had his son. "Willow"? Hatake asked. "Hatake yes its me willow" willow replied. "I never thought the willow marry was refering to could be the women im in love with" hatake said too willow. "I heard about yours and my twins relationship also, i no you have children together who are practically grown up" willow said too hatake. "Yes im sorry love" hatake said on the verge of crying his eyes out over the women he loved. "Dont worry about it i know she turned too the dark side and shacked up with hatanake, so please dont worry about it" willow said too hatake. "So why did you go with raven any ways"? Willow added in question. "I no im gonna sound like a jerk but the first time i saw raven all i could see was you willow" hatake said too willow. "When do we get married you know i hate large ceromonys with huge crowds of people" willow said too hatake. "Next week too be honest so much has happened so fast but this is something ive wanted my whole life willow" hatake said too willow. The lords of eliment had givein up on finding the necklace of cortes it was the only way they could open the gate too the underworld. Raven was the only one who knew where the necklace of cortes was yet even no she turned too the dark side she would still rather not tell the lords of eliment where the necklase of cortes was hidden. Raven still had that decency. Ravens heart had been broken it was the biggest reason for her turning bad. Raven was now part vampire and a dark magi where spunvali gave her some of his powers some of his dark powers. Spunvali and ceresha moved in with raven who was once again a pirate, a merciless one who would murder any one who look at her the wrong way. All of a sudden raven burst through the doors of the caverness a tavern near the castle. The bar keep bowed and asked "m'queen what shall i serve you"? "Ill take a glass of rum thank you" raven said too the bar keep. "Pardon me m'queen but isnt rum a little too strong for a women"? The bar keep asked. Raven unsheathed her pistol and shot the bar keep in the head then grabed the bottle of rum. "Damned men always think they know best" raven said as she resheathed her pistol in its holster and took a swig of rum. "Perfect" raven said too herself. Mean while oden who had been resurected was makeing orders. "You find where raven hid that necklase or ill have you all for lunch dont forget im a lycan" oden snarled in a chilling voice that made a chill run up even the mice in the wall backs. Oden steped into the thrown room where he found hatanake. "I know you like playing house but you wont be left alone untill i know the where abouts of the necklase of cortes williams got it" oden said too hatanake. "Loud and clear" hatanake said in an annoyed tone as he left and went back too the room he and raven shared together. Raven was asleep so hatake wacthed as her chest rose and fell she looked so peaceful. "So raven" hatanake said too raven the next day. "What is it"? Raven asked. "Where is the necklase of cortes they want too kill us if we dont give it uphatanake said too raven. "Im not giveing that necklase too them demons so they can kill the entire universe out" raven replied. "But mom…" yasuo began too say before raven cut him off. "Look im pregnant i have more pressing matters than to worry that you two want too kill the whole universe out id rather worry about my child" raven said too her husband and son. The only reason raven really switched over too the dark side was too save hatake from being murdered by his own brother and hatake lied so she hated him. Raven decided after hatake called her a whore she for shure wasnt going back, so she left with hatanake who had not ever called her a name. Raven thought all that time she spend with hatake how could he of just used her like that and left. But she couldnt beat herself up over it as hatanake offered her a way too be happy, too be free. Piracy was the only thing other than hatanake that made raven feel free. Raven could finally sail the revenge again she loved being the captain of the most feared ship in all of the galaxy. "Man the sails were headed home too akusa" raven said too her crew with a huge smile. See raven and hatanake were pirates by night and king and queen by day. Nine months latter raven had her child sadly she was murder months latter by an unknown source exept she wasnt dead just uncontious. Her wish when she was too die was for hatake too care for there two children. Hatanake promised too protect yasuo with his life. Yasuo attended his moms funeral and swore too the sky hed find the man who murdered his mom. But what yasuo didnt no was the murderer was not a man but ravens twin willow she felt she was abusing her power as the dark queen. "I no who it was, but you probably wouldnt want to murder your father yasuo" hatanake said too yasuo. Yasuo's blood ran cold at the mention of his own father murdering his mom. yasuo went too his fathers castle unaware that his mom was still very much alive. Mean while raven awoke she broke open the casket she was in and clawed her way through the dirt and back too the serface breathing in the fresh scents. "Ahhh! Now to exact my revenge on who ever that women was who tried to kill me youll see no one messes with raven" raven said too herself. "What a nice speach but ive already won dear twin" willow said from right behind raven. Raven spun around quickly. "I never knew i had a twin" raven said in disbeleif. "No because i wanted it kept a secret as friends too the lords of eliment" willow said too raven. "So you condone all of there wickedness"? Raven asked in disbeleif. "Lets just i dont beleive in it but if i were too say something the punishment would be far worst than i coyls imagine" willow said too raven. "Then why are you there friend"? Raven asked. But willow counter acted that with a question as well. "Why did you marry hatanake"? Both girls explain there situations and decided too team up and take down the lords of eliment together they knew it would be hard but no one said it would be easy. They would do it together as one team.


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