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The idea of the story is alright but it never lifts off. I've had the story listed for several months now and the updates tend to be rewrites of the same chapters with minor changes. As such my rating is quite poor. The author writes well but doesn't go beyond baby years with his updates, and tends to focus on various rewrites of his birth... With minor differences.
Im honestly expecting him to go search for celebi to bring him and him team 2000 years into the future xD Be kinda cool maybe after he trains his pokemon up and finishes his buisness at his home village he'll do it
The idea of the story is alright but it never lifts off. I've had the story listed for several months now and the updates tend to be rewrites of the same chapters with minor changes. As such my rating is quite poor. The author writes well but doesn't go beyond baby years with his updates, and tends to focus on various rewrites of his birth... With minor differences.
Im honestly expecting him to go search for celebi to bring him and him team 2000 years into the future xD Be kinda cool maybe after he trains his pokemon up and finishes his buisness at his home village he'll do it