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Is there any romance? 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 If yes who is the love interest? 🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓
Nerfing the main character constantly is the authors favorite pass time At some point he even seals permanently 25% of the chakra of the mc, so don't expect it to get better with time
I'm really enjoying this story but something is really bugging me. Most of the story I've read thus far seems like a rewrite of a gamer story I read on ff.net. I'm not sure if it moves away from that path as there are minor differences that seem to be building up but it doesn't take away from this sense of deja vu. Other than that this is probably one of the most well written stories I've found on webnovel.
this story makes me happy. and sad. and angry. and fuzzy. if you don't hate a certain group of characters by the end of reading this I'd call you weird. if you don't love another group I'd call you crazy. and the world well it's Naruto. a well thought out Naruto. just read it. it's some hours of your life you will never want back and will do so again in a heartbeat.
Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove.
so from my reading it works better than most naruto fanfictions. I enjoy it quite well. other ones usually point out the bad spots in the 3rd hokage although he did do bad things this plays his character out better. which I enjoy that.
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again author San great going. This is the most realistic Naruto fanfiction I know . truthfully I regret that it was too little Yuri moment in that chapter😔 . And there is a scene of her crying every 3 4 chapters but that's for character development so I understand . And I hope her love interest won't be like a god from another world or op reincarnator . u know there are already many sob past virgin powerful perverted virgin male already there in naruto😚
author San I like this novel. your writing style is really good. I am enjoying the story and well there is many r*** part but maybe it's a girls pov therefore it's like that . well this is great novel read it and u will understand 😁😁😁
When do you like upload, so I can read, and also this is so good, it makes me so impatient to wait, and I'm just like trying to read other naruto fanfics to try and wait for an update.
I love this fanfiction so much. the writing, the story, the background, and of course the romance. but if there's one thing I dislike about it, it's that it doesn't update too frequently which makes me sad.
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I didn't start yet but that synopsis alone got me happy most stories are extremely rushed. when if they are stretched can make more stones .
Honestly I'm really enjoying this novel, it has a fun vibrant MC and the way thing are going along move really well and is very interesting. However one thing that irks me is the romance how quickly the MC gets along with the male lead, it took less than 20 chapters as well as being a bit bland (no hate) which -1 star for me. I just feel as if he's lacking especially since there are just so many other fun characters that could have been her partner.
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Great fan-fiction! I did drop it at around chapter 65, however. I felt that the way the story developed didn't interest me as much anymore. I don't know if the author will answer, but did the MC get the rinnegan yet or are there any plans for that? Thanks!
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Muy buena, gracias por los capítulos y espero como fan que no dejes de publicar, esta muy entretenida nada que ver como la mayoría de otros fanfic
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The story was really good it is worth the read. HOWEVER, to me this novel has been ruined. The author introduces a reincarnation type figure that utterly destroys everything built/in the story. To me he ruins everything. As soon as he shows up, around that time. It just gradually starts going downhill. I mean everything the author justifies his reasons is the mc is too op etc etc. However, compared to the rest she rly isn't. She doesn't even have ems and I can think of tons of ppl that could destroy her. Another thing for me is I feel that reincarnation dude is just to put everything so it somewhat follows canon in some way. Like the mc makes changes and that other guy makes the "changes" irrelevant and makes it follow back to canon. Granted it happens in different ways. However, at the core it is what he is doing. Overall, im utterly disappointed that a great fanfic to me was ruined by this. Gl to author for future stories.
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Nice story but author is trying too hard not make OP MC which bugs me the most! As you see MC has natural talent in learning and can use Fujin jutsu but never uses it and while fighting she can use five element jutsu but only uses her MS which makes her blind.... So much for making M.C nerf. It's like author gave most powerful tool to MC but MC never tried to learn or try to gain insight!!! Which frustrates me to no end.
Absolutely brilliant. Keep writing more chapter's. The character is really well written and the story is good. Please don't stop this halfway.
I love that you fanfic has so much original content. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Just saw that you d*ed, RIP bro you will be missed, and for the one that might or might not come back to check on his books, and is the one that informed us of his demise my condolences.
Is there any romance? 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 If yes who is the love interest? 🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓🦓
Nerfing the main character constantly is the authors favorite pass time At some point he even seals permanently 25% of the chakra of the mc, so don't expect it to get better with time
I'm really enjoying this story but something is really bugging me. Most of the story I've read thus far seems like a rewrite of a gamer story I read on ff.net. I'm not sure if it moves away from that path as there are minor differences that seem to be building up but it doesn't take away from this sense of deja vu. Other than that this is probably one of the most well written stories I've found on webnovel.
this story makes me happy. and sad. and angry. and fuzzy. if you don't hate a certain group of characters by the end of reading this I'd call you weird. if you don't love another group I'd call you crazy. and the world well it's Naruto. a well thought out Naruto. just read it. it's some hours of your life you will never want back and will do so again in a heartbeat.
Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove. Cento e quatro mil novicentos e movente nove.
so from my reading it works better than most naruto fanfictions. I enjoy it quite well. other ones usually point out the bad spots in the 3rd hokage although he did do bad things this plays his character out better. which I enjoy that.
Reveal Spoiler again author San great going. This is the most realistic Naruto fanfiction I know . truthfully I regret that it was too little Yuri moment in that chapter😔 . And there is a scene of her crying every 3 4 chapters but that's for character development so I understand . And I hope her love interest won't be like a god from another world or op reincarnator . u know there are already many sob past virgin powerful perverted virgin male already there in naruto😚
author San I like this novel. your writing style is really good. I am enjoying the story and well there is many r*** part but maybe it's a girls pov therefore it's like that . well this is great novel read it and u will understand 😁😁😁
When do you like upload, so I can read, and also this is so good, it makes me so impatient to wait, and I'm just like trying to read other naruto fanfics to try and wait for an update.
I love this fanfiction so much. the writing, the story, the background, and of course the romance. but if there's one thing I dislike about it, it's that it doesn't update too frequently which makes me sad.
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I didn't start yet but that synopsis alone got me happy most stories are extremely rushed. when if they are stretched can make more stones .
Honestly I'm really enjoying this novel, it has a fun vibrant MC and the way thing are going along move really well and is very interesting. However one thing that irks me is the romance how quickly the MC gets along with the male lead, it took less than 20 chapters as well as being a bit bland (no hate) which -1 star for me. I just feel as if he's lacking especially since there are just so many other fun characters that could have been her partner.
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Great fan-fiction! I did drop it at around chapter 65, however. I felt that the way the story developed didn't interest me as much anymore. I don't know if the author will answer, but did the MC get the rinnegan yet or are there any plans for that? Thanks!
Reveal Spoiler Simplemente una historia increible y una verdadera lastima que no este serialisado en formato manga/anime xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Reveal Spoiler Muy buena, gracias por los capítulos y espero como fan que no dejes de publicar, esta muy entretenida nada que ver como la mayoría de otros fanfic
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The story was really good it is worth the read. HOWEVER, to me this novel has been ruined. The author introduces a reincarnation type figure that utterly destroys everything built/in the story. To me he ruins everything. As soon as he shows up, around that time. It just gradually starts going downhill. I mean everything the author justifies his reasons is the mc is too op etc etc. However, compared to the rest she rly isn't. She doesn't even have ems and I can think of tons of ppl that could destroy her. Another thing for me is I feel that reincarnation dude is just to put everything so it somewhat follows canon in some way. Like the mc makes changes and that other guy makes the "changes" irrelevant and makes it follow back to canon. Granted it happens in different ways. However, at the core it is what he is doing. Overall, im utterly disappointed that a great fanfic to me was ruined by this. Gl to author for future stories.
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Nice story but author is trying too hard not make OP MC which bugs me the most! As you see MC has natural talent in learning and can use Fujin jutsu but never uses it and while fighting she can use five element jutsu but only uses her MS which makes her blind.... So much for making M.C nerf. It's like author gave most powerful tool to MC but MC never tried to learn or try to gain insight!!! Which frustrates me to no end.
Absolutely brilliant. Keep writing more chapter's. The character is really well written and the story is good. Please don't stop this halfway.
I love that you fanfic has so much original content. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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I would like to know if the romance will be FxF or FxM? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Just saw that you d*ed, RIP bro you will be missed, and for the one that might or might not come back to check on his books, and is the one that informed us of his demise my condolences.