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I hope it gets updated someday. I really really liked it. Please update. It has a great start and I feel this story has a great foundation for building something up. I hope you dont drop it becasue it looked like it's a great story. Hope you have a nice day.
I read the story this while day and love the story so far😍😍😍. Hope the author can update soon 😄😄😎😎. The interaction betwen the system and MC is cute.
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It's really good I read through the whole thing today and I loved it. I like how the system and the host interact. This is a really promising story so far.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
Love the story. Hopefully it doesn't get abandoned as it's been 2 months for me since an update. Chapters are a little shorter tha I would like because I read through 16 chapters quickly from my point of view. Story is great, there is humor, action, some serious moments, and they all tie together very well. *Fingers crossed it isnt abandoned*
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The story seems promising, so I suddenly decided to review it a bit to encourage the author to write more. Thanks very much for your updates. Till now it has been interesting, sometimes funny, and I'm so full of enthusiasm. Good, really good. Keep it up.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I hope it gets updated someday. I really really liked it. Please update. It has a great start and I feel this story has a great foundation for building something up. I hope you dont drop it becasue it looked like it's a great story. Hope you have a nice day.
I read the story this while day and love the story so far😍😍😍. Hope the author can update soon 😄😄😎😎. The interaction betwen the system and MC is cute.
More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍 More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍 More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍 More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍More 😍 More 😍
It's really good I read through the whole thing today and I loved it. I like how the system and the host interact. This is a really promising story so far.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
Love the story. Hopefully it doesn't get abandoned as it's been 2 months for me since an update. Chapters are a little shorter tha I would like because I read through 16 chapters quickly from my point of view. Story is great, there is humor, action, some serious moments, and they all tie together very well. *Fingers crossed it isnt abandoned*
Loverrrrrrrr......................………..............................................................................................................///......///// xxxxxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
The story seems promising, so I suddenly decided to review it a bit to encourage the author to write more. Thanks very much for your updates. Till now it has been interesting, sometimes funny, and I'm so full of enthusiasm. Good, really good. Keep it up.
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PLEASE PLEASE the story is really good and the mc is just so cute.