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i love soo much this fan-fic is the i already read. i am soo ancious for the new ar. i like aiden and mina it is a beautiful couple. i want more
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Half These reviews i see are almost 100% wrong about the author trowing girls at the main character, at the current chapter of when i am writing this which is 136 he still isn't even in a real relationship yet besides sleeping around with older woman not looking for a relationship. The book also is way less edge then you would think,i can't stand edge lord crap either so it can't be much, the only current edge being that the MC is still a jackass and can be gloom at times. So i would give this a read if your just looking for a casual read and nothing much more.
Beginning trauma has little to no meaning and it is very hard to force yourself to go past 50 chapters then it starts getting a lot better and starts acting like he should have been since the beginning. He completely neglets other girls feeling while he likes rabbit hero and prefers milf mainly. Since the story is getting a lot better I am increasing my ratings✌
This is basically the same as original with a side character as MC who have bunch of girls following him and always is on the whim of mina. He is beta most of the time with some opness sometimes. From the chapter i am at, his quirk basically only can make a knife and a pole with light transportation. Even with that many years of cold blooded murder and training, he turns into goodie shoes in matter of months. If the arthur is reading this then you can look for the fanfic named In MHA with madara's power and you can see how you could have designed your MC. The MC is the embodiment of TRUE MC in that fanfic and if you compare this MC with that then you yourself will feel that the MC you created is nothing more than a side character with assasin skills😷😷
WQ - 4 SoU - 4 SD - 1 CD - 1 WB - 3 NOTE: Read if bored but don't read if you're trying to find QUALITY. It's sh*t, that's all. Why? It's the author's wish fulfillment. MC is a Gary Stu. Look at Deku and Bakugo, OP quirks but still needs to work hard to improve. Look at Shoto, trained his Ice Half for most of his life, still needs to work hard. MC/Author bashes Deku too much. Don't go comparing Deku to the OC you made, they're far too different. The OC was old enough to stay resilient and confident to train and sh*it. While Deku for most of his life was sh*itted on by likely first BFF and his peers, of course he'd be too weak to do anything. Also, stop giving Deku's development to the MC. MC is a CHAD, I don't care as long Uraraka is with Deku. But... MC fucks a housewife. A wife of someone's whose doing their best to provide for their family, for his beloved and supposedly FAITHFUL wife. If the author made backstory where Mrs. Ashido gets abused and sh*it, then it'd be fine. But no, you didn't. Didn't the MC's mom get rap*d? For a husband learning that his wife CHEATED on him WILLINGLY is comparable to his wife getting r*pe. What's worse is that a WHORISH women would get half of his hardwork if divorce comes in. Use your f*cking morals for once instead of your dick. Relationships and death are different, both are everlasting (depending on the person). Heck, I know people who'd prefer being killed than cheated on. Then again, Japan and English speaking (main) countries are known for having c*cks. Anyone who agrees that being a "CHAD" and doing sh*t like this should die or become a monk for 10+ years in a ******** temple.
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Author came back. So I have decided to give a review. One of the best stories on this site AND best MHA story. Why? Because of MC he is that amazingly fleshed out. It has a lot lf tragedy in begining and I kinda was turned off by those things but I braved on and oh boy was it worth it. You see Aiden grows he is shown as a child then as a child solder but he is growing as a person which is very VERY rare in this site and particulary on FF section. It has right amout fanservice, lemons (smut) and fight scenes. Aiden goes from EMO to cool. It has right amount of Izuku bashing (I hate shoneon protags). All in all its not a perfect story but its amazingly high end one.
Awesome story so far for my the mc at the start wasn't so well-liked by me but the author did a wonderful job of developing his emotions and his abilities so he isn't op from chapter 1 or getting his abilities from a deus ex machina plot point he trains man can you believe it an Mc on this site that trains to be Op NC :D.Keep up the good work Mr author I cant wait to read more of this wonderful story you have made for us
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easily one of the best mha fanfics out there, guy has a very dark backstory though so fair warning. plus mc is a definite man of culture with the women he goes after, all in all great story.
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Read till around ch 22. Aiden is supposed to be a seasoned assassin but while he’s fighting nomu he just goes on long ass monologues. At least try to keep him consistent.
I honestly like the backstory of Aiden and his character is mysterious and observant and he can be very egotistical every now and then but he always tells the truth even if it’s very vague and sometimes hurtful to others but even so he can have a caring and protective side. Plus he’s badass and hilarious.
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Overall is an amazing story with a lot of feelings and hardships but even tho im not the best person to review things but i enjoyed reading this story and i hope it continues
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super fanfic and surely one of the best on mha that I have never read i love mc manataliter continue like its good development of the mantaliter of the other characters
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Love this novel, but I expected mc to fight like Dante from dmc at first. Still love it though.
this is really fucking good, i cant wait to see how far the story will progress.and i love his character and powers keep up the good work😁👍👍
Everything nice, except the last arc, which is sincerely boring me. Obviously few chapters are not enough to destroy the whole story, but I hope it will end soon. The protagonist is really well written and I recommend reading to everyone.
This frustrated me. It had a good beginning but by chapter 10 I became disillusioned with it. Its jusy anothrr canon follow with a random oc. His past doesnt matter. In the end you can skip to chapter 10 and just know he has a weapon creating quirk and can short distance teleport. Thats it. The whole i will destory the corrupt society angle is dropped completely. Very bad continuity.
I've read a lot of My Hero academia fan-fic on Webnovel but this here is legit one of the best one yet not gonna lie. Although the story start kind of dark it fits the MC development perfectly I would give it 5/5 if not for some characters that are introduced then the authors forgets about them then remembers about them in later chapters.
Definitavemente esta en my top list of books that i like'sooooo... keep the good work'hope to se more of this just don drop it please'hasta la vista';)
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Utter trash . Early chapters are bait. From around chapter 20 you will start to understand why this is trash. Mc is another beta doormat parasite loving skirt chaser horny teenager. His trauma doesn't mean anything to him other than nerfing his ability. His assassintion training is meaningless. his clod harsh training is a joke to him now I guess he would even have erection if there was a video tape of the rap.ing of his mother and he wtaches it.
i love soo much this fan-fic is the i already read. i am soo ancious for the new ar. i like aiden and mina it is a beautiful couple. i want more
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Half These reviews i see are almost 100% wrong about the author trowing girls at the main character, at the current chapter of when i am writing this which is 136 he still isn't even in a real relationship yet besides sleeping around with older woman not looking for a relationship. The book also is way less edge then you would think,i can't stand edge lord crap either so it can't be much, the only current edge being that the MC is still a jackass and can be gloom at times. So i would give this a read if your just looking for a casual read and nothing much more.
Beginning trauma has little to no meaning and it is very hard to force yourself to go past 50 chapters then it starts getting a lot better and starts acting like he should have been since the beginning. He completely neglets other girls feeling while he likes rabbit hero and prefers milf mainly. Since the story is getting a lot better I am increasing my ratings✌
This is basically the same as original with a side character as MC who have bunch of girls following him and always is on the whim of mina. He is beta most of the time with some opness sometimes. From the chapter i am at, his quirk basically only can make a knife and a pole with light transportation. Even with that many years of cold blooded murder and training, he turns into goodie shoes in matter of months. If the arthur is reading this then you can look for the fanfic named In MHA with madara's power and you can see how you could have designed your MC. The MC is the embodiment of TRUE MC in that fanfic and if you compare this MC with that then you yourself will feel that the MC you created is nothing more than a side character with assasin skills😷😷
WQ - 4 SoU - 4 SD - 1 CD - 1 WB - 3 NOTE: Read if bored but don't read if you're trying to find QUALITY. It's sh*t, that's all. Why? It's the author's wish fulfillment. MC is a Gary Stu. Look at Deku and Bakugo, OP quirks but still needs to work hard to improve. Look at Shoto, trained his Ice Half for most of his life, still needs to work hard. MC/Author bashes Deku too much. Don't go comparing Deku to the OC you made, they're far too different. The OC was old enough to stay resilient and confident to train and sh*it. While Deku for most of his life was sh*itted on by likely first BFF and his peers, of course he'd be too weak to do anything. Also, stop giving Deku's development to the MC. MC is a CHAD, I don't care as long Uraraka is with Deku. But... MC fucks a housewife. A wife of someone's whose doing their best to provide for their family, for his beloved and supposedly FAITHFUL wife. If the author made backstory where Mrs. Ashido gets abused and sh*it, then it'd be fine. But no, you didn't. Didn't the MC's mom get rap*d? For a husband learning that his wife CHEATED on him WILLINGLY is comparable to his wife getting r*pe. What's worse is that a WHORISH women would get half of his hardwork if divorce comes in. Use your f*cking morals for once instead of your dick. Relationships and death are different, both are everlasting (depending on the person). Heck, I know people who'd prefer being killed than cheated on. Then again, Japan and English speaking (main) countries are known for having c*cks. Anyone who agrees that being a "CHAD" and doing sh*t like this should die or become a monk for 10+ years in a ******** temple.
To be possible without to praction a valuable improvement of our compete changed, teamwork, company. Integrity involvement the high levelopment and praction, and to improduct deman resource of competiticed that we will involvement of people a valuable a new yearly critive is a few meaning human resour full in to proving. To becognize today's manceivable high leve a won't based today's company's employees and competitiveness. To be practices has are now becompetitivity, teamwork environments the have
Author came back. So I have decided to give a review. One of the best stories on this site AND best MHA story. Why? Because of MC he is that amazingly fleshed out. It has a lot lf tragedy in begining and I kinda was turned off by those things but I braved on and oh boy was it worth it. You see Aiden grows he is shown as a child then as a child solder but he is growing as a person which is very VERY rare in this site and particulary on FF section. It has right amout fanservice, lemons (smut) and fight scenes. Aiden goes from EMO to cool. It has right amount of Izuku bashing (I hate shoneon protags). All in all its not a perfect story but its amazingly high end one.
Awesome story so far for my the mc at the start wasn't so well-liked by me but the author did a wonderful job of developing his emotions and his abilities so he isn't op from chapter 1 or getting his abilities from a deus ex machina plot point he trains man can you believe it an Mc on this site that trains to be Op NC :D.Keep up the good work Mr author I cant wait to read more of this wonderful story you have made for us
Hold up ! the cover picture is a fortnite skin ???_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
easily one of the best mha fanfics out there, guy has a very dark backstory though so fair warning. plus mc is a definite man of culture with the women he goes after, all in all great story.
Reveal Spoiler Read till around ch 22. Aiden is supposed to be a seasoned assassin but while he’s fighting nomu he just goes on long ass monologues. At least try to keep him consistent.
I honestly like the backstory of Aiden and his character is mysterious and observant and he can be very egotistical every now and then but he always tells the truth even if it’s very vague and sometimes hurtful to others but even so he can have a caring and protective side. Plus he’s badass and hilarious.
Reveal Spoiler Overall is an amazing story with a lot of feelings and hardships but even tho im not the best person to review things but i enjoyed reading this story and i hope it continues
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super fanfic and surely one of the best on mha that I have never read i love mc manataliter continue like its good development of the mantaliter of the other characters
Reveal Spoiler Love this novel, but I expected mc to fight like Dante from dmc at first. Still love it though.
this is really fucking good, i cant wait to see how far the story will progress.and i love his character and powers keep up the good work😁👍👍
Everything nice, except the last arc, which is sincerely boring me. Obviously few chapters are not enough to destroy the whole story, but I hope it will end soon. The protagonist is really well written and I recommend reading to everyone.
This frustrated me. It had a good beginning but by chapter 10 I became disillusioned with it. Its jusy anothrr canon follow with a random oc. His past doesnt matter. In the end you can skip to chapter 10 and just know he has a weapon creating quirk and can short distance teleport. Thats it. The whole i will destory the corrupt society angle is dropped completely. Very bad continuity.
I've read a lot of My Hero academia fan-fic on Webnovel but this here is legit one of the best one yet not gonna lie. Although the story start kind of dark it fits the MC development perfectly I would give it 5/5 if not for some characters that are introduced then the authors forgets about them then remembers about them in later chapters.
Definitavemente esta en my top list of books that i like'sooooo... keep the good work'hope to se more of this just don drop it please'hasta la vista';)
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Utter trash . Early chapters are bait. From around chapter 20 you will start to understand why this is trash. Mc is another beta doormat parasite loving skirt chaser horny teenager. His trauma doesn't mean anything to him other than nerfing his ability. His assassintion training is meaningless. his clod harsh training is a joke to him now I guess he would even have erection if there was a video tape of the rap.ing of his mother and he wtaches it.