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Enchantress Amongst Alchemist:Ghost King's Wife
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Mu Yue, was a successor to her medicinal aristocratic family in Xia. After being murdered bt her enemy, she reincarnated in the body of a recently deceased good-for-nothing Miss in the Mu Family of the Martial God Continent who had been beaten to death.
After being beaten to death, Mu Yue , who had originally been a successor to a medicinal aristocratic family in Xia, reincarnated into her new body. With the same name Mu Yue, who had been poisoned. Her meridians were blocked, hindering her cultivation, which led to her being known as trash.
In the throne room, she smilingly recieve a marriage notice to have a change in marriage to wed the infamous Ghost King from the kingdom of Zi.
It was well-known that the Ghost king was stupid and foolish, with a ghost-like appearance. But who knew that he was actually the most two-faced person?
Everyone laughed, thinking that a good-for-nothing was well-matched to a fool. But not in their wildest dreams did they even consider that she was actually a peerless genuis in the making.
"They want to sted my path? I will train to reach the peak of the realms! They give me a foolish prince as my husband? I can make do with him. It would be easier for me to deal with him, rather than with other candidates who would be thrown at me in the future."
" I shall strive to become powerful enough that nobody will be able to mock or kill me."
When Mu Yue looked at the man, who had a hansome god-like face, she said, gnashing her teeth, "Ye Wu Chen you lied to me. How are you a fool at all?"
The Ghost king chuckled as he affectionately embraced her. "By your side, I'm willing to be a fool that you can freely order around."
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So far the story has been amazing. The story development has a very addictive feel that gets you hooked right away. The only downside is that there is no indication of when someone starts and stops talking. At points it can get confusing but if you get past that, its a very well put together story.
Just a copied novel u can read the novel on another site with less gramatical mistakes
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Writing quality is bad. There are too many grammatical errors. No usage of apostrophes or double quotes or punctuation when needed. Character design,world background, story development is good but it is marred by poor writing quality.
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I quite like this story so far, however it is very difficult to read due to lack of correct punctuation. When a character is speaking, their words should appear in quotation marks, otherwise it is confusing to figure out when something is something stated as a fact of the world or something being said or thought by a character. Also, when someone possesses something, you must say that โthatโs theirsโ not โthats theirsโ otherwise it doesnโt make sense. I believe this is a very good start and I hope to read more, however I hope the author does some editing on the chapters that are already out ask the author to be more meticulous when writing more chapters in the future. โค๏ธ
It was really enjoyable!!! At times, it was funny.............. And all the characters were in place. A clear or vivid description and a imaginable stance was presented. Overall, it was beyond good.
weakly written with way to many inconsistences within the first 100 chapters not clear power level of the kingdom not clear power structure of martial artists very weak villains making them pointless stupid use of her abilities stupid reasoning to get married bunch of other shit as well
I love this novel so much. Its so captivating that I've almost read the entire book online. Just currently taking a break. Nonetheless I'll go back to it in a bit and finish it off. Hehe๐๐
Story is similar to Prodigiously Amazing Weaponsmith. The only difference is that the FL on this story is an alchemist while the latter is an arnament master. Both are reincarnated souls of a thousand year old couple. The start of the plot was good and I got hooked. But when the rival of the FL keeps on reincarnating after being defeated by FL, it got so boring. The rival just preserves her sould and finds another body to inhabit and then chases after the ML again. The story foundation is good but it lack unique ideas to keep the story going. The succeeding arcs became nonsensical and repetitive. Btw i reach chap 300 out of 1200 chap on another platforms. But then eventually dropped it midway.
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Cover was originally used in another book, which was sold on Amazon for a while. Possibly a stand alone art painting, whose illustration leaves one to read the story - but completely unrelated. If you want to enjoy the novel, ignore the cover...
Author pls update after the business is successful I really love this novel even if a update once a week but pls update โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
It is a pity that you stoped writing. I loved this story as it was interesting and the main charachter had a personality and she was mean, simply adorable
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It was enjoyable to read. Grammar needs work but points got across well. I do not know much about writing when it comes to identify when a character is talking but I would suggest looking up ways to clarify it. Names are similar. I would often get confused as to who said what.