Thoughts on the second chapter
Sometimes it seems to me that the main character and his friend Fang are just robots, but sometimes they suffer from cognitive dissonance, and sometimes bursts of hikikamori, that is, social isolation. They cannot or do not want to express their emotions. This excites readers. Characters are long to express zhmozii. But at the same time, readers expect the main characters of emotions and emotions to make them look more alive and less static.
Writing the second chapter, but rather rewriting it, takes time, on the other hand, is it an interesting process, the manifestation by robots of emotions that can be made of them by people? Or maybe it's just a little confusing plot? So far, the rewritten first chapter has changed the plot itself, its line. There are new, old heroes, but so far the Fang does not fit into the second chapter. But I think about it. He must appear to end the search period and go in search of hiding places, abandoned cities and, most importantly, gold! And the piastres!
Rush off to the pampas, giggling loudly at the same time! To get money, gold! Become famous! It will be a celebrity to become rich, fulfill the American dream. without going to the green card, across the ocean! And live in your beloved homeland! For if everyone goes where it is better to live ?! Who will stay at home? To go abroad and become cool there, but not to be home by anyone? There is no point ?! So the old people think at home! Another thing is to become famous at home, to become respected and rich, and then you can already temporarily travel to the USA or Europe, learn new technologies and knowledge and introduce them in your homeland.
But these are only plans, usually they are broken about harsh reality, and all kinds of dreams are broken, like crystal glass on asphalt. But Dara will remain at home, where should he go? After all, there are so many interesting things at home ?!
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