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I would be more than happy to edit the grammar in this book. Let me know if this is something that you would be interested in. English is my first language! Unfortunately I can’t translate from any other languages other than French! But must say I have re-read this book a few times and love it!!!!!
Changing the characters names, poor grammar even with a proofreader, missing some words in sentences, updating delays, and poor world background.
the overall Idea os good, the FL have Nice atitude... but the worldbuilding allways chance, everyone forgot everithing. and allways repeat themselfs. and a lor of things chánge for plot , making the last useless ou strange. but the worst is the romance... ml act like a idiota/child... forcing proximity with the he FL ALL the time, making she defenseles against him, he say How much he Will Care for her, but dont help her with nothing, Just make himself só Constant screaming, wife wife, that she Just acept him. dont make sense... the worst.. when she Discover that was a lie , one year lie.. she Just think ah dont Hurt me, she dont think about his character, how much he was inconvenient Ans being disconfort tô her brother and father... Just acept ... like she dont have selfrespect, dont have a Voice or a choices. she Just acept him.. and he.. ia a creepy, worst Yandere ever.... obsessee.. bot not protective, he never TRy tô protect her... she almost die and he donr make nothing... and abter she know.. she becams more and more passive, he can make everithing with her and she dont Care at ALL... ah she dont cultivate never, she dont teach too... she dont make nothing really helpful... everithing os lazy Anr disapoint... ugh the ml is soo creepy
the grammar is horrible, the name of the mc is changed sometimes through the chapter and it seems this story is just the copy from another novel
The story it’s self is pretty well done. The author however writes the shortest chapters ever and uses about 100 words at the end of every chapter to tell people to not stealthier stuff. While you can get used to it it is still annoying especially when using audio setting. And with short chapters still not a discounted chapter price compared to other authors though it is not the highest rate so that is good. Good story though.
The story has potential. However The sentence structure and grammar need a lot of work. I don't know who the proof reader was, but they need to go back through it and try again.
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The story is interesting enough to keep the reader engaged. But the comment from the author at the end of each chapter is annoying and causes the chapters to be shortened. Makes paying for each. Chapter seem like a rip off a little bit. But I like the female lead and hope her and the prince discover each others secret soon.
good novel can anyone tell me the name of novel like this in which MC is proficiency in all arts anyone with ml or fl
Novel could be amazing but I see 3 problems 1. The grammar 2. The crazy short chapters 3. The message at the end which takes up the word count so the author doesn’t have to write as much
I would like to let the author know that I’m currently on chapter 173 and this is an AWESOME read. I am really enjoying the story. I hope you stay encouraged to keep on writing because I really want to know how the story unfolds. ❤️
Very awkward writing/translating, hard to understand. The start is very abrupt, just throwing things in without smooth transitions. The author didn't bother thinking about how things work and why the characters would do things, so it comes across as childish.
It's alright, but the grammar in this is what gets to me. Like I do not wanna have to correct it every few sentence. It had potential, but the grammar needs proofreading.
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This really needs to be proofread the grammar mistakes are too distracting and takes me away from the story... Please get a proofreader or something.
As much as I like reading this. iIkeep finding myself Grammer checking.. it's so hard to concentrate on the story.. 😮💨
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I already know this novel is going to be a dope too!!! I'm already writing a review even before I start ... so wish me luck!
great novel i this novel and waited for it update but when will author update the chapters .i waiting for long time pls update the novel .and thanks for the Lovely novel . thanks for your Hard work 💗
Another promising novel... I like anime too... I am looking forward to read this novel... Author-sama please continue write this novel please.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
seems good, but it seems her character is a bit lacking from the start. I expected more stronger since she is from the future to put that old lady in her place.
Author sama, can you make regular update?...🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I really can't wait to read about the female leads doings in the story. I hope she gets her revenge on the women in the family. I can't wait to meet the male lead I hope he is sweet and hot.
Yes we are loving it the story development so far is going good so thank you for he amazing one thank u so much we are loving it and we are looking forward to it very much thank u for the amazing story thank you so much
The grammar isn’t great and stopped at around chapter 40 because even I was uncomfortable with how vulgar the mc was. It’s a good and interesting story so far but will not be continuing.
I would be more than happy to edit the grammar in this book. Let me know if this is something that you would be interested in. English is my first language! Unfortunately I can’t translate from any other languages other than French! But must say I have re-read this book a few times and love it!!!!!
Changing the characters names, poor grammar even with a proofreader, missing some words in sentences, updating delays, and poor world background.
the overall Idea os good, the FL have Nice atitude... but the worldbuilding allways chance, everyone forgot everithing. and allways repeat themselfs. and a lor of things chánge for plot , making the last useless ou strange. but the worst is the romance... ml act like a idiota/child... forcing proximity with the he FL ALL the time, making she defenseles against him, he say How much he Will Care for her, but dont help her with nothing, Just make himself só Constant screaming, wife wife, that she Just acept him. dont make sense... the worst.. when she Discover that was a lie , one year lie.. she Just think ah dont Hurt me, she dont think about his character, how much he was inconvenient Ans being disconfort tô her brother and father... Just acept ... like she dont have selfrespect, dont have a Voice or a choices. she Just acept him.. and he.. ia a creepy, worst Yandere ever.... obsessee.. bot not protective, he never TRy tô protect her... she almost die and he donr make nothing... and abter she know.. she becams more and more passive, he can make everithing with her and she dont Care at ALL... ah she dont cultivate never, she dont teach too... she dont make nothing really helpful... everithing os lazy Anr disapoint... ugh the ml is soo creepy
the grammar is horrible, the name of the mc is changed sometimes through the chapter and it seems this story is just the copy from another novel
The story it’s self is pretty well done. The author however writes the shortest chapters ever and uses about 100 words at the end of every chapter to tell people to not stealthier stuff. While you can get used to it it is still annoying especially when using audio setting. And with short chapters still not a discounted chapter price compared to other authors though it is not the highest rate so that is good. Good story though.
The story has potential. However The sentence structure and grammar need a lot of work. I don't know who the proof reader was, but they need to go back through it and try again.
Reveal Spoiler The story is interesting enough to keep the reader engaged. But the comment from the author at the end of each chapter is annoying and causes the chapters to be shortened. Makes paying for each. Chapter seem like a rip off a little bit. But I like the female lead and hope her and the prince discover each others secret soon.
good novel can anyone tell me the name of novel like this in which MC is proficiency in all arts anyone with ml or fl
Novel could be amazing but I see 3 problems 1. The grammar 2. The crazy short chapters 3. The message at the end which takes up the word count so the author doesn’t have to write as much
I would like to let the author know that I’m currently on chapter 173 and this is an AWESOME read. I am really enjoying the story. I hope you stay encouraged to keep on writing because I really want to know how the story unfolds. ❤️
Very awkward writing/translating, hard to understand. The start is very abrupt, just throwing things in without smooth transitions. The author didn't bother thinking about how things work and why the characters would do things, so it comes across as childish.
It's alright, but the grammar in this is what gets to me. Like I do not wanna have to correct it every few sentence. It had potential, but the grammar needs proofreading.
Reveal Spoiler This really needs to be proofread the grammar mistakes are too distracting and takes me away from the story... Please get a proofreader or something.
As much as I like reading this. iIkeep finding myself Grammer checking.. it's so hard to concentrate on the story.. 😮💨
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Reveal Spoiler I already know this novel is going to be a dope too!!! I'm already writing a review even before I start ... so wish me luck!
great novel i this novel and waited for it update but when will author update the chapters .i waiting for long time pls update the novel .and thanks for the Lovely novel . thanks for your Hard work 💗
Another promising novel... I like anime too... I am looking forward to read this novel... Author-sama please continue write this novel please.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
seems good, but it seems her character is a bit lacking from the start. I expected more stronger since she is from the future to put that old lady in her place.
Author sama, can you make regular update?...🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I really can't wait to read about the female leads doings in the story. I hope she gets her revenge on the women in the family. I can't wait to meet the male lead I hope he is sweet and hot.
Yes we are loving it the story development so far is going good so thank you for he amazing one thank u so much we are loving it and we are looking forward to it very much thank u for the amazing story thank you so much
The grammar isn’t great and stopped at around chapter 40 because even I was uncomfortable with how vulgar the mc was. It’s a good and interesting story so far but will not be continuing.