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I'm happy about the story so far everything is good I hope I see more and I want to so please more chapters. You are doing a great job....
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The grammar is subpar. The plot is interesting enough but not good enough to make up for the grammar. Then there's the plot holes and things become rather messy.
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It is a great read, but still has some one big problem. The grammar is horrible which honestly makes it kinda hard to read. Nevertheless it is a fun action pack story.
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I'll only ask for you guys to give this fanfic a reviews............................. come on...................................................
Good novel i like it please dont stop........................................................................................................
Good novel must read good novel must read good novel must read good novel must read..... 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Great start looking forward to more....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Of course i will give my novel a good rating. Who aithor doesnt do that? Hahaha. Blah blah blah blah blah blah. 140 140 140 140 why not 150.
I'm happy about the story so far everything is good I hope I see more and I want to so please more chapters. You are doing a great job....
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Good work !!!!!!!!!!!!! And i need more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ps: my english su.......................... [:-) Haahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
The grammar is subpar. The plot is interesting enough but not good enough to make up for the grammar. Then there's the plot holes and things become rather messy.
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It is a great read, but still has some one big problem. The grammar is horrible which honestly makes it kinda hard to read. Nevertheless it is a fun action pack story.
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I'll only ask for you guys to give this fanfic a reviews............................. come on...................................................
Good novel i like it please dont stop........................................................................................................
Good novel must read good novel must read good novel must read good novel must read..... 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Great start looking forward to more....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Of course i will give my novel a good rating. Who aithor doesnt do that? Hahaha. Blah blah blah blah blah blah. 140 140 140 140 why not 150.
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