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This novel is basically... Quite a lot of character from fate being reincarnated into the MAHOU SENSEI NEGIMA!? Series. I love both to death so i quite like this... sadly the grammar is NOT good but its not terrible either. So you can read it with no issue. The brain fixes the mistakes lol.... Also, Took the liberty to make this. With all the 35 girls that are in Shirou's new class which includes Saber, Sakura, Rin and Luvia... If we add Illya, Kuro and Miyu... its 38 girls... Not bad, not bad...Shirou will need HUGE bed stamina to survive, Though im sure that some girls will fall in love with Nagi...
Well, this is my thoughts for the novel. 1st: The story is just Negima with Fate characters + Alucard that does nothing to change the story. 2nd: Even though Emiya should have been one with archer(s?) they are still 2 people why?¿?¿?¿?‽ 3rd: Why so much nerf for the Fate characters? 4th: Rin... What the heck dood? You made her with 3-4 personalities. Just so you know: 1st: Possessive of Shiro. 2nd: Ok with harem. 3rd: Yandere. 4th: Camo-kun (every girl she sees she want to make Shiro make pactio with them). Uncle Hotshot disapproves!
Muy buena historia me encanta ya que hoy en día no hay historia de negima es bueno ver qué hay historia de negima también está la historia uq holder sería bueno si también la metieras
The story is good but the writing is so horrible but i endure it cause i have auto translate in my brain you really need have proofreader or just get better
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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Good novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I see Fate fanfic, I like Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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I will rate this is actually something I didn't expect but the is a good combination if I have say luckily the author came back to write this again cuz of a certain cunt made the author quit writing it too I all I can say keep on writing author!!!!!
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As a harem gentleman, Ill break this down for you. First this is a no lemon/slice of life harem....just like the Negi anime. This is about two half brothers that each have a growing harem, that they have some difficulty with since they are not harem seekers. This however is a fun novel to unwind from the more handkerchief biting harem novels out there and I still recommend it , due to a nice story....Author keep it up!
Me gusta la historia sigue con el buen trabajo .......................................................................................................................................................................
You are back ! I really miss this novel. This novel are great Don’t care about shi* comment ^^ I be you fan please don’t drop again TT Fighting !! Fighting !! Fighting !!
Don't let such comments bother you, the best thing you can do is ignore those toxic people. You will always find those kinds of people who just want to bother you because they have nothing else to do. I hope you can write again ~!
I will give you this review, I like your story. The combination of Fate and Negima there are many out there but not as good as you are. The only thing that need to be improved is the writing. There are many mistake like wrong word placement. I'm sorry that I cannot convince you to make your story stay in here. But I believe that maybe… maybe I will see your future story again. Thank you 👍
Where can I read this after you delete it. I truly loved what you were doing with this book I love both series and I would like to continue reading it if you are going to be posting it somewhere else thank you very much for all your work I'm sorry I said those three checks had to ruin your fun
This novel is basically... Quite a lot of character from fate being reincarnated into the MAHOU SENSEI NEGIMA!? Series. I love both to death so i quite like this... sadly the grammar is NOT good but its not terrible either. So you can read it with no issue. The brain fixes the mistakes lol.... Also, Took the liberty to make this. With all the 35 girls that are in Shirou's new class which includes Saber, Sakura, Rin and Luvia... If we add Illya, Kuro and Miyu... its 38 girls... Not bad, not bad...Shirou will need HUGE bed stamina to survive, Though im sure that some girls will fall in love with Nagi...
Well, this is my thoughts for the novel. 1st: The story is just Negima with Fate characters + Alucard that does nothing to change the story. 2nd: Even though Emiya should have been one with archer(s?) they are still 2 people why?¿?¿?¿?‽ 3rd: Why so much nerf for the Fate characters? 4th: Rin... What the heck dood? You made her with 3-4 personalities. Just so you know: 1st: Possessive of Shiro. 2nd: Ok with harem. 3rd: Yandere. 4th: Camo-kun (every girl she sees she want to make Shiro make pactio with them). Uncle Hotshot disapproves!
Muy buena historia me encanta ya que hoy en día no hay historia de negima es bueno ver qué hay historia de negima también está la historia uq holder sería bueno si también la metieras
The story is good but the writing is so horrible but i endure it cause i have auto translate in my brain you really need have proofreader or just get better
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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Good novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I see Fate fanfic, I like Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Du du du du du du du du du du du du chi chi chi chi chi hug c he he Roku he run me rem me so yes so ore ego yes eh Send eh ex ex ex ex *** each few wen he dm EB he’s more me shh nvm he jd eh he dm he fm auto correct sry
I will rate this is actually something I didn't expect but the is a good combination if I have say luckily the author came back to write this again cuz of a certain cunt made the author quit writing it too I all I can say keep on writing author!!!!!
Hhdjjhfdh kbgghhhjfd sdsfyln hhdjjhfdh kbgghhhjfd sdsfyln hhdjjhfdh kbgghhhjfd sdsfyln hhdjjhfdh kbgghhhjfd sdsfyln hhdjjhfdh kbgghhhjfd sdsfyln hhdjjhfdh kbgghhhjfd sdsfyln
Reveal Spoiler As a harem gentleman, Ill break this down for you. First this is a no lemon/slice of life harem....just like the Negi anime. This is about two half brothers that each have a growing harem, that they have some difficulty with since they are not harem seekers. This however is a fun novel to unwind from the more handkerchief biting harem novels out there and I still recommend it , due to a nice story....Author keep it up!
Me gusta la historia sigue con el buen trabajo .......................................................................................................................................................................
You are back ! I really miss this novel. This novel are great Don’t care about shi* comment ^^ I be you fan please don’t drop again TT Fighting !! Fighting !! Fighting !!
Don't let such comments bother you, the best thing you can do is ignore those toxic people. You will always find those kinds of people who just want to bother you because they have nothing else to do. I hope you can write again ~!
I will give you this review, I like your story. The combination of Fate and Negima there are many out there but not as good as you are. The only thing that need to be improved is the writing. There are many mistake like wrong word placement. I'm sorry that I cannot convince you to make your story stay in here. But I believe that maybe… maybe I will see your future story again. Thank you 👍
Where can I read this after you delete it. I truly loved what you were doing with this book I love both series and I would like to continue reading it if you are going to be posting it somewhere else thank you very much for all your work I'm sorry I said those three checks had to ruin your fun
F hater’s you rock author ✍️ 🔥🔥✍️🪨😮💨😮💨