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I read the the prologue and the first chapter and damn! It was good! The pure emotions between the words are uncanny and excellent! But as critical reader, I saw the story lacked the "bait" to lure new readers in. Overall the pacing is good and I saw no gramatical errors Pardon my critism
I read the the prologue and the first chapter and damn! It was good! The pure emotions between the words are uncanny and excellent! But as critical reader, I saw the story lacked the "bait" to lure new readers in. Overall the pacing is good and I saw no gramatical errors Pardon my critism