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Please pick this up, great story we need more. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
perfekt ............................................................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Sangat mirip dengan light novel yang sudah ada, OC hanya mengantikan posisi MC asli didalam cerita ini, alur cerita mirip dengan LN dan hanya ada sedikit perubahan yang menjadikan ini berbeda dengan LN aslinya.
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Good job ..............................................................................................................................................................................
Hello, the author finally I can read it after a month. I hope can read the next chapter. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
perfect . ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Typical power grab story. The story is ok and didn’t disappoint the readers. Grammar can be improve more. Over all, it is a typical power grab fan fiction.
Review 2nd .....................................................................................................................................................
I'm not confident that my work is perfect but I like to gave my thoughts into a story which is this Fanfiction . Thanks for many readers who supported my work with that i will improve more
Best /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
in this case the advice should not be affected by all the comments that exist only use things that can be used as ideas in writing and don't be cynical about your work ⅓ it must be blasphemous but ¾ be supportive, and anyhow blaspheming they are still reading your work (maybe they are tsundere) and good you all studay ,see you
i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....
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I liked it a lot, wished that those 20 chapters weren't locked up in the laptop.
Please pick this up, great story we need more. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
perfekt ............................................................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem
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Sangat mirip dengan light novel yang sudah ada, OC hanya mengantikan posisi MC asli didalam cerita ini, alur cerita mirip dengan LN dan hanya ada sedikit perubahan yang menjadikan ini berbeda dengan LN aslinya.
Reveal Spoiler 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋
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Reveal Spoiler Good job ..............................................................................................................................................................................
Hello, the author finally I can read it after a month. I hope can read the next chapter. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
perfect . ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
mejor ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Typical power grab story. The story is ok and didn’t disappoint the readers. Grammar can be improve more. Over all, it is a typical power grab fan fiction.
Review 2nd .....................................................................................................................................................
I'm not confident that my work is perfect but I like to gave my thoughts into a story which is this Fanfiction . Thanks for many readers who supported my work with that i will improve more
Best /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
in this case the advice should not be affected by all the comments that exist only use things that can be used as ideas in writing and don't be cynical about your work ⅓ it must be blasphemous but ¾ be supportive, and anyhow blaspheming they are still reading your work (maybe they are tsundere) and good you all studay ,see you
i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....i wish for not drop early....
Haremm?????.....................+_+_+_++__+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+__++_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+__++_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+4+_+_+_+_+_+_+4++4+4+44+4+4+4+4+4+
I liked it a lot, wished that those 20 chapters weren't locked up in the laptop.