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This book kills me. Not because of any overwhelmingly insignificant flaws in world building, and character behaviors, but because of the magnetism it has, and the way I just can’t stop thinking about it. You can easily see wonderfully complex character design in Hela, and every single person she interacts with. I think it’s amazing that every character can have a personality beyond what the MCU has already provided. Not only that, the depth to all the elements in this imagined Asgard truly take my breath away. The only thing I hate is the fact that as of now, there just isn’t enough of it. I have sky high hopes for this novel and I can’t wait to see where it goes.
Why aren’t more people reading this!? Seriously the world development alone is outstanding but even the characters are developed. This story’s got to be one of the best on this site. Not to mention I don’t have to Jedi mind trick myself into understand what the Author is trying to convey in the story. It’s well written and the chapters that are released are satisfying in length and quality. I hope you’ve got nothing going on this afternoon, because once you start this you’re going to be spending it reading this!
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The story definitely had potential if the author didn't drop it. Nonetheless it was a good read, as short as it was.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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Так,русские, мой отзыв. Я не совсем понимаю прикола перса. Бабе уже за второй десяток или около того. Такая все умная и т.д, но вот когда приходит Фригга, она ведет себя как 5 летний ребенок , обижается на Одина, что он не предупредил ее и тд. А потом у нее бомбит , что он так быстро забыл Ангрбоду. А дальше она волнуется , что он так быстро забудет ее , после рождения Тора. Вы это серьезно? Ты взрослый человек , что за дичь? I don't quite understand this character's joke. This woman is already in her second decade or so. She is so smart, etc., but when Frigga comes, she behaves like a 5-year-old child, resents Odin for not warning her, etc. And then it dawns on her that he forgot Angrboda so quickly. And then she worries that he will forget her so quickly after the birth of Thor. Are you serious? You're an adult, what game are you playing?
I really love this book, it's so good and the characters development too, so sad it's only seventeen chapters 😢😢😢 AUTHOR you need to continue writing this pls
this is without a doubt the best novel i've read, everything is top notch from writhing quality to world background, EVERYTHING! i've already read it many times if only there were more updates and i never thought i'd say this but i'm ready to pay just to read more
I want this book to continue because this is the best story on this entire website. The quality is amazing and the world building is even better. I hope the author can update soon.
This is a fantastic book and one of my favorites! I'm hoping this book isn't cancelled because I'm interested in seeing what happens next. Excellent work by the way I hope you continue writing stories like this. 😀👍
please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
THIS IS A SUPER DUPER MASTERPIECE, i hope it won't get dropped, i really can't wait for updates🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️🔥♥️🔥♥️♥️
I already love and cannot wait to read some more. Please continue! Seriously, I never thought that I could find a Self-Insert on this site and was so ecstatic when I did.
this is by no doubt the best thing i've ever read in this site the writing quality is top notch, usually i don't really write reviews cuz i don't know how to write one but in this case i just couldn't help myself, this novel is a pure masterpiece i really thank the author for writing such an amazing story all i can say is u won't regret reading it. the only thing that i hope for is stable updates but ut's too amazing that i can't even complain about that
I have no complaints regarding this story besides, you know, the frequency of updating so i only gave the updating stability 3 stars. It was originally supposed to be only 1 star, but i don't really want to be the reason for this story's overall review rating to lower than it already is. . . . Seriously , if you update more regularly, i swear this story would always stay on top of any ratings that it could possibly be. I'm not really forcing you to update daily. I know I'm not the only one hoping here that you'll update even if it's once every month. So please update more 🙏😭🙏
Great SI-OC fic, whose Thor’s older sister and she wants to improve things. Not a Mary Sue and the story isn’t focused of mushy romance. We as readers are thrown back into Asgard’s past, before the golden city and get to see the OC rise in her power. We might also see cavemen and dinosaurs on Midgard, still hoping! Good World set up, pacing and grammar as well. A very interesting read indeed!
I’m a real big fan of this story and i really like how you’ve developed Hela and how you are changing Asgard, i also like how Fenrir is found. keep up the good work.
The only reason I didn't give you 5 stars is because of your extremely slow update speed. exp...............................................
Loving your story but I have a question. Is Hela going to be in a romantic relationship and if so is it going to be heterosexual or homosexual. (totally not hoping for some yuri action with Hela and Brunnhilde) Btw is everything ok cuz it's been a long time since the previous update.
I absolutely loved it but it seems to have been a long while aice the last update so I am going to cry myself to sleep tonight :( anyway this for the good read
Iam in love with this story. Cant wait wats next, it is one of the moust good fanfics in marvel. And i cant wait to see whats next. Thank you for amazing work, stay healthy and happy.
i love this book :3 ....................................................... . . . .
I really like this story ....................................................................................................................................
amazing book loved it!! You are almost at a million!!!!!!!!!! So proud of you!! Continue how you are doing and trust by the end of the next chapter you will be even closer!!
Just perfect! Ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
I have to say that it is a new breeze after all that same old Xian xia and would like to read it all It would be so good if the chapter were released more frequently. I hope you won't drop it . best wishes And waiting for more
It is just perfect... :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Good Novel!! a Masterpiece!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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very interesting character development and prose, love the interactions that hella have with odin and "the queen" i hope there will bw more interaction with valkiries
Outstanding! This is a refreshing read and has a permanent place in my library. The way this was written flowed like a movie in my mind and I thank you Author for deciding to write and share your work with us. I can't believe it's only 7 chapters in as I am writing this review and it feels like I've known these characters for years. Read this story, trust me.
This book kills me. Not because of any overwhelmingly insignificant flaws in world building, and character behaviors, but because of the magnetism it has, and the way I just can’t stop thinking about it. You can easily see wonderfully complex character design in Hela, and every single person she interacts with. I think it’s amazing that every character can have a personality beyond what the MCU has already provided. Not only that, the depth to all the elements in this imagined Asgard truly take my breath away. The only thing I hate is the fact that as of now, there just isn’t enough of it. I have sky high hopes for this novel and I can’t wait to see where it goes.
Why aren’t more people reading this!? Seriously the world development alone is outstanding but even the characters are developed. This story’s got to be one of the best on this site. Not to mention I don’t have to Jedi mind trick myself into understand what the Author is trying to convey in the story. It’s well written and the chapters that are released are satisfying in length and quality. I hope you’ve got nothing going on this afternoon, because once you start this you’re going to be spending it reading this!
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The story definitely had potential if the author didn't drop it. Nonetheless it was a good read, as short as it was.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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Так,русские, мой отзыв. Я не совсем понимаю прикола перса. Бабе уже за второй десяток или около того. Такая все умная и т.д, но вот когда приходит Фригга, она ведет себя как 5 летний ребенок , обижается на Одина, что он не предупредил ее и тд. А потом у нее бомбит , что он так быстро забыл Ангрбоду. А дальше она волнуется , что он так быстро забудет ее , после рождения Тора. Вы это серьезно? Ты взрослый человек , что за дичь? I don't quite understand this character's joke. This woman is already in her second decade or so. She is so smart, etc., but when Frigga comes, she behaves like a 5-year-old child, resents Odin for not warning her, etc. And then it dawns on her that he forgot Angrboda so quickly. And then she worries that he will forget her so quickly after the birth of Thor. Are you serious? You're an adult, what game are you playing?
I really love this book, it's so good and the characters development too, so sad it's only seventeen chapters 😢😢😢 AUTHOR you need to continue writing this pls
this is without a doubt the best novel i've read, everything is top notch from writhing quality to world background, EVERYTHING! i've already read it many times if only there were more updates and i never thought i'd say this but i'm ready to pay just to read more
I want this book to continue because this is the best story on this entire website. The quality is amazing and the world building is even better. I hope the author can update soon.
This is a fantastic book and one of my favorites! I'm hoping this book isn't cancelled because I'm interested in seeing what happens next. Excellent work by the way I hope you continue writing stories like this. 😀👍
please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update, please don't drop please update🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
THIS IS A SUPER DUPER MASTERPIECE, i hope it won't get dropped, i really can't wait for updates🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️🔥♥️🔥♥️♥️
I already love and cannot wait to read some more. Please continue! Seriously, I never thought that I could find a Self-Insert on this site and was so ecstatic when I did.
this is by no doubt the best thing i've ever read in this site the writing quality is top notch, usually i don't really write reviews cuz i don't know how to write one but in this case i just couldn't help myself, this novel is a pure masterpiece i really thank the author for writing such an amazing story all i can say is u won't regret reading it. the only thing that i hope for is stable updates but ut's too amazing that i can't even complain about that
I have no complaints regarding this story besides, you know, the frequency of updating so i only gave the updating stability 3 stars. It was originally supposed to be only 1 star, but i don't really want to be the reason for this story's overall review rating to lower than it already is. . . . Seriously , if you update more regularly, i swear this story would always stay on top of any ratings that it could possibly be. I'm not really forcing you to update daily. I know I'm not the only one hoping here that you'll update even if it's once every month. So please update more 🙏😭🙏
Great SI-OC fic, whose Thor’s older sister and she wants to improve things. Not a Mary Sue and the story isn’t focused of mushy romance. We as readers are thrown back into Asgard’s past, before the golden city and get to see the OC rise in her power. We might also see cavemen and dinosaurs on Midgard, still hoping! Good World set up, pacing and grammar as well. A very interesting read indeed!
I’m a real big fan of this story and i really like how you’ve developed Hela and how you are changing Asgard, i also like how Fenrir is found. keep up the good work.
The only reason I didn't give you 5 stars is because of your extremely slow update speed. exp...............................................
Loving your story but I have a question. Is Hela going to be in a romantic relationship and if so is it going to be heterosexual or homosexual. (totally not hoping for some yuri action with Hela and Brunnhilde) Btw is everything ok cuz it's been a long time since the previous update.
I absolutely loved it but it seems to have been a long while aice the last update so I am going to cry myself to sleep tonight :( anyway this for the good read
Iam in love with this story. Cant wait wats next, it is one of the moust good fanfics in marvel. And i cant wait to see whats next. Thank you for amazing work, stay healthy and happy.
i love this book :3 ....................................................... . . . .
I really like this story ....................................................................................................................................
amazing book loved it!! You are almost at a million!!!!!!!!!! So proud of you!! Continue how you are doing and trust by the end of the next chapter you will be even closer!!
Just perfect! Ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
I have to say that it is a new breeze after all that same old Xian xia and would like to read it all It would be so good if the chapter were released more frequently. I hope you won't drop it . best wishes And waiting for more
It is just perfect... :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
........................................................ ........................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Good Novel!! a Masterpiece!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
Reveal Spoiler very interesting character development and prose, love the interactions that hella have with odin and "the queen" i hope there will bw more interaction with valkiries
Outstanding! This is a refreshing read and has a permanent place in my library. The way this was written flowed like a movie in my mind and I thank you Author for deciding to write and share your work with us. I can't believe it's only 7 chapters in as I am writing this review and it feels like I've known these characters for years. Read this story, trust me.