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I think it's a good story, there's nothing too excessive, Harry's development is good neither too slow nor too fast, only in love interest that I'm afraid, but other than that it's a good story to pass the time Acho uma boa história, não tem nada muito excessivo, o desenvolvimento do Harry é bom nem muito lento nem muito rápido, só em interesse amoroso que estou com receio , mas tirando isso é uma boa história pra passar o tempo
Thanks for coming back. We missed you. Good so far but updates are sooooooo far between. Please don't drop and continue writing. Don't leave us in the dark.🐱
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Nice work a bit slow but good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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its nice... i read the first 6 chapters will wait to read more when harry reaches hogwarts ..................................................................
I periodically check to see if you have posted anything else here. The story was going so good too. Missing you here in the cold limbo while waiting for more updates. Please continue.
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I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and am hoping for an update soon. While I have a very basic understanding of some of the elements you used in this I was able to get a basic understanding of it so I was not lost or confused by it.
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Awesome story love the spin from cannon love the characters and love how all the stuff that happened were all thought out properly and not forced like some other stories i have tried reading before
Phoenix1998 Fuck you you fucking Spam Bot and all other spambots to ............................................................................................................................................
Ok...so....the story is awesome....I mean the characterisation and descriptions are on point an the story development seems natural (especially the romance parts) it does not do well to rush things...better take them slow That's how I like it Now in emoji language: 👍🥰🤩💙💚💙😊😁🖤🤍💜😁👍👌
It's a pretty good story overall. Minor spelling errors and grammatical mistakes have made me slightly lower its rating but overall it's a good read unless you're a gammar nazi.
Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
🌹💎 I like the story so far. I hope it isn't dropped like so many other fan fictions. Updates are a little slow but so are others. Keep up the good work.
Just finished binge reading this story. Its really good, definitely want more chapters and faster releases. For feedback I suggest you don't worry so much about quality because its pretty darn good already.
An enjoyable story of how Harry becomes smarter after his run in with the Dementors and his new group of friends, with their various abilities and counsel. It's through their counsel that Harry starts maneuvering through the political scene and starts to increase his strength and influence while uncovering the secrets kept from him. Thoroughly enjoying the story. Definitely worth the read
I like the thought process you have taken while writing this book you have taken elements from the original story and then added your own to create a whole entire different parallel universe or potterverse if you like so I hope that you continue to update this book at least once a week so I can enjoy your intelligence thank you
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I think it's a good story, there's nothing too excessive, Harry's development is good neither too slow nor too fast, only in love interest that I'm afraid, but other than that it's a good story to pass the time Acho uma boa história, não tem nada muito excessivo, o desenvolvimento do Harry é bom nem muito lento nem muito rápido, só em interesse amoroso que estou com receio , mas tirando isso é uma boa história pra passar o tempo
Thanks for coming back. We missed you. Good so far but updates are sooooooo far between. Please don't drop and continue writing. Don't leave us in the dark.🐱
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Nice work a bit slow but good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more
its nice... i read the first 6 chapters will wait to read more when harry reaches hogwarts ..................................................................
I periodically check to see if you have posted anything else here. The story was going so good too. Missing you here in the cold limbo while waiting for more updates. Please continue.
🌹💎more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and am hoping for an update soon. While I have a very basic understanding of some of the elements you used in this I was able to get a basic understanding of it so I was not lost or confused by it.
NEED MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🥳😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🥳
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Awesome story love the spin from cannon love the characters and love how all the stuff that happened were all thought out properly and not forced like some other stories i have tried reading before
Phoenix1998 Fuck you you fucking Spam Bot and all other spambots to ............................................................................................................................................
Ok...so....the story is awesome....I mean the characterisation and descriptions are on point an the story development seems natural (especially the romance parts) it does not do well to rush things...better take them slow That's how I like it Now in emoji language: 👍🥰🤩💙💚💙😊😁🖤🤍💜😁👍👌
It's a pretty good story overall. Minor spelling errors and grammatical mistakes have made me slightly lower its rating but overall it's a good read unless you're a gammar nazi.
Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
🌹💎 I like the story so far. I hope it isn't dropped like so many other fan fictions. Updates are a little slow but so are others. Keep up the good work.
Just finished binge reading this story. Its really good, definitely want more chapters and faster releases. For feedback I suggest you don't worry so much about quality because its pretty darn good already.
An enjoyable story of how Harry becomes smarter after his run in with the Dementors and his new group of friends, with their various abilities and counsel. It's through their counsel that Harry starts maneuvering through the political scene and starts to increase his strength and influence while uncovering the secrets kept from him. Thoroughly enjoying the story. Definitely worth the read
I like the thought process you have taken while writing this book you have taken elements from the original story and then added your own to create a whole entire different parallel universe or potterverse if you like so I hope that you continue to update this book at least once a week so I can enjoy your intelligence thank you
Good good good good good good good good good good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍keep the hard work keep the hard work 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Please come back and finish this. It was going so well.