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hello, Its nice fanfic with addition of haki's , nice story development and pls dont drop this fanfic thx expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpex
Fantastic. I will say this first. But i like this midoriya other than the original. He still have his hero sense but more confident maybe because he had a quirk or just he really confident then character development is okey but kinda lacking some sense more importantly dont add HAREM it. Will ruin the whole story and i like more if kendo is the one he will married instead of uraraka.
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I like your writings in fanfiction small story but fucking awesome please don't drop any fanfics👍👍👌 And by the way I very much like your previous novel I enjoyed it very much you can also create harem I know many say against it but most of them dont mind you know Genrally mostly man read the male lead fanfics AND NO FUCKING STRAIGHT MAN NEGLECT MORE BEAUTIES
His name should be jade emperor It sounds cool and it goes with his character and the way you described his body when he uses all for one 100%
I really like your works.. Especially the fact that you want to finish them. Keep up the good work and thanks.. You really made my day with the harry potter ff !😄
I was hesitant at first when I read the description, but I've been very happy with how this story is progressing. Thank you for your wonderful writing that has brought me laughter and many smiles. 😁😁😁
💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 I really like this fanfic and one for thing is that izuku is not a f*cking pus*y who keeps talking sh*t from others asked apologizes for everything like a coward.
Excellent story, i really enjoyed it, especially when you find all stories in web-novel are all repetitive. i hope you can update the story soon.
Este fanfic vale mucho la pena, si quieres un Fanfic bueno de BNHA este es una recomendación totalmente acertada siempre y cuando no seas un enfermo de la trama original. (≧▽≦)
This an amazing fanfic with a badass MC. well author you did a terrific job can’t wait for more 👍.
Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood)
Well this fanfic is much better than the original story.. I hate the original midoriya when i watch the anime.. How can the victim always apologize to someone who always bully him since they still kid
Great fanfic with lots of original content while showing a deep understanding of the world of BNHA/MHA and the characters of that world. Interesting interactions with some comedic content and well written fight scenes leave the reader wanting more chapters as soon as possible.
This is a great story premise and is well written. There are a few things that need work but I do like how Izuku is 'overpowered' but still improving without being 'godlike' [yet].
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You made a fic where Midoria isn’t a sniveling little b.itch. Thank you! You just fixed the main reason why I can’t bear to read the original.
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Really like the idea of using haki style quirk and expanding on it sounds dope can't wait to see where you take it, I also like the sort of antihero vibe that midoriya has at the moment rather than a sort of well meaning clueless geek.
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noice i like the story so far but you need to add more details to the characters plz other than that your good ty for the chapter :3 [Filler.................]
I like the story but the pace of it is really is to fast.Theres so much more you can write about in the prologue of the story before the canon starts but all you write is he gets a quirk when kachan bullys him.He basically makes no friends and stays lowner where he only talks with his mum as a friend until he gets into UA.Hes more mature but also abit upfront with people.The way you write his personality makes it seem like he dosent even want to talk to the other charachters. Over all the first impression of the novel wasent bad per say,but I felt like I was reading a really plain and stright to the action novel where he skips past that charachter interaction and goes stright to the action plays.
THIS IS ALL MY OPINION SO I COULD BE WRONG: As much as I like this novel there's something that annoys me about it and that is your understanding of Bakugo. A lot like basically every author who makes a fanfic about MHA you misunderstood his character. Bakugo isn't some unreasonable bully who bullies everybody, his problem is that everyone he knew basically worshipped him once he got his quirk and it all went to his head, so when Midoriya who was quirkless treated him as an equal he thought Midoriya was looking down on him so he got angry and bullied him. When he found out Midoriya had a powerful quirk he got angry because he thought that Midoriya lied to him all these years and was still looking down on him. When they fought after All Might retired we are shown that he felt responsible for All Might's retirement. What I understand from all of this is that Bakugo was placed on a pedestal as a child so it messed up the execution of his ideals and he got angry at one of the very few people who treated him as an equal because he felt he was being looked down on, but deep down I think he knew that his only real friend was Midoriya. When he found out Midoriya had a quirk he felt betrayed by him and lashed out. Bakugo has been stated by Midoriya to be someone who has an incredible desire to be an hero and also the best of his generation. This is just my opinion on the matter, I love this story keep it up
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hello, Its nice fanfic with addition of haki's , nice story development and pls dont drop this fanfic thx expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpex
Fantastic. I will say this first. But i like this midoriya other than the original. He still have his hero sense but more confident maybe because he had a quirk or just he really confident then character development is okey but kinda lacking some sense more importantly dont add HAREM it. Will ruin the whole story and i like more if kendo is the one he will married instead of uraraka.
Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌Good Good 👍😊👌👍😁👌👌
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I like your writings in fanfiction small story but fucking awesome please don't drop any fanfics👍👍👌 And by the way I very much like your previous novel I enjoyed it very much you can also create harem I know many say against it but most of them dont mind you know Genrally mostly man read the male lead fanfics AND NO FUCKING STRAIGHT MAN NEGLECT MORE BEAUTIES
His name should be jade emperor It sounds cool and it goes with his character and the way you described his body when he uses all for one 100%
I really like your works.. Especially the fact that you want to finish them. Keep up the good work and thanks.. You really made my day with the harry potter ff !😄
I was hesitant at first when I read the description, but I've been very happy with how this story is progressing. Thank you for your wonderful writing that has brought me laughter and many smiles. 😁😁😁
💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎 I really like this fanfic and one for thing is that izuku is not a f*cking pus*y who keeps talking sh*t from others asked apologizes for everything like a coward.
Excellent story, i really enjoyed it, especially when you find all stories in web-novel are all repetitive. i hope you can update the story soon.
Este fanfic vale mucho la pena, si quieres un Fanfic bueno de BNHA este es una recomendación totalmente acertada siempre y cuando no seas un enfermo de la trama original. (≧▽≦)
This an amazing fanfic with a badass MC. well author you did a terrific job can’t wait for more 👍.
Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood) Goooooooooooooood)
Well this fanfic is much better than the original story.. I hate the original midoriya when i watch the anime.. How can the victim always apologize to someone who always bully him since they still kid
Great fanfic with lots of original content while showing a deep understanding of the world of BNHA/MHA and the characters of that world. Interesting interactions with some comedic content and well written fight scenes leave the reader wanting more chapters as soon as possible.
This is a great story premise and is well written. There are a few things that need work but I do like how Izuku is 'overpowered' but still improving without being 'godlike' [yet].
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You made a fic where Midoria isn’t a sniveling little b.itch. Thank you! You just fixed the main reason why I can’t bear to read the original.
Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee Mmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeee
Really like the idea of using haki style quirk and expanding on it sounds dope can't wait to see where you take it, I also like the sort of antihero vibe that midoriya has at the moment rather than a sort of well meaning clueless geek.
Reveal Spoiler noice i like the story so far but you need to add more details to the characters plz other than that your good ty for the chapter :3 [Filler.................]
I like the story but the pace of it is really is to fast.Theres so much more you can write about in the prologue of the story before the canon starts but all you write is he gets a quirk when kachan bullys him.He basically makes no friends and stays lowner where he only talks with his mum as a friend until he gets into UA.Hes more mature but also abit upfront with people.The way you write his personality makes it seem like he dosent even want to talk to the other charachters. Over all the first impression of the novel wasent bad per say,but I felt like I was reading a really plain and stright to the action novel where he skips past that charachter interaction and goes stright to the action plays.
THIS IS ALL MY OPINION SO I COULD BE WRONG: As much as I like this novel there's something that annoys me about it and that is your understanding of Bakugo. A lot like basically every author who makes a fanfic about MHA you misunderstood his character. Bakugo isn't some unreasonable bully who bullies everybody, his problem is that everyone he knew basically worshipped him once he got his quirk and it all went to his head, so when Midoriya who was quirkless treated him as an equal he thought Midoriya was looking down on him so he got angry and bullied him. When he found out Midoriya had a powerful quirk he got angry because he thought that Midoriya lied to him all these years and was still looking down on him. When they fought after All Might retired we are shown that he felt responsible for All Might's retirement. What I understand from all of this is that Bakugo was placed on a pedestal as a child so it messed up the execution of his ideals and he got angry at one of the very few people who treated him as an equal because he felt he was being looked down on, but deep down I think he knew that his only real friend was Midoriya. When he found out Midoriya had a quirk he felt betrayed by him and lashed out. Bakugo has been stated by Midoriya to be someone who has an incredible desire to be an hero and also the best of his generation. This is just my opinion on the matter, I love this story keep it up
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