A lord betrayed born-again as a selfish demon!

LV 3

ACatInABag

(Hi this the author-san here and this is my second review my own work. Now I would say there’s definitely been a market improvement since the early beginnings of this little shindig of poor writing. But still I think there is opportunity for me to greatly improve this, especially the editing… That I think that is the most problematic thing about this little story of mine. At times there can be many errors which are cause by the use of a voice to text software. (p.s if you wonder why I use that is because my spelling is well terrible.) As well as the fact that I write whole thing usually sleep deprived and hopped up on caffeine. There is also a marked problem with grammar and punctuation; this is mostly due to my own poor understanding of grammar and punctuation… also there’s only so much Microsoft Word can help. But not only that there is also a problem with plot progression now this is mostly due to the fact that I don’t use a flow charter really structure or anything…I just kind of write. But in truth the really the biggest problem with this whole thing is that I’m not editing even though I know I should… It’s just that I’m a lazy bastard you can tell if you look at the rate I upload chapters. Now would I recommend this… If I were to be honest, Maybe? It’s definitely not terrible; you can easily find many worse stories out there. But in good conscious can’t call this good, at most it’s okay to mediocre. But I would as an author much appreciates anyone who does read this. The few people who already have this in their collection brings me well… great joy :D )

LV 10

TurtleManiacc

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LV 3

ACatInABag

(hello this is the author, and this is my review of my own work…… Meh? I wouldn’t say this is well complete horrible but I would not call this amazing either. Truth be told there is not enough written yet to say for sure. all I can say is that it’s much better than…. Some things you’ll find….. Well anyways anyone who does read this, who gives criticism and review would be much obliged and will have my many thanks :D !)