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Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.
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I really good hope it continues in future ... and see how dar the MC go's to be a one punch ninja😂😂😅 And hopefully get to see Alpha back in story later on
Why does this review need to be more than 140 characters??? Ugh. It's a good read. That's all you need to know.......................done
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There are a few problems with this story. Spelling/grammar/sentence-structures, the fast pacing and the psychotic MC who asks his system to kill it self. The author fails to connect the reader with the characters emotionally and I personally don't feel bad for the MC. He deserves to live miserably due to being an ass. If you want an okay OP story you can give this a read, but there is better ones you can sink time into.
My anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't dropMy anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't dropMy anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't drop
I love it, can't wait for more. You are very talented with writing, I will be checking your other book. I hope it's even better than this one.
Got click baited in reading this novel, can't ya do something about that- That night xxx were attacking, system says MC to grow from 8 month old baby into 3 year old boy and alert his parents who are sleeping beside him, I really would have freaked out if the dad was me.
Realy like the story and the part where you mixed naeuto and opm but as I'm an thirsty reader who always strives for more your unstable realeses hurt me a lot.
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Mc is so stupidity kind.... gg... You know its naruto world...Start with the chapter which he try to save village and almost die.... I like the way of power setting so I keep reading though.... (I almost stop reading because of that Saint MC.....)
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This a good fan fic of Naruto and one punch man. The rate of release is bad. I think the author has stopped writing this novel.,🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Hello author kun I like your novel and would like to continue reading it I also hope you don't drop your work. It bring joy to one and do your best .. I'll be rooting for you.
Good read for Naruto x one piece fan however there are very few chapters . Author bro can you step up your game ? <3 P.S I don't like 140 character requirement for review post
It’s an interesting book, and I’ll keep reading it. Kwmidneis,oakdow,mdiskfnifklelsodoslkdisildoodlsoskkdksodlolosjjsidnwkwkUgtfesdtvgyhUjio
It is very good. *Mike dropped*. Smjsnsjnsuduwjdkeknwjdndudnwjsmdkdmwjdnkwlwkskdidjejnejrjrmekemdksmlwmsksjsksmdiemdidnddjejkemdksjdkdmdkdksmsmdkekdmdiejdkdmwkekdmdkekekekekemekmdkemekdkddkkdkddkdkkekekekkej
I really like this book and its characters but I think that jiyuu shouldn't be so cold hearted in the beginning but after the author explained why I understood,really recommend this book
There are a few problems with this story. Spelling/grammar/sentence-structures, the fast pacing and the psychotic MC who asks his system to kill it self. The author fails to connect the reader with the characters emotionally and I personally don't feel bad for the MC. He deserves to live miserably due to being an ass. If you want an okay OP story you can give this a read, but there is better ones you can sink time into.
I stopped reading as soon as the writer started with the dialogues. These dialogue format just makes the writer seem really lazy. What is with these newer fictions always being written in this terrible style and format
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This is a weird one, it's interesting, keeps me reading, but I also feel like I got lied to. Why? Well, the title of course. He wishes for Saitama power, but is immediately told that's impossible and he needs to gradually earn strength. He's given a system, but it's immediately destroyed, then reborn, then altered, I guess the author just couldn't decide how they wanted it to go, so it ends up going in every direction. Again, what was written turned out good, but really needs a different name.
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Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.
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I really good hope it continues in future ... and see how dar the MC go's to be a one punch ninja😂😂😅 And hopefully get to see Alpha back in story later on
Why does this review need to be more than 140 characters??? Ugh. It's a good read. That's all you need to know.......................done
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There are a few problems with this story. Spelling/grammar/sentence-structures, the fast pacing and the psychotic MC who asks his system to kill it self. The author fails to connect the reader with the characters emotionally and I personally don't feel bad for the MC. He deserves to live miserably due to being an ass. If you want an okay OP story you can give this a read, but there is better ones you can sink time into.
My anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't dropMy anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't dropMy anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't drop
I love it, can't wait for more. You are very talented with writing, I will be checking your other book. I hope it's even better than this one.
Got click baited in reading this novel, can't ya do something about that- That night xxx were attacking, system says MC to grow from 8 month old baby into 3 year old boy and alert his parents who are sleeping beside him, I really would have freaked out if the dad was me.
Realy like the story and the part where you mixed naeuto and opm but as I'm an thirsty reader who always strives for more your unstable realeses hurt me a lot.
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Mc is so stupidity kind.... gg... You know its naruto world...Start with the chapter which he try to save village and almost die.... I like the way of power setting so I keep reading though.... (I almost stop reading because of that Saint MC.....)
Reveal Spoiler This a good fan fic of Naruto and one punch man. The rate of release is bad. I think the author has stopped writing this novel.,🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Hello author kun I like your novel and would like to continue reading it I also hope you don't drop your work. It bring joy to one and do your best .. I'll be rooting for you.
Good read for Naruto x one piece fan however there are very few chapters . Author bro can you step up your game ? <3 P.S I don't like 140 character requirement for review post
It’s an interesting book, and I’ll keep reading it. Kwmidneis,oakdow,mdiskfnifklelsodoslkdisildoodlsoskkdksodlolosjjsidnwkwkUgtfesdtvgyhUjio
It is very good. *Mike dropped*. Smjsnsjnsuduwjdkeknwjdndudnwjsmdkdmwjdnkwlwkskdidjejnejrjrmekemdksmlwmsksjsksmdiemdidnddjejkemdksjdkdmdkdksmsmdkekdmdiejdkdmwkekdmdkekekekekemekmdkemekdkddkkdkddkdkkekekekkej
I really like this book and its characters but I think that jiyuu shouldn't be so cold hearted in the beginning but after the author explained why I understood,really recommend this book
There are a few problems with this story. Spelling/grammar/sentence-structures, the fast pacing and the psychotic MC who asks his system to kill it self. The author fails to connect the reader with the characters emotionally and I personally don't feel bad for the MC. He deserves to live miserably due to being an ass. If you want an okay OP story you can give this a read, but there is better ones you can sink time into.
I stopped reading as soon as the writer started with the dialogues. These dialogue format just makes the writer seem really lazy. What is with these newer fictions always being written in this terrible style and format
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This is a weird one, it's interesting, keeps me reading, but I also feel like I got lied to. Why? Well, the title of course. He wishes for Saitama power, but is immediately told that's impossible and he needs to gradually earn strength. He's given a system, but it's immediately destroyed, then reborn, then altered, I guess the author just couldn't decide how they wanted it to go, so it ends up going in every direction. Again, what was written turned out good, but really needs a different name.
