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Quite disappointed that this was dropped. But for the chapters already there, it was an entertaining read in my opinion. Though i wish there were a lot more conversations the audience wanted like reuniting wanda and pietro with magneto and stuff
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One of the best novel I've ever read..WQ..it is well written and story flow is good..there isn't any problem in reading SD...All aspects are considered properly..story is fast paced and there aren't any plot holes..novel is dropped by author now as MC is already in the big league and can take control of all the problems...until unless multiverse is brought there won't be any use of MC taking any action CD...MC is pragmatic and considers all factors before taking actions..has long term planning...uses his power efficiently....MC is dealing behind the shadows as he doesn't want the fate to be angered..other characters are also well portrayedUS.. well novel is dropped for many years WB...fully exposed the Marvel world..MC travels the universe time to time..he also developed a planet for his base...
Tipo assim: Saí de uma fic do universo Naruto, onde o mc de apenas 6 meses fez um passeio pela aldeia, ameaçou ninjas e comeu lanches á vontade. HORRORIZADO com tal roteiro, encontrei A ATUAL FIC. Resumindo, só aumentou meu trauma. Autores, pelo amor de ROB e de tudo o que é mais sagrado, NÃO EXAGEREM EM SUAS ESCRITAS! O termo GÊNIO não denota que o personagem deve DOMINAR meio mundo de habilidades antes dos 5 anos! Aí, vocês quebras as costas do camelo! É de cair o cu da bunda!
Just really bad in almost every way imaginable. Protagonist is overpowered from the start but his actual character never evolves or develops.
Quite a interesting and intriguing book even more so with it being different from other ones the character and way how Elijah matured even from young age and more so when he got older also liked how he traveled to different planets and learn from there as well fighting the different races that there are not to mention way he beat Thor and was able to match with Surtur as well Hela is sure surprising but also all of the inventions that he created along with the A.I among also the companies and such look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this overall loved and enjoyed all of it
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Good more more good read need more saving in library ..........................................................................................................
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When is the next chapters coming out?please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I'l be able to read this book so please write this book soon thank u.!!.!.!.!.!!.!!.
Author please update. Uwbesvsbshdhhsbs kwnwnwbwhwhwbsbwbsbsbsbsbsbshshsbsjsjsususjsbsjejsushsgsvssgsgsysywuwhwhwbwbwnnwajkaiaiaisusudhdhdvddvdvrvr
78 chapters 2 years ago... seems it got dropped>_>........................................................................................................
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Well done!! This story is amazing i binged it in one aftertoon I really hope you come back to this story one day as it deserves to be contiued. Also create more stories as you are a talented writer
I like wish-fulfillment stories like that, but the way in which the lines are written are horrible (this way of putting a name before the lines completely takes away the immersion). the writing itself is good, but some improvements would be nice (I recommend grammarly). development is ok (but only because I know a lot about the marvel universe), I would recommend a little more explanation about the events or that it wasn't so rough. the update is negative, the author has completely given up on the story and it is not finished
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I was really enjoying this because its alotta fun and pls don't drop and continue writing its really funny sometimes and iwant more of this because its rare for me to find this kind of fanfict to find
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Really well done. The MC is OP but doesn't abuse his powers or totally screw up the timeline like some other MC's from fanfics. The romance relationships are nice, and it is an interesting read. Really wish that they author would continue writing though, kinda sad to see such a good work go unfinished.
Is this dropped? Too bad.....this story is amazing. Rhebebuebebeheueusiskwnq qbwvwsusisjsnsdbrvrcttxt t y uyxtvgrhrhrjebd rgrjd ruej ssgjdfbtvtcbebd
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Quite disappointed that this was dropped. But for the chapters already there, it was an entertaining read in my opinion. Though i wish there were a lot more conversations the audience wanted like reuniting wanda and pietro with magneto and stuff
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One of the best novel I've ever read..WQ..it is well written and story flow is good..there isn't any problem in reading SD...All aspects are considered properly..story is fast paced and there aren't any plot holes..novel is dropped by author now as MC is already in the big league and can take control of all the problems...until unless multiverse is brought there won't be any use of MC taking any action CD...MC is pragmatic and considers all factors before taking actions..has long term planning...uses his power efficiently....MC is dealing behind the shadows as he doesn't want the fate to be angered..other characters are also well portrayedUS.. well novel is dropped for many years WB...fully exposed the Marvel world..MC travels the universe time to time..he also developed a planet for his base...
Tipo assim: Saí de uma fic do universo Naruto, onde o mc de apenas 6 meses fez um passeio pela aldeia, ameaçou ninjas e comeu lanches á vontade. HORRORIZADO com tal roteiro, encontrei A ATUAL FIC. Resumindo, só aumentou meu trauma. Autores, pelo amor de ROB e de tudo o que é mais sagrado, NÃO EXAGEREM EM SUAS ESCRITAS! O termo GÊNIO não denota que o personagem deve DOMINAR meio mundo de habilidades antes dos 5 anos! Aí, vocês quebras as costas do camelo! É de cair o cu da bunda!
Just really bad in almost every way imaginable. Protagonist is overpowered from the start but his actual character never evolves or develops.
Quite a interesting and intriguing book even more so with it being different from other ones the character and way how Elijah matured even from young age and more so when he got older also liked how he traveled to different planets and learn from there as well fighting the different races that there are not to mention way he beat Thor and was able to match with Surtur as well Hela is sure surprising but also all of the inventions that he created along with the A.I among also the companies and such look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this overall loved and enjoyed all of it
Great work ..............................................................................................................................................
Good more more good read need more saving in library ..........................................................................................................
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When is the next chapters coming out?please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I'l be able to read this book so please write this book soon thank u.!!.!.!.!.!!.!!.
Author please update. Uwbesvsbshdhhsbs kwnwnwbwhwhwbsbwbsbsbsbsbsbshshsbsjsjsususjsbsjejsushsgsvssgsgsysywuwhwhwbwbwnnwajkaiaiaisusudhdhdvddvdvrvr
78 chapters 2 years ago... seems it got dropped>_>........................................................................................................
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Reveal Spoiler Well done!! This story is amazing i binged it in one aftertoon I really hope you come back to this story one day as it deserves to be contiued. Also create more stories as you are a talented writer
I like wish-fulfillment stories like that, but the way in which the lines are written are horrible (this way of putting a name before the lines completely takes away the immersion). the writing itself is good, but some improvements would be nice (I recommend grammarly). development is ok (but only because I know a lot about the marvel universe), I would recommend a little more explanation about the events or that it wasn't so rough. the update is negative, the author has completely given up on the story and it is not finished
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I was really enjoying this because its alotta fun and pls don't drop and continue writing its really funny sometimes and iwant more of this because its rare for me to find this kind of fanfict to find
Aku menyesal karena baru membacanya sekarang, ini cerita yang sangat luar biasa! Apakah penulis akan meneruskan ceritanya? Aku berharap akan, terimakasih penulis!
Really well done. The MC is OP but doesn't abuse his powers or totally screw up the timeline like some other MC's from fanfics. The romance relationships are nice, and it is an interesting read. Really wish that they author would continue writing though, kinda sad to see such a good work go unfinished.
Is this dropped? Too bad.....this story is amazing. Rhebebuebebeheueusiskwnq qbwvwsusisjsnsdbrvrcttxt t y uyxtvgrhrhrjebd rgrjd ruej ssgjdfbtvtcbebd
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the writer dead or what?this shows last updated about 4years ago