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great but needs to make the start less confusing and explain things more, like who is who and what some things mean. exp sect for life
Author update more this novel plz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭👍🏼😭😭😭👍🏼👍🏼😭👍🏼
While there are no improvement for the world of Knights and Magic, the introduction to Gundam wasn't too bad for someone like me who never watched/read it. Ernesti seems to stay similar although the addition of family for theme makes him more grounded. As for the MC, he quickly is shown to be a genius and while I don't fear him becoming a Gary Stu, I wonder how he will grow in this world. Overall, I recommend reading it.
His character is literally just lucky. There is no character building because the author just lazily allows the reader to remember the anime or novel. The main character has no passion. He literally just blindly moves forward. Mythic level tunnel vision and god level luck is the plot of this story. It’s just bad.
Update more chapters plz👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Story concept is amazing, especially how he remakes the whole concept of making mechs in the world (Not getting into specifics because that would ruin it for everyone). I would’ve never thought someone would combine the Gundam and Knights and Magic anime series together as most of the fanfiction seems to be focusing on systems in anime worlds with superhuman powers such as One Piece, DxD, Dragon Ball, and Boku no Hero. Having this fic without a system and 'I want the sharingan and a big d!ck' in it is incredibly refreshing. You should work on capitalization and describing the background of the places the characters are going more so that those who haven’t watched the anime or read the manga know what’s going on or they would be severely confused and may even drop because of it. Overall it’s fucking amazing and I hope you don’t drop this anytime soon or until you actually complete. Thanks for the great read!
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Creating Gundam, huh. Very good, I like it the way it is now. Anyways, very nice concept which definitely deserves five stars.
Still waiting for updates...................................................................................................................
Please don't die on me. It interesting, please upload more chapters. Okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok
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Omg finally something new u better not drop dear author keep on going till a 1000 chapers 😂😂😂😂 we will cheer u on muhahahahahha cant wait how you progress the story plz
so far is good ( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)
Its a fun story to read. I just hope you continue to write it as it has pontetial. Wish you the best and keep up the work.............................................
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It's good, just hope that you use capital letters when you start a paragraph.... ⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏
don't listing to haters keep up the great work ...................................................................................................................................
he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!
the fic was good I'm honestly sad it stopped updating this was the only Knights & Magic fanfic here 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
great but needs to make the start less confusing and explain things more, like who is who and what some things mean. exp sect for life
Author update more this novel plz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭👍🏼😭😭😭👍🏼👍🏼😭👍🏼
While there are no improvement for the world of Knights and Magic, the introduction to Gundam wasn't too bad for someone like me who never watched/read it. Ernesti seems to stay similar although the addition of family for theme makes him more grounded. As for the MC, he quickly is shown to be a genius and while I don't fear him becoming a Gary Stu, I wonder how he will grow in this world. Overall, I recommend reading it.
His character is literally just lucky. There is no character building because the author just lazily allows the reader to remember the anime or novel. The main character has no passion. He literally just blindly moves forward. Mythic level tunnel vision and god level luck is the plot of this story. It’s just bad.
Update more chapters plz👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!Knight & magic fan here!!!!!!!!
Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍Very nice 💣👏😍
Story concept is amazing, especially how he remakes the whole concept of making mechs in the world (Not getting into specifics because that would ruin it for everyone). I would’ve never thought someone would combine the Gundam and Knights and Magic anime series together as most of the fanfiction seems to be focusing on systems in anime worlds with superhuman powers such as One Piece, DxD, Dragon Ball, and Boku no Hero. Having this fic without a system and 'I want the sharingan and a big d!ck' in it is incredibly refreshing. You should work on capitalization and describing the background of the places the characters are going more so that those who haven’t watched the anime or read the manga know what’s going on or they would be severely confused and may even drop because of it. Overall it’s fucking amazing and I hope you don’t drop this anytime soon or until you actually complete. Thanks for the great read!
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Creating Gundam, huh. Very good, I like it the way it is now. Anyways, very nice concept which definitely deserves five stars.
Still waiting for updates...................................................................................................................
Please don't die on me. It interesting, please upload more chapters. Okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok
Reveal Spoiler Omg finally something new u better not drop dear author keep on going till a 1000 chapers 😂😂😂😂 we will cheer u on muhahahahahha cant wait how you progress the story plz
so far is good ( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)( ﾟдﾟ)
Its a fun story to read. I just hope you continue to write it as it has pontetial. Wish you the best and keep up the work.............................................
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE DONT DROP! 😭😱😫 MORE CHAPTERS!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
It's good, just hope that you use capital letters when you start a paragraph.... ⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏๏︿๏
don't listing to haters keep up the great work ...................................................................................................................................
he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!he creates the supphu legendaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DONGER!!!!!!
the fic was good I'm honestly sad it stopped updating this was the only Knights & Magic fanfic here 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻