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I like the storyline how much it reached... Its an interesting plotline where she knew she is dead in her real and wake up in another world. Yet she wanna help others to survive.
Interesting storyline and exciting characters... It's been quite an experience reading this book so far hope more updates. Well-done dear author. šššššššššš
Wow... Just came across this book by my dear author Caramel. I know this book would be an amazing one just like your previous book. Keep it up dear and gives us a wonderful riding experience with this book. šššššššššššššššššš
This is a review of the first fourteen chapters. The main character died in a fire at her home before transmigrating into a magic filled dating game world as cannon fodder. She became the noble half-sister who died instead of the main character. The girl decides that she does not want to die for someone who is essential a stranger to her, so tries to overturn her fate. Unfortunately, her loving father has placed a binding spell on her to make her protect her half-sister with her life. The story is slow paced at the beginning but increases speed as the girl ages. The magical background of the world has not been fully explored. The general social customs and relationships between nations were lightly touched on. The plot is mostly character based. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but these do not effect the plot.
I have not yet read this book but I am hoping that the story will be lovely like your past one. I have faith in your writing and I have faith in you.
Hello everyone, as of now I can't say anything about stability as the story just started but I have my trust on caramel. And the story doesn't disappoint me for now. I will write again when the novel reaches 50 chapters. But believe me with just 7 chapters it captured me. I love the development of characters and story background more in your novels caramel and I felt I could trust you with that with just these 7 chapters. I am looking forward for the chapters to come. All the best
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I like the storyline how much it reached... Its an interesting plotline where she knew she is dead in her real and wake up in another world. Yet she wanna help others to survive.
Interesting storyline and exciting characters... It's been quite an experience reading this book so far hope more updates. Well-done dear author. šššššššššš
Wow... Just came across this book by my dear author Caramel. I know this book would be an amazing one just like your previous book. Keep it up dear and gives us a wonderful riding experience with this book. šššššššššššššššššš
This is a review of the first fourteen chapters. The main character died in a fire at her home before transmigrating into a magic filled dating game world as cannon fodder. She became the noble half-sister who died instead of the main character. The girl decides that she does not want to die for someone who is essential a stranger to her, so tries to overturn her fate. Unfortunately, her loving father has placed a binding spell on her to make her protect her half-sister with her life. The story is slow paced at the beginning but increases speed as the girl ages. The magical background of the world has not been fully explored. The general social customs and relationships between nations were lightly touched on. The plot is mostly character based. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but these do not effect the plot.
I have not yet read this book but I am hoping that the story will be lovely like your past one. I have faith in your writing and I have faith in you.
Hello everyone, as of now I can't say anything about stability as the story just started but I have my trust on caramel. And the story doesn't disappoint me for now. I will write again when the novel reaches 50 chapters. But believe me with just 7 chapters it captured me. I love the development of characters and story background more in your novels caramel and I felt I could trust you with that with just these 7 chapters. I am looking forward for the chapters to come. All the best
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.