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For myself I just like the the story and want to see were goes in the future now keep these are my personal feeling and if have to say give a try before giving judgement you might like it
This one i like it very much it is awesome and plz update it and i support your novel so keep writing and i will see your other novels if u have any
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Great chapter great story so far however if he stays as a pokemon in pokemon it be boring. So if he could travel to other verses that be cool I mean imagine deathwing in avatar, mcu , narutoverse, one piece well actually one piece he'd fit right in. But maybe dragon ball gain some wishing powers or even become the disciple of the super dragon balls. Maybe visit azeroth . Gain the knowledge of how to make the game gear of the strongest sword god novel and make it in the Sao verse to undercut sword art online evil creator.
you said you will post in 1 week but now it become one year still we are not getting chapters. .why authour why. .... .. . ....... ... .... . .
For myself I just like the the story and want to see were goes in the future now keep these are my personal feeling and if have to say give a try before giving judgement you might like it
This one i like it very much it is awesome and plz update it and i support your novel so keep writing and i will see your other novels if u have any
10/10 i swear it's worth at least a Royale with cheese MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER MURMAIDER
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Great chapter great story so far however if he stays as a pokemon in pokemon it be boring. So if he could travel to other verses that be cool I mean imagine deathwing in avatar, mcu , narutoverse, one piece well actually one piece he'd fit right in. But maybe dragon ball gain some wishing powers or even become the disciple of the super dragon balls. Maybe visit azeroth . Gain the knowledge of how to make the game gear of the strongest sword god novel and make it in the Sao verse to undercut sword art online evil creator.
you said you will post in 1 week but now it become one year still we are not getting chapters. .why authour why. .... .. . ....... ... .... . .