Reviews of Bloody Mary (hunter x hunter fan-fic) by A_Random_Person - Webnovel

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Ralph_1660

interesting and enjoyed reading it plus loli mc.

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Lustful_Death

HE HAS RETURNED! THE PROPHECY IS TRUE!ก็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊

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Karuma_

Happy i stumbled upon this,different than my usual go to novel but i enjoyed it and it was fun reading it,thanks. _____________________________________ Need more words to post reveiw so wasting space

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Daoist105098

Cool 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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JaimeJam

Mary and Bloody Mary are like polar opposites, Bloody Mary is quite charming with her sadistic and violent personality, while Mary is gentle and caring with a shy personality.

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JaimeJam

Reading this is quite please to enjoy, I like taking my time to read this. It’s great that the character is extremely bloodthirsty, I like that in a chapter.

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Fullmetal

Interesting story, just want to see where it'll go from here. The Bloody Mary character needs to have some feelings for the original Mary otherwise i don't see what else can happen except somehow one of them getting killed but that would ruin the story for me as i got attached to the both of them and it is interesting with how contrasting they are to each other.

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PiceOfMetal

Bloody Mary was the best and you killed her it's **** so I dropped it Dddjjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdfjfjfhfjfjfjfjfjffjdjfjfjfjfjddjrjrjjjrurhrudurdd

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Vani_Mes

You know I really like the fact that there WONT be ANY LOVE INTEREST because sometimes some of the book I like doesn’t have the romance tag in it but in the end there romance in the novel I just only want to follow the MC adventures with no romance but somehow there will be at least one or two love interest and I really hate that.

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Saberswordguy

Good luck author.

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Suicidal_landfish

So far it is trying to make a story of it’s own and not just crashing the party and forcing to be the new mc and take all the girls.....then again the mc is a girl-ish

5yr
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darksidemoonman

good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story

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Alele
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Domn
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it is very good you should read it>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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LlMlTLESS

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elexis_brown

I think this fanfiction so far is really good. I would suggest this to anyone who likes hunter x hunter. It puts a good character into play.

5yr
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A_Random_Person

Rookie author, I’m writing this because of my love for hunter x hunter, I don’t feel as if I’m too good at anything when it comes to writing, but I’ll try my best. I can’t really promise daily chapters, but I’ll put a chapter out whenever I can. As the story progresses I’ll try to improve my writing abilities more to make the story better, while I do plan on following the main story I don’t plan on all events playing out the same. I personally believe that a main character shouldn’t be changed to be a background character for the sake of the original cast. As stated in the synopsis there will be quite a bit of gore, however it will NEVER be the main focus of the story. It will always be Mary’s game with the world. Thank you to all who have read my story thus far, and thank you to all who took the time to write any kind of comment, even just a simple thanks has given me more encouragement to write and improve.

5yr
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Sebastian1991

Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!

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RollingPanda

This is a early review but honestly I love how great the story is I’m a big fan of hunter x hunter and I love how well written your fanfic is keep it up.

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Ralph_1660

interesting and enjoyed reading it plus loli mc.

1yr
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Lustful_Death

HE HAS RETURNED! THE PROPHECY IS TRUE!ก็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊

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Karuma_

Happy i stumbled upon this,different than my usual go to novel but i enjoyed it and it was fun reading it,thanks. _____________________________________ Need more words to post reveiw so wasting space

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4yr
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Daoist105098

Cool 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

5yr
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JaimeJam

Mary and Bloody Mary are like polar opposites, Bloody Mary is quite charming with her sadistic and violent personality, while Mary is gentle and caring with a shy personality.

5yr
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JaimeJam

Reading this is quite please to enjoy, I like taking my time to read this. It’s great that the character is extremely bloodthirsty, I like that in a chapter.

5yr
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Fullmetal

Interesting story, just want to see where it'll go from here. The Bloody Mary character needs to have some feelings for the original Mary otherwise i don't see what else can happen except somehow one of them getting killed but that would ruin the story for me as i got attached to the both of them and it is interesting with how contrasting they are to each other.

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PiceOfMetal

Bloody Mary was the best and you killed her it's **** so I dropped it Dddjjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdfjfjfhfjfjfjfjfjffjdjfjfjfjfjddjrjrjjjrurhrudurdd

5yr
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Vani_Mes

You know I really like the fact that there WONT be ANY LOVE INTEREST because sometimes some of the book I like doesn’t have the romance tag in it but in the end there romance in the novel I just only want to follow the MC adventures with no romance but somehow there will be at least one or two love interest and I really hate that.

5yr
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Saberswordguy

Good luck author.

5yr
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Suicidal_landfish

So far it is trying to make a story of it’s own and not just crashing the party and forcing to be the new mc and take all the girls.....then again the mc is a girl-ish

5yr
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darksidemoonman

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Alele
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Domn
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it is very good you should read it>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

5yr
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LlMlTLESS

AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING!

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elexis_brown

I think this fanfiction so far is really good. I would suggest this to anyone who likes hunter x hunter. It puts a good character into play.

5yr
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A_Random_Person

Rookie author, I’m writing this because of my love for hunter x hunter, I don’t feel as if I’m too good at anything when it comes to writing, but I’ll try my best. I can’t really promise daily chapters, but I’ll put a chapter out whenever I can. As the story progresses I’ll try to improve my writing abilities more to make the story better, while I do plan on following the main story I don’t plan on all events playing out the same. I personally believe that a main character shouldn’t be changed to be a background character for the sake of the original cast. As stated in the synopsis there will be quite a bit of gore, however it will NEVER be the main focus of the story. It will always be Mary’s game with the world. Thank you to all who have read my story thus far, and thank you to all who took the time to write any kind of comment, even just a simple thanks has given me more encouragement to write and improve.

5yr
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Sebastian1991

Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!Thanks for the chapter~!

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RollingPanda

This is a early review but honestly I love how great the story is I’m a big fan of hunter x hunter and I love how well written your fanfic is keep it up.

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