Great Wizard Return to The Original World

LV 3

Ashhairboy

Kept it up 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 2

RESTIAA

That's why I like original novels. Most of the stories are unique and can't be found in the official novels. Though it's not as good as the official novels, but I like this novel. Keep going! purple purple

LV 4

Cindersen

I think your story is the best of the 74 prompts. It's the most original storyline with good writing and decent amount of updates. While it's good to listen to advice, don't worry too much about any critiques. You're doing well.

I like the the story. though it still a bit messy in early chapter, it still readable and your writting improved so well. Like it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 3

khannur

Great novel, great author. please dont drop this. Vote vote vote~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~

LV 3

squirtle_sqaud_z

It is good but is not good as one punch girl you will try it it's awesome you will became a huge fan of it it doesn't have twists and turns and one punch girl has it all .

LV 2

Curseman

This is a great novel, tho it only has little chapters but the story developed well. Characters and plot story were written well. I hope you don't drop this...