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The overall story is good but the story was somehow hard to understand you need to elaborate more please so that we can understand she was kidnap before and she even forget about herself and her friends and then again she meets with damon her kidnapper again why was she kidnap in the first place the reasons behind it and did damon parents adopt her please elaborate more because I think it's a good story
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I love it but I could use some punctuating and the characters were interesting but if you elaborated on their relationship it would have been better. I also feel like they just moved too fast. Apart from that you're an amazing author. Keep it up.
The overall story is good but the story was somehow hard to understand you need to elaborate more please so that we can understand she was kidnap before and she even forget about herself and her friends and then again she meets with damon her kidnapper again why was she kidnap in the first place the reasons behind it and did damon parents adopt her please elaborate more because I think it's a good story
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I love it but I could use some punctuating and the characters were interesting but if you elaborated on their relationship it would have been better. I also feel like they just moved too fast. Apart from that you're an amazing author. Keep it up.