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Couldn't wait any longer to see how they both will work together in the mission of finding their fathers. My heart goes out to them. Keep on writing and I'm eager to read more
The story requires some proofreading. Other than that, the plotline is well-written, and it's unique in its own ways. Keep up with the good work!!
I really like how Kirito behave in this one. His attitude towards his women, especially to Sinon are good. Harem for the win! oh wait.. wrong novel you say? nah, it can't be.
as a fellow author , I sense some potential in this story...... Please keep this up , the english is not bad and the story is good , and the update stability is not bad either.
Since the author seems to be a newbie, I have given one extra star in each category. There are a few grammatical errors in the chapters that make for a jarring read but nothing that takes away from enjoying the read 🙂 Maybe, the author can reread the chapters and edit them along the way and solve the problem. Anna seems to be forgotten things related to her father's death and that is the crux of the story which seems intriguing. Steven also is connected and concerned about what happened back then. As a reader, I can't wait to read how the story unfolds further...
Woww im looking forward to how things will unfold between anna and steven. So far i think steven included in the lab incident. Guessing only
The story line is very interesting and thriller. The way the author explains the story is very detail and make readers comfortable with her plot.
Couldn't wait any longer to see how they both will work together in the mission of finding their fathers. My heart goes out to them. Keep on writing and I'm eager to read more
The story requires some proofreading. Other than that, the plotline is well-written, and it's unique in its own ways. Keep up with the good work!!
I really like how Kirito behave in this one. His attitude towards his women, especially to Sinon are good. Harem for the win! oh wait.. wrong novel you say? nah, it can't be.
as a fellow author , I sense some potential in this story...... Please keep this up , the english is not bad and the story is good , and the update stability is not bad either.
Since the author seems to be a newbie, I have given one extra star in each category. There are a few grammatical errors in the chapters that make for a jarring read but nothing that takes away from enjoying the read 🙂 Maybe, the author can reread the chapters and edit them along the way and solve the problem. Anna seems to be forgotten things related to her father's death and that is the crux of the story which seems intriguing. Steven also is connected and concerned about what happened back then. As a reader, I can't wait to read how the story unfolds further...
Woww im looking forward to how things will unfold between anna and steven. So far i think steven included in the lab incident. Guessing only
The story line is very interesting and thriller. The way the author explains the story is very detail and make readers comfortable with her plot.