One Punch Man + BNHA --RISING HERO

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TheMothMan

10/10 concept DIO: Tsugi wa Jotaro, kisama da! Jotaro: Yarou… DIO! DIO: Ho… mukatta kuruno ka? Nigetsu ni kono DIO ni chikazuite kuruno ka? Sekkaku sofu no Josefu ga watashi no Za Warudo no shotai wo. Shiken shuryu chaimu chokuzen made mondai yo toitte iru jukensee ne you na? Kisshi koita kibun de wo shietekure ta to yuu no ni? Jotaro: Chikadzu kanaka teme wo buchi no me tenain de na. DIO: Hoho! Dewa juubun chikazukanai youi. Jotaro: Ora! DIO: Noroi, noroi! Za Warudo wa saikyou no Sutando da. Jikan wa tomezetomo, supiido to paowa to te omae no Suta Purachina yoryuu enna no towa! Jotaro: Ore no Suta Purachina to onaji taipu wo Sutando nara. Enkyori enai kenai da, paowa to semitsu na bokina dekiru.

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Tobi_Obito_2

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TheDemonNazI

I love this book and it has a lot of potential. But can you please stop using half the page to explain powers? You do this every single fucking tim

LV 5

kanukai

I'm not sure why its rated so highly but everyone is entitled to their own opinion. First of all the grammar isnt good and sometimes the spelling as well, "while haired handsome man" instead of "white haired handsome man" I like fast paced stories but the author switches from 1st person to 3rd person in the same paragraph. It is really confusing, and I want to read on but its lacking. 2☆ Again, normally I wouldn't care but on the fifth chapter, the author got upset about no reviews so I reviewed. Zero world building because we already know about the one punch man world and the main character is shallow, basically he is the author's dream or something like that. 1☆ I'm not sure about the stability of updates cause I read it all today, so I'll give it a 3☆ Overall, I would recommend it, if u don't care about the above. But if u do, then this ain't for you

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Noble_Devil

thank you i wish good luck for you and i also wish to see this story rise so here i will give you full support 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 encouragment review

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Keisar

Good luck I guess? 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀

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Vintage11

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creator_0f_worlds

This is amazing it is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑

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Absol8

Please keep the good work I like this novel and good luck👍👍👍👍👍😉🍀🍀🍀🍀👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Tobi_Obito_2

this chapter is good a chapter for vacation no training no fight this story is good also you improve you writing abilities too and i would like to thank you for this story

LV 5

HuskyWarrior

Tbh I barely post reviews but if posting a review will let you keep making this novel then here it is😁👍 and crap I need at least 140 characters to post this so.... EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP

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MohamedRost

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doulykyng

THANKS THANKS THGANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE THANKS THANKS THGANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

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EmbarrassedEdge

It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..

LV 1

ADStain

Writing Quality= a big no Stability of ****tyness= you have guts kid Story Development= Fuck you Character design= you are **** Shitty background= You are nuts

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PuffyFluppy

awesome

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Aria_Ruinz

WELL just Keep up with your ritym <not so good with english lol> BTw EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP

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RandomIsGood

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