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Write a reviewthis is the best fanfic , that i ever read.there isnt anything wrong with it.its defenitely favorite,since out of every fanfic that i have seen , none of them coud compite with masterpiece. hopefully it gets a update soon.
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I tried to read most of it but I only made it to chapter 16, The begining is really rough. Things are mostly unexplained and thing just magically work for Shirou. Everything is center too much on Shirou and it damages the environment creation. I personally didn't like the way you specified who was talking but that's just me.
I really like the new shirou and his ideals I also like how they foreshadow his future as king of swords I can't wait to see how the story continues but where are the updates!!?? I really like this story so seeing as it hasn't been updated in a year really has me worried because he either got Corona and is dead or he isn't uploading his chapters to his story which is honestly depressing I really like this story I also liked the new shirou but it got dropped which was really depressing because it was getting really good too *sigh* please update this story if not then just say you dropped it instead of not updating anyway goodbye hope the author reads this if he is still alive.
Where is the next cap? Please don't drop this plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss It is one of the best nasuverse fanfics with shirou and on top of that this Shirou is better ;-;
Cuando el siguiente cap????? ¿??????????????????????? Jrjfkkdkkdekkd???????? Jskwkkwk2kekw????????????????????????????? Hjejdkekkedjjejejeke????????????????
The story was so great and promising. Grammar mistakes here and there, but still acceptable. The only bad point is................. Where is the continuation.............? It has been five months since the last chapter was updated.
I like how the story goes, it's good so far. Grammar and tenses mistakes here and there, but still acceptable. I could say that this is the best Fate Fanfiction. But...... Where is the continuation...????
La historia es muy buena, y la e leído como 4 veces, pero e notado q los capítulos han sido cortados, por ejemplo en el cap2, donde Eva aparece en la mente de shirou y lo proteje con una luz, esa parte fue cortada y luego en el cap3, donde Eva vuelve aparecer y habla con shiro sobre su amnesia, si tu lo borraste no se solo quería comentar eso, ha y lo estoy leyendo de nuevo por eso encontré esas fallas, espero que lo revises. Por todo lo demás muy buena historia y espero q no hallas dejado morir una historia tan buena y seria una pena si ese fuera el caso.
Excellent story, i was expecting a crap made story that went dead along the way, but this exceeded my expectations. This is one of the best fate fanfictions i've ever read, in the levels of Parcasious' "Fate in-Time" and "Fate:Kill" in Fanfiction.Net. I hope the updates will be frequent, cause i hunger for more!!!
Awsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever read Awsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever readAwsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever readAwsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever read
Esta es una de las mejoras historias que e leido, que se entrelasa muy bien y es bastante creativo, espero que sigas subiendo mas capitulos
The best Fate fanfic I ever read. .....................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome. I like his new ideals as a hero. Better than the naive Shiro from the original nasuverse. They're waiting too long to introduce Arthura thou. She is a favorite.
One of the best books I've read on this app and one Of the better books I've ever read. I started reading hard core when I was eight years old and one would not find me with out at least there or four books at any give time really liked this book keep up the good work and hope to continue this adventure Orion
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Reveal Spoiler☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
Buenísima historia,el autor esta sentando buenas bases para su historia y por mas que digan que este shiro es demasiado roto,el universo de fate es mucho mas grande y jodidamente peligroso que una simple deathmach entre leyendas,dejando de lado los ancestros y apóstoles muertos,aun falta muchísimo para que shiro siquiera pueda hacerle frente al asesino de primates alias fou
Reveal SpoilerIt’s great. Honestly my favorite Fate fanfic on this website. I would give it five stars, but update stability. :/ Also Rin best waifu. Fight me.
Great story and great fan fiction for shiro .when are you restarting to post chapter . Also and idea change the servent summon in next grail war we all know al his friend are gonna be part of it so just keep archer saber snd berserker the same and add new servent for rest
Reveal SpoilerTruyện này rất hay nên xin tác giả hãy tiếp tục phát triển câu truyện hơn nửa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Esta historia esta de mejor a mucho mejor claro que es en el ambito del entretenimiento pero eso es lo bueno historias como estas que buscan entretener y no simplemente escribir una historia basia y sin grasia
Топ, годнота вообще, ахунный фанфик, душевно написано и персонажи хорошо, гарем побольше ток сделайте и всё будет збс. Спасибо автор за написание
i like the storyline. the way everything going i hope there would be harem and also few sexy night or romance. i hope it become like in the real one.
this is the best fanfic , that i ever read.there isnt anything wrong with it.its defenitely favorite,since out of every fanfic that i have seen , none of them coud compite with masterpiece. hopefully it gets a update soon.
This fanfic is dead _ | .-'''''-. .-' '-. .-' :::::_::::: '-. ___/ ==:...:::-:::...:== \___ /_____________________________\ ':'-._________________________.-'_ ':::\ @-,`-[-][-^-][-]-`,-@ / _| |_ '::| .-------------------. ||_ @ _| ::|=|* ___ _ ___ *|=|'.| | ':| |' ))_) )) ))_) '| |::.^| _:|=|' ((`\ (( (( '|=|::::::. _| || |' _ '| |:::::::. |_ |=|'1634 _( )_ 1789'|=|':::::. | || |' ( (_ ~ _) ) '| | ':::' |^||=|* ) (_) ( *|=| '::' | '-------------------' .::::' |_____________________.::::::' .'___________________.::::::'' |_______________.::::'':::''' .'_____________.::::::''::::'' .:::'''' LGB .'::::' .:::::''':. .:::::'
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I tried to read most of it but I only made it to chapter 16, The begining is really rough. Things are mostly unexplained and thing just magically work for Shirou. Everything is center too much on Shirou and it damages the environment creation. I personally didn't like the way you specified who was talking but that's just me.
I really like the new shirou and his ideals I also like how they foreshadow his future as king of swords I can't wait to see how the story continues but where are the updates!!?? I really like this story so seeing as it hasn't been updated in a year really has me worried because he either got Corona and is dead or he isn't uploading his chapters to his story which is honestly depressing I really like this story I also liked the new shirou but it got dropped which was really depressing because it was getting really good too *sigh* please update this story if not then just say you dropped it instead of not updating anyway goodbye hope the author reads this if he is still alive.
Where is the next cap? Please don't drop this plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss It is one of the best nasuverse fanfics with shirou and on top of that this Shirou is better ;-;
Cuando el siguiente cap????? ¿??????????????????????? Jrjfkkdkkdekkd???????? Jskwkkwk2kekw????????????????????????????? Hjejdkekkedjjejejeke????????????????
The story was so great and promising. Grammar mistakes here and there, but still acceptable. The only bad point is................. Where is the continuation.............? It has been five months since the last chapter was updated.
I like how the story goes, it's good so far. Grammar and tenses mistakes here and there, but still acceptable. I could say that this is the best Fate Fanfiction. But...... Where is the continuation...????
La historia es muy buena, y la e leído como 4 veces, pero e notado q los capítulos han sido cortados, por ejemplo en el cap2, donde Eva aparece en la mente de shirou y lo proteje con una luz, esa parte fue cortada y luego en el cap3, donde Eva vuelve aparecer y habla con shiro sobre su amnesia, si tu lo borraste no se solo quería comentar eso, ha y lo estoy leyendo de nuevo por eso encontré esas fallas, espero que lo revises. Por todo lo demás muy buena historia y espero q no hallas dejado morir una historia tan buena y seria una pena si ese fuera el caso.
Excellent story, i was expecting a crap made story that went dead along the way, but this exceeded my expectations. This is one of the best fate fanfictions i've ever read, in the levels of Parcasious' "Fate in-Time" and "Fate:Kill" in Fanfiction.Net. I hope the updates will be frequent, cause i hunger for more!!!
Awsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever read Awsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever readAwsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever readAwsome book pls dont drop author. One of the bestfanfic i have ever read
Esta es una de las mejoras historias que e leido, que se entrelasa muy bien y es bastante creativo, espero que sigas subiendo mas capitulos
The best Fate fanfic I ever read. .....................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome. I like his new ideals as a hero. Better than the naive Shiro from the original nasuverse. They're waiting too long to introduce Arthura thou. She is a favorite.
One of the best books I've read on this app and one Of the better books I've ever read. I started reading hard core when I was eight years old and one would not find me with out at least there or four books at any give time really liked this book keep up the good work and hope to continue this adventure Orion
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Reveal Spoiler☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
Buenísima historia,el autor esta sentando buenas bases para su historia y por mas que digan que este shiro es demasiado roto,el universo de fate es mucho mas grande y jodidamente peligroso que una simple deathmach entre leyendas,dejando de lado los ancestros y apóstoles muertos,aun falta muchísimo para que shiro siquiera pueda hacerle frente al asesino de primates alias fou
Reveal SpoilerIt’s great. Honestly my favorite Fate fanfic on this website. I would give it five stars, but update stability. :/ Also Rin best waifu. Fight me.
Great story and great fan fiction for shiro .when are you restarting to post chapter . Also and idea change the servent summon in next grail war we all know al his friend are gonna be part of it so just keep archer saber snd berserker the same and add new servent for rest
Reveal SpoilerTruyện này rất hay nên xin tác giả hãy tiếp tục phát triển câu truyện hơn nửa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Esta historia esta de mejor a mucho mejor claro que es en el ambito del entretenimiento pero eso es lo bueno historias como estas que buscan entretener y no simplemente escribir una historia basia y sin grasia
Топ, годнота вообще, ахунный фанфик, душевно написано и персонажи хорошо, гарем побольше ток сделайте и всё будет збс. Спасибо автор за написание
i like the storyline. the way everything going i hope there would be harem and also few sexy night or romance. i hope it become like in the real one.
looks like Alaya pruned this one as well. please continue this