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Ideia massa, já foi dropada eu acho, mas gostei da ideia e vou ler mesmo assim :D ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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The story is great. Though I wouldn't get hook.... well ...I ended up getting hook..and ima use all my power stones to vote for this story couse is great. Also the author is great Even though I don't know who this author is, all I can say is...great work and great story can't wait for the next chapter I will Always would be waiting.
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I love this book it has great quality in it and it's one of very few that I fell in love with, so I was wondering if you could consider continuing the book has I don't want it to end so soon so plz continue this series.
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Saitama is a part time hero not a full time one and the reason he join the hero association is because he is bored and want to fight strong opponent so this Saitama is literally an OC for me it's giving me a Shirou Emiya vibe which i don't like so i'm gonna stop reading it here i enjoy it a little bit but the morr i read it the more i see Saitama is sooo out of his character it's like cherry picking a personality to suit the story so nope not gonna read it anymore😏
Volta a Lança pls 😢😢😢😢😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😠😠😢😠😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😢😠😠😢😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😠😠😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😠😠😢😠😠😢😡😡😡😡😡😠😡😠😠😢😢😠😢😠😢😠😢
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Very nice . WHY SHOULD YHE REVIEW BE MORE THAN 140 WORDS I DON'T LIKE TO WRIIITEEEEEEEEEÈEE!!!!! FUCK U. Dangit bitch shsjjdjdjfjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdj
The Immortal shall know the terror of Cape Baldi hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahaha
I won't waste my time in this review so i will resume: Poor, poor gramar I dont give a shlt about the update stability The story development looks like a third rated chinese novel Lets be honest with the character desing, the author manages to screw up (not so bad) a alredy created character so lets not mention the others World background: Worst than a 3th rated chinese novel I usually dont give a harsh critic like this, maybe i was too hyped for just a novel created by a newbie author
please continue this amazing novel sir i love saitama this is god damn op i like the story . earth strongest hero vs cultibators haha onepuch away
Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!
The story is great, a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, e.g. clearky instead of clearly, but that is it. Since i can´t give a 4.5 for writing quality, might as well give a 5links 👍👍👍
Boring,.................... Ghbvg hhvb nuv jigb vfykn ......mbggg ghjgfft ggfftg hhhu cdty hujb gyhj. Byu huv vuj hu u huj ub f
it's a great one punch fanfiction, it shows you how Saitama well react to the cruel world of cultivation, where the strong kill and take anything they wish. Be it, woman, killing anyone that they do not like, torturing people for entertainment and fun. In a world where few will help others. See a legend begin bored.
Update 2 chapter/day........................................................................................................................................................okay
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good lord kindly bless us with more of your talent. please give us the gift of mass release. cant take any more of this hype. cant wit for another week or two.
☺ XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP ☺☺XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
More more more like please! The cliffs are killing me, need more saitama More more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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It's very well written fanfiction the only problem is that the author needs to satisfy the hungry readers with more chapters................its too gud
This is a cool theme of being worked upon. How the MC still original from the source and tossed into this world of cultivators... Your going to see some thing he from a civil eorld will be miffed! For that I wish to see he undaunted strength pummel to death... demon sects and the like are targets if he catches wind of them!
Felt bored at chapter 3. Dropped at chapter 5. So far i can tell the author had writing skill, but this switching POV is ridiculously too much. What are you trying to do, dear author? Build the hype? you're in the buliding-foundation phase. I wanna see Saitama, **** those cultivators.
i really like the story but the update stability is low ita been 2 years did the author chocken while wrting or he just dip...... he dip after chapter 38 and never been heared before he ded
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Ideia massa, já foi dropada eu acho, mas gostei da ideia e vou ler mesmo assim :D ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
The story is great. Though I wouldn't get hook.... well ...I ended up getting hook..and ima use all my power stones to vote for this story couse is great. Also the author is great Even though I don't know who this author is, all I can say is...great work and great story can't wait for the next chapter I will Always would be waiting.
Hshjeheheidhjdjsjwbebo s saj3ojh3isi66z6sy3bsb3nizb ns.nuse8ggebbw ..jehsmosb kbe iehsusbihdhdihwjsibzhswjdujsgaa@^?#^,%!,-^?-%?#/*$ydmsndykstkeykr6ke6
I love this book it has great quality in it and it's one of very few that I fell in love with, so I was wondering if you could consider continuing the book has I don't want it to end so soon so plz continue this series.
...................................................................................................................................mm.m.....
Saitama is a part time hero not a full time one and the reason he join the hero association is because he is bored and want to fight strong opponent so this Saitama is literally an OC for me it's giving me a Shirou Emiya vibe which i don't like so i'm gonna stop reading it here i enjoy it a little bit but the morr i read it the more i see Saitama is sooo out of his character it's like cherry picking a personality to suit the story so nope not gonna read it anymore😏
Volta a Lança pls 😢😢😢😢😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😠😠😢😠😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😢😠😠😢😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😠😠😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😢😠😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😢😠😠😠😢😠😠😢😡😡😡😡😡😠😡😠😠😢😢😠😢😠😢😠😢
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Very nice . WHY SHOULD YHE REVIEW BE MORE THAN 140 WORDS I DON'T LIKE TO WRIIITEEEEEEEEEÈEE!!!!! FUCK U. Dangit bitch shsjjdjdjfjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdj
The Immortal shall know the terror of Cape Baldi hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha hahahahahaha
I won't waste my time in this review so i will resume: Poor, poor gramar I dont give a shlt about the update stability The story development looks like a third rated chinese novel Lets be honest with the character desing, the author manages to screw up (not so bad) a alredy created character so lets not mention the others World background: Worst than a 3th rated chinese novel I usually dont give a harsh critic like this, maybe i was too hyped for just a novel created by a newbie author
please continue this amazing novel sir i love saitama this is god damn op i like the story . earth strongest hero vs cultibators haha onepuch away
Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!Update more!!!!!!!!!!
The story is great, a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, e.g. clearky instead of clearly, but that is it. Since i can´t give a 4.5 for writing quality, might as well give a 5links 👍👍👍
Boring,.................... Ghbvg hhvb nuv jigb vfykn ......mbggg ghjgfft ggfftg hhhu cdty hujb gyhj. Byu huv vuj hu u huj ub f
it's a great one punch fanfiction, it shows you how Saitama well react to the cruel world of cultivation, where the strong kill and take anything they wish. Be it, woman, killing anyone that they do not like, torturing people for entertainment and fun. In a world where few will help others. See a legend begin bored.
Update 2 chapter/day........................................................................................................................................................okay
Reveal Spoiler good lord kindly bless us with more of your talent. please give us the gift of mass release. cant take any more of this hype. cant wit for another week or two.
☺ XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP ☺☺XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
More more more like please! The cliffs are killing me, need more saitama More more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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It's very well written fanfiction the only problem is that the author needs to satisfy the hungry readers with more chapters................its too gud
This is a cool theme of being worked upon. How the MC still original from the source and tossed into this world of cultivators... Your going to see some thing he from a civil eorld will be miffed! For that I wish to see he undaunted strength pummel to death... demon sects and the like are targets if he catches wind of them!
Felt bored at chapter 3. Dropped at chapter 5. So far i can tell the author had writing skill, but this switching POV is ridiculously too much. What are you trying to do, dear author? Build the hype? you're in the buliding-foundation phase. I wanna see Saitama, **** those cultivators.
i really like the story but the update stability is low ita been 2 years did the author chocken while wrting or he just dip...... he dip after chapter 38 and never been heared before he ded