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LV 1
It's alright you should be more concise and detailed tho. I like the flow so far but make sure you construct the dialogues naturally, and capitalize names pls cuz it's one of my pet peeves 😂😂
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I love the story. Ever since the Mlbb x Webnovel Collab, this is the first novel I read which I find it awesome by the way.😎 And before I make my Mlbb Fanfiction story here, I first finish reading your novel before I created one. I hope you'll continue making this. Cuz I love it so much💕
LV 1
It's alright you should be more concise and detailed tho. I like the flow so far but make sure you construct the dialogues naturally, and capitalize names pls cuz it's one of my pet peeves 😂😂
I love the story. Ever since the Mlbb x Webnovel Collab, this is the first novel I read which I find it awesome by the way.😎 And before I make my Mlbb Fanfiction story here, I first finish reading your novel before I created one. I hope you'll continue making this. Cuz I love it so much💕