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This is a review of the first chapter. The story is high on the magic side but low on the realism. The main character is killed by a meteor strike and transmigrates into a story he was reading. The transmigration occurs into a body that is a younger version of his former self, but did exist in the world before. He also ends up being “born” on the doorstep of one of the most powerful people in town. Neither the main character nor his new “dad” seem shocked by this (I wonder what it would take to freak these characters out). There are a few grammar issues: minor errors with verb tense and an abrupt change from third to first person between paragraph 1 and 2. Overall, this is worth reading.
Hi, this is the author! Of course, I'll write a review with a perfect score because this is my work! I hope you continue to read this story until the end!
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This is a review of the first chapter. The story is high on the magic side but low on the realism. The main character is killed by a meteor strike and transmigrates into a story he was reading. The transmigration occurs into a body that is a younger version of his former self, but did exist in the world before. He also ends up being “born” on the doorstep of one of the most powerful people in town. Neither the main character nor his new “dad” seem shocked by this (I wonder what it would take to freak these characters out). There are a few grammar issues: minor errors with verb tense and an abrupt change from third to first person between paragraph 1 and 2. Overall, this is worth reading.
Hi, this is the author! Of course, I'll write a review with a perfect score because this is my work! I hope you continue to read this story until the end!
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