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Chapter 2: Chapter 01, A Great Mother

Max is his name. Mother named him at his birth. He is first son of his family. His father Daniel and Beautiful mother Rose. She is very young. His father and mother fall in love with each other and get married. They love him very much. So everyone thought. His father is a characterless and pervert type man and also too much selfish. He is also a sociopath. He always try to maintain his good face value in society. That's why he show all that he loves his family but in reality he never care about them. Max's mother a good mother. If anyone say how good then we have to say no one can describe a good mother. Only a child can say how much she is and how much she loves them.

When Max is 1 year old he got Typhoid fever. His mother was a innocent village girl back then so she never understood what happened to her boy. She always says to her husband about going to doctor. But he never paid any attention. She tried to get him(max) to doctor but her husband never gives her any money at first. But she managed money from somewhere and get him(max) to doctor. After that, many times similar situations happened.

Another one time after 1 year, Max's aunt (Daniel sister) came to house for visit. Her name was Rinal. Rose was working that day and max was sleeping. But suddenly max started crying. Rose ran to Max's room and see rinal was standing next to him. She(rinal) say - I don't know what happening I just touched it. She say it, not him. Rose understands that something is wrong. rose took max and she she saw max but don't understand why he is crying. Rose tried to stop his crying but he didn't stop. How could he a 2 year old boy stop crying after his leg broke. Yes leg broken, rinal broke his leg. Nobody knows why she broke his leg, Is it intentional or unintentionally, no one knows. Rose took him to doctor after 6 hours when he still cried. But doctor said it's too late to get his leg fixed. So he could not walk in his life.

After 16 years, Max is lieing in hospital bed. And his mother sitting near him. Rose looking at him thinking and carse ownself for being weak and poor. Max, his whole life never gets any happiness. He only gets his mother's love and care. He get some kind of heart disease. And can only be live if anyone donate him heart. But who goona give him a heart !

Not only him but his mother also sick. She has cancer. But she never told max about this. Because she loves him very much and they don't have much money to treat both.

In one side max is thinking about dieing because if he die then his mother maybe doesn't have to worry about future. He knows that his mother don't have much money to treat him. And his father Daniel doesn't care about them either. Daniel got second marriage about 10 years already. after that he divorced rose. Daniel father Mr. David was a good man. And he loved max very much. Before his death he gives a small cafe for run to rose and ownership to Max. That cafe doesn't make much money which can treat him. And some how if he gets better, he can't walk because of his broken leg. He use wheelchair. and also he is a coward. He get afraid in everything very easily because of his family's mantal and physical harassments. Max's stepmother is very rich and very greedy. She wants their cafe. And many times she sends goons to clear the cafe. Many times he got beaten by them. and his step brothers and sisters also come some times for trouble them. So he is thinking if he dies then his mother can live normally maybe. He loves his mother very much. To him his mother is everything. But in his opinion because of him, his mother never got happiness in her life.

Another side his mother thinking how can she safe her only one child. In her opinion because of her being too weak and poor, she and her child MAX has suffered so much. Because of being weak and poor she can't treat max and her ownself. She now also curseing Daniel for making her and max life miserable. But she knows that strong dominant weak and rich kills poor. That why she is angry in herself. Now her life is very short and before she dies she wants to save her child. Her cancer is in last stage. She has minimum 2 or 3 months to live or if she get treatment maybe she can live many years, maybe not like normal people but she can. But she doesn't have that much money. And then she suddenly decided something.(only maybe someone like mother who loves their children over their life can do. Yes, if you thinking about giving her heart to him. Then you are extremely right.) She thought that she don't have money and power to safe her child. So she can only do give her heart to him.

After 2 days Rose is talking to doctor. Doctor MRS. Bone, rose told her about her thinking. Dr.Mrs.bone was shocked but she also couldn't do anything about it. But Dr.Mrs.Bone can only admire her.


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Readers please give comments. What you guys want.

And please share this story.

In this story mother got cancer because my mother also died in cancer. And I love her. And I want to dedicate this chapter and next one to her.

maybe whole story to her.

I believe Mother is some one who ..........

I don't have to say anything. Guess what I think.

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