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His books are always good but the downside is that he always hide mc power and drags the arcs
Few points to note 1. Too many repetitions of sentences and excessive dragging of incidents. 2. Mc thinks with his lower half more than his head. He even spared a monster because she looks beautiful which dragged the story even more. 3. All the characters IQ is lowered whenever it suits the plot. 4. Makes the Mc strongest one to ever exist yet struggles to win against the protagonist or the heroines 5. Some very good fights and proper thought out fight sequences. 6. Absolutely trash ending. Too many problems to note yet these are the most prevalent ones. Read at your own risk.
You have very good works, but if there is something that I should complain and get frustrated with, it would be that you are governed too much by the book's framework, for example in Rakudai it was simply the same, many things were just like the cannon, a good part of absolute was also almost the same duo and so on, but hey, it wasn't just this novel, you've been doing the same thing in your other novels.
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I enjoy the dynamic of the first world, MC is cautious with a reasonable way, since he was stab by his girlfriends, But right after he went into the second world, His personality totally change, he act too trusty, and explain his ability to a random girl he just met. He even take an unknown medicine injection just to gain power (which in the first world, he fear taking those type of risk to gain power because it might change his humanity). It would have made more sense if he know of the world he transported into, but The author design mc as having very little clue of the otaku world. And mc clearly doesn't know anything about the second world, but taking too much risk. It completely change the dynamic of how the story will goes. Also, I really hate the idea of having a harem in a different world that mc need to world hop in to interact with them. It make the MC look irresponsible, like a husband that take a week business trip to meet his second family. I feel like the author has made a good formula for the first world, but want to change the writing because it get repetitive, which is true, since most of the girl are fallen in a similar way. But I'm just not a fan of the second world, so I'm still on hold for now. The 4 star are mostly from the first world, -1 bc of the sudden change in mc character in the second world
i really like this novel but can you show us how hug his harem each world for example failed knight - 10 girls absolute duo - 5 girls danmache - 20 girls and who are they [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I liked the shisho and yuki fan fics but this one i couldnt get past ch 31 its too boring, i fell asleep and mc is a let down he sucks , he is pathetic and keeps reapting everything every chapter . This was an L one for the author
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Seperti biasa dari Akikan, novel ini mungkin tidak seperti yang aku harapkan. Aku pikir novel ini akan terus berlanjut hingga beberapa ratus bab kedepan. Tapi, karena Akikan memutuskan untuk mengakhiri ini, aku tidak bisa berkata banyak. Tapi, aku menantikan karyamu yang selanjutnya.
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it has its ups and downs like any other story, but it stands out thanks to its author. Personally, I will always say that the Fanfics made by Aki are the best, not only because of how he combines different worlds; but for the fact that creating these stories demonstrates the love he has for each character
akikan-sensei as this story is left with a very open ending, is there a chance that you can continue writing about it?
in all of your books you repeated some words many times in same mamner and if you fix that your books will really really good. And i really like your work.
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can you make a fanfic of AOT 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
I read it in three days, almost without being distracted by anything else. Without false modesty, I will note that this is the best that I have read about these three universes in 6 years of my experience in reading fan fiction. Of course, this has drawbacks, but nothing compares to the sense of completeness and integrity of the path that I happened to walk with the main character. Thank you so much for writing this!
Sigh.... Such a sad day is today. This great FF has been completed. I was wishing for it to be a long one like the previous 2 FF. I have to say, this is the best FF I had read from all the FF that author have wrote, but sadly, every Journey has an end. I still have 50ch to read and I hope that the ending is good as previous ones. 💥Thanks Author for the amazing work and I wish to see more FF like this.
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Cerita sampah, tokoh utama, dan ending juga sampah. Wkwkwkwkwk. Ngak berguna banget bikin cerita tanpa melihat isi novel aslinya. Mestinya baca novel kek, atau beli novel versi China di shopee Taiwan. Begini nih bikin cuma lihat dari Anime bukan novel, tolol.
es una pena que no pueda seguir leyendo esta magnifica historia pero bueno, gracias por crear esta maravillosa historia, gracias por tanto y perdon por tan poco.
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His books are always good but the downside is that he always hide mc power and drags the arcs
Few points to note 1. Too many repetitions of sentences and excessive dragging of incidents. 2. Mc thinks with his lower half more than his head. He even spared a monster because she looks beautiful which dragged the story even more. 3. All the characters IQ is lowered whenever it suits the plot. 4. Makes the Mc strongest one to ever exist yet struggles to win against the protagonist or the heroines 5. Some very good fights and proper thought out fight sequences. 6. Absolutely trash ending. Too many problems to note yet these are the most prevalent ones. Read at your own risk.
You have very good works, but if there is something that I should complain and get frustrated with, it would be that you are governed too much by the book's framework, for example in Rakudai it was simply the same, many things were just like the cannon, a good part of absolute was also almost the same duo and so on, but hey, it wasn't just this novel, you've been doing the same thing in your other novels.
Kugayama Tsukasa💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕.........💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
I enjoy the dynamic of the first world, MC is cautious with a reasonable way, since he was stab by his girlfriends, But right after he went into the second world, His personality totally change, he act too trusty, and explain his ability to a random girl he just met. He even take an unknown medicine injection just to gain power (which in the first world, he fear taking those type of risk to gain power because it might change his humanity). It would have made more sense if he know of the world he transported into, but The author design mc as having very little clue of the otaku world. And mc clearly doesn't know anything about the second world, but taking too much risk. It completely change the dynamic of how the story will goes. Also, I really hate the idea of having a harem in a different world that mc need to world hop in to interact with them. It make the MC look irresponsible, like a husband that take a week business trip to meet his second family. I feel like the author has made a good formula for the first world, but want to change the writing because it get repetitive, which is true, since most of the girl are fallen in a similar way. But I'm just not a fan of the second world, so I'm still on hold for now. The 4 star are mostly from the first world, -1 bc of the sudden change in mc character in the second world
i really like this novel but can you show us how hug his harem each world for example failed knight - 10 girls absolute duo - 5 girls danmache - 20 girls and who are they [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I liked the shisho and yuki fan fics but this one i couldnt get past ch 31 its too boring, i fell asleep and mc is a let down he sucks , he is pathetic and keeps reapting everything every chapter . This was an L one for the author
Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta Mineta, .i.e. ALL HAIL MINETAAAAAAAA!!!!NURUFUFUFUFUUFFU EYAHAHAHAHHAHA MUAHAHAHAHHAAH WAHAHHAHAHA COUGH* FREE 5 STARS (Oyo Room?)
Seperti biasa dari Akikan, novel ini mungkin tidak seperti yang aku harapkan. Aku pikir novel ini akan terus berlanjut hingga beberapa ratus bab kedepan. Tapi, karena Akikan memutuskan untuk mengakhiri ini, aku tidak bisa berkata banyak. Tapi, aku menantikan karyamu yang selanjutnya.
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Reveal Spoiler it has its ups and downs like any other story, but it stands out thanks to its author. Personally, I will always say that the Fanfics made by Aki are the best, not only because of how he combines different worlds; but for the fact that creating these stories demonstrates the love he has for each character
akikan-sensei as this story is left with a very open ending, is there a chance that you can continue writing about it?
in all of your books you repeated some words many times in same mamner and if you fix that your books will really really good. And i really like your work.
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can you make a fanfic of AOT 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
I read it in three days, almost without being distracted by anything else. Without false modesty, I will note that this is the best that I have read about these three universes in 6 years of my experience in reading fan fiction. Of course, this has drawbacks, but nothing compares to the sense of completeness and integrity of the path that I happened to walk with the main character. Thank you so much for writing this!
Sigh.... Such a sad day is today. This great FF has been completed. I was wishing for it to be a long one like the previous 2 FF. I have to say, this is the best FF I had read from all the FF that author have wrote, but sadly, every Journey has an end. I still have 50ch to read and I hope that the ending is good as previous ones. 💥Thanks Author for the amazing work and I wish to see more FF like this.
Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
Cerita sampah, tokoh utama, dan ending juga sampah. Wkwkwkwkwk. Ngak berguna banget bikin cerita tanpa melihat isi novel aslinya. Mestinya baca novel kek, atau beli novel versi China di shopee Taiwan. Begini nih bikin cuma lihat dari Anime bukan novel, tolol.
es una pena que no pueda seguir leyendo esta magnifica historia pero bueno, gracias por crear esta maravillosa historia, gracias por tanto y perdon por tan poco.
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A akikan fanfic never fails to not dissapoint you.