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.Now may the God of hope fill you with all joy and peace in believing, that you may abound in hope by the power of the Holy Spirit. .Now may the God of hope fill you with all joy and peace in believing, that you may abound in hope by the power of the Holy Spirit.
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Reveal Spoiler And Jesus came and spoke to them, saying, “All authority has been given to Me in heaven and on earth. 19.Go therefore and make disciples of all the nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit,
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I couldn't understand why the low rating but after chapter 10 things changed from wuxia to japanese sht. The teacher he summoned is none other than a sexy woman that would, 100%, become his wife. A woman from an anime, Yoruichi. After he summoned her as a teacher, things went trash. Basic japanese garbage, fearing women just because that's how anime characters are acting in anime. Couldn't he just create an old man teaching the class and get over with the school/ academy? Nooo, he needed plot, which made the story awful.
The writing quality is bad, but still readable. There is a good stability of updates and you can feel how passionate the author is about the story. Story development... is bad... It is all over the place and the author goes from one place to another, an example would be him first going with sect building and then suddenly wanting to do kingdom building around chapter 50. Character design is also bad, as the characters switch too much in behavior... and the mc... damn mc... Welp, he is a classic japaness mc so far... So, I think most people knows how that goes... The world building and world in story just feels like a copy from other novels like history's number 1 funder, Library of heavens path and so on. Nothing unique or new. Overall, the story so far is not good, but I can see the story getting better if the author tried to focus on one thing instead of being all over the place all the time.
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Its very good .. Taking various anime's characters ........ I just hope author keep this pace throughout... In the last two three chapters, the pace of progress is very slow ... Please increase the pace of story a lil bit...
The story just has to many dam pervert it even has something a lot of people hate and it’s called mc being a beta male but other then that the story is decent
So all within 24 hours of reincarnation he has -Gained a System -Gained a Flood Dragon pet -Somehow gained its Flood Dragon Bloodline -Accepted a Disciple -Gained a Inner World where he and others can live -Bestowed his Disciple with a better talent and cultivation technique than himself -Planned to unnecessarily kill sect disciples for his own disciple.(I say unnecessarily because he has the inner world, he could of stowed the brother and sister and just went to a inn or left town.)
Good story but I'm drop just don't like when MC make a sect it boring and coming with a bunch of work in my opinion joining sound more interesting.
Not bad he starts off kinda strong though and gets random power boosts he didn’t work for in the beginning he gets more and more op as story progresses and gets super op things from system and there’s not much off a time span that sounds legit cause pretty much everything that is happening is happening over the span of a year or 2
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Its good ..... i like it...... i hope we will continuously get more chapters in the future as i am addicted to reading this........... also please give a list of all the realm. Like 1-10-> body tempering 11-20-> foundation building 21-30-> golden core 31-40-> nascent soul 41-50-> human immortal 51-60-> earth immortal 61-70-> heaven immortal
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Neve drop it boss!!!!!!!!!!!!One of the best original novel I have read so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Gooooood Workkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Writing quality mediocre and needs to be improved upon lack of spacing etc. Plot to basic, to cliche such as overuse of many things such as system, sword as weapon, dragon as pet, abilities that causes the mc to be nerfed for no particular reason, The characters are bland the main character is basic meaning no show of power no struggle even if there is struggle its basic 'oh the enemy is stronger better use the system crutch' to much plot armor introduced supporting characters to fast causing to much confusion on what going on. Basic plot premise basic plot devices such as getting attacked by bandits on a journey can be improved upon also overused
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This is a good story and I just wanted to give five stars. I hope the author will continue this without dropping it😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
please continue this story, at least until the sect accepts hundreds of students. I support this story so don't give up and get bored quickly. spirit👍
there is no plot and the stuff u write are ilogical even if u wanted the novel to be diffrent u didnt have to make weird things happen u could just progress it steadily u made a lot of stupid choises just for fun and u also misstype stuff happening and u dont realise and type difrent things later
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Stand fast therefore in the liberty by which Christ has made us free, and do not be entangled again with a yoke of bondage. 2.Indeed I, Paul, say to you that if you become circumcised, Christ will profit you nothing. 3.And I testify again to every man who becomes circumcised that he is a debtor to keep the
Reveal Spoiler .Now may the God of hope fill you with all joy and peace in believing, that you may abound in hope by the power of the Holy Spirit. .Now may the God of hope fill you with all joy and peace in believing, that you may abound in hope by the power of the Holy Spirit.
Reveal Spoiler Tijdvhepbfhzorbke u. And I am a very nice. I'm a little bit of a new one. I will have the option. I'm a bit. I'm sure it was not the same thing, I will not only the first one .I will have the same thing. I'll be back. The only way that the best of luck with that. But I 4G, and then you
Reveal Spoiler And Jesus came and spoke to them, saying, “All authority has been given to Me in heaven and on earth. 19.Go therefore and make disciples of all the nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit,
Reveal Spoiler And Jesus came and spoke to them, saying, “All authority has been given to Me in heaven and on earth. 19.Go therefore and make disciples of all the nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit,
Reveal Spoiler I Seka the same thing. I'm a little more than happy to be able to make it to the next few days. I am a little while, so if you are not the intended recipient, you can also be used for that reason for that. I will have the option to purchase a new one of those people who are you a lot more to do. I am a beautiful person. The other side of the most important
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I couldn't understand why the low rating but after chapter 10 things changed from wuxia to japanese sht. The teacher he summoned is none other than a sexy woman that would, 100%, become his wife. A woman from an anime, Yoruichi. After he summoned her as a teacher, things went trash. Basic japanese garbage, fearing women just because that's how anime characters are acting in anime. Couldn't he just create an old man teaching the class and get over with the school/ academy? Nooo, he needed plot, which made the story awful.
The writing quality is bad, but still readable. There is a good stability of updates and you can feel how passionate the author is about the story. Story development... is bad... It is all over the place and the author goes from one place to another, an example would be him first going with sect building and then suddenly wanting to do kingdom building around chapter 50. Character design is also bad, as the characters switch too much in behavior... and the mc... damn mc... Welp, he is a classic japaness mc so far... So, I think most people knows how that goes... The world building and world in story just feels like a copy from other novels like history's number 1 funder, Library of heavens path and so on. Nothing unique or new. Overall, the story so far is not good, but I can see the story getting better if the author tried to focus on one thing instead of being all over the place all the time.
Reveal Spoiler Its very good .. Taking various anime's characters ........ I just hope author keep this pace throughout... In the last two three chapters, the pace of progress is very slow ... Please increase the pace of story a lil bit...
The story just has to many dam pervert it even has something a lot of people hate and it’s called mc being a beta male but other then that the story is decent
So all within 24 hours of reincarnation he has -Gained a System -Gained a Flood Dragon pet -Somehow gained its Flood Dragon Bloodline -Accepted a Disciple -Gained a Inner World where he and others can live -Bestowed his Disciple with a better talent and cultivation technique than himself -Planned to unnecessarily kill sect disciples for his own disciple.(I say unnecessarily because he has the inner world, he could of stowed the brother and sister and just went to a inn or left town.)
Good story but I'm drop just don't like when MC make a sect it boring and coming with a bunch of work in my opinion joining sound more interesting.
Not bad he starts off kinda strong though and gets random power boosts he didn’t work for in the beginning he gets more and more op as story progresses and gets super op things from system and there’s not much off a time span that sounds legit cause pretty much everything that is happening is happening over the span of a year or 2
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Its good ..... i like it...... i hope we will continuously get more chapters in the future as i am addicted to reading this........... also please give a list of all the realm. Like 1-10-> body tempering 11-20-> foundation building 21-30-> golden core 31-40-> nascent soul 41-50-> human immortal 51-60-> earth immortal 61-70-> heaven immortal
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Neve drop it boss!!!!!!!!!!!!One of the best original novel I have read so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Gooooood Workkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Writing quality mediocre and needs to be improved upon lack of spacing etc. Plot to basic, to cliche such as overuse of many things such as system, sword as weapon, dragon as pet, abilities that causes the mc to be nerfed for no particular reason, The characters are bland the main character is basic meaning no show of power no struggle even if there is struggle its basic 'oh the enemy is stronger better use the system crutch' to much plot armor introduced supporting characters to fast causing to much confusion on what going on. Basic plot premise basic plot devices such as getting attacked by bandits on a journey can be improved upon also overused
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Reveal Spoiler This is a good story and I just wanted to give five stars. I hope the author will continue this without dropping it😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
please continue this story, at least until the sect accepts hundreds of students. I support this story so don't give up and get bored quickly. spirit👍
there is no plot and the stuff u write are ilogical even if u wanted the novel to be diffrent u didnt have to make weird things happen u could just progress it steadily u made a lot of stupid choises just for fun and u also misstype stuff happening and u dont realise and type difrent things later
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Stand fast therefore in the liberty by which Christ has made us free, and do not be entangled again with a yoke of bondage. 2.Indeed I, Paul, say to you that if you become circumcised, Christ will profit you nothing. 3.And I testify again to every man who becomes circumcised that he is a debtor to keep the
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