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15.51% The Arrival / Chapter 9: Unleashed

Chapter 9: Unleashed

Star Forge... the legendary war factory of the old Republic era. The legacy of the Jedi Order's greatest master...Revan. He was also the Sith's greatest Darth as well,but at the moment none of that was important. What is important was trying to understand why the star forge was buried in the ice and snow in the Arctic. Dooku and the other jedi knew the only way to get answers was to get inside.

The closer the got to the structure the stronger the pull of the force becomes. Using the Force Dooku forces the metal door open but it was in that moment that something incredible happen. When the jedi had first arrived on the planet it had felt as though the forces was all around them but they could not feel it in any of the plants or animals or even the natives. They had felt as empty as the space around the planet. That changed the second the door was forced open.

An explosion, thats the best way to describe what the jedi felt as the Force surged out of the star forge. Dooku saw the force spread out like a rolling wave in every direction. The void that they had felt before vanished right before his eyes. "Quickly we must discover what we just unleashed, the answers must be inside." Dooku shout at the jedi as he ran into the structure. Running down the hall ways Dooku was looking for a console of some sort anything he could try and pull data from he did not make it far before he ran into a giant holocron in the middle of a cross road.

Walking up to it he could not help but shutter about the amount of knowledge he could learn from who ever placed the holocron here. Reaching out with the force he stirred the holocron into action. As the light slowly flickered on an image appeared in front of the count. " What have you done Jedi the Forge has been woken far too soon it will not be able to leave the planet at this rate!" The figure shout at Dooku. " And you are..." The count was a bit cautious he was hoping to at lest recognize who ever appeared, but he did not know who this women was. " Who I am is not important but if you must call me something you can call me the Outcast like all the jedi before you."

Now thats a title the Count knew...the jedi who returned after Revan turned to the darkside and had her power stripped from her. Only to have her regain her powers fall to the darkside and follow after Revan when he went into deep space. " Not only did you active the star forge early you released the force energy that had been repairing the forge back to the planet." The Outcasted stated with stark coldness in her voice.

"What do you mean force energy had the forge being stealing the force energy from the planet and the creatures on it." The Outcasted nodded at the count. " Thats right there is no star here and its not like it could take the energy from the core so what other choice did it have."

The Count and the Outcast discussed the in detail exactly what him and the jedi had done. Short story the star forge had been gathering all of the force energy from all over the star system from the last 100,000 years(AN: I am making this number up I couldn't find anything about how much time had passed between each era.) and when the outer door had been forced open the containment of that energy failed and was released. The Outcast theorized that all of the living things native to this system would be in powered by 100,000 years worth of force energy all at once.

With that much power even beings that would not normal feel the force would gain the ability to do so. "There is just one question left I have for you Outcast the star forge is Revan's legacy why are you here and not he?" This caused the Outcast to smile, " Who said he was not this holocron was made to house not just data but also bits of a persons soul. How did you think we where having this conversation if not for the fact that some of me was placed in here. " Dooku arched his eyebrow, " Then where..." "Finding his successor." The Outcast stated before the count could finish his question.

Jack could not understand where he was. In ever direction he looked all he saw was darkness. Looking down he was sitting on something that looked like water but was solid and every movement sent a ripple through the floor. ' Well this is different' Jack thought as he slowly rose to his feet. " I am surprise youngling most are afraid the first time they come into the force scape." A voice rang out from the darkness. Jack spun around looking for the caster of the voice which only caused them to laugh in his attempt. " Youngling if I do not wish to be seen you will not find me."

"Who or what are you", Jack said trying to decided if the voice was friend or foe. " Now that would be telling and where is the fun in that you will learn my name in time but for now I want to ask you something."

Jack sat down in his mind he thought, 'It's not like I can leave so might as well listen.' Satisfied with Jack action the voice continued, " If you and your people had the power would you choice to throw the Mandlorains off this planet." Jack answer immediately, "If it was before they came then yes but now that they are here no." The voice was intrigued , " Why before but not now." "Simple they were just a threat before but now they are useful, they forced the planets nations to come together in agreement, we are making strives to solve problems that have be plaguing the planet as a whole ,we are increasing out technological stagnation,and many other actives that as a planet we would not do before."

The Voice was impressed," So dose this mean you are grateful for the Mandlorains even after everything they have done to your people." " No " Jack said coldly, " Do not misunderstand me if the tables were ever turned my people would pay the Mandlorains for ever slight and every insult, and the one who killed the President I would kill her in the slowest way possible. The man might not have been the greatest leader but he was the one my people choice his death was not for her or any of them to deiced."

"Ha..hahah! Boy I like you in fact I like you and all of your little friend,but I must say your way of thinking is very Mandlorain of you. You sure your not one of them." Now it was Jack turn to be a bit shocked. He had never thought about he way of thinking in that manner before, but it did not stop his answer, " So what if it is...if I think like a Mandlorain then I will become the best one there is. But it I wont belong to the Darkhide or any other clan I will belong to my own!"

Just as he finished speaking a figure stepped out of the shadows and stopped in front of Jack. Wearing a pitch black robe with feet,leg,chest ,hand ,and wrist armor made of durasteel. The final piece being his T shaped masked in red and black. Two light sabers hung from his belt as what can only be described as pure power radiated off of him. The wold in the force scape seem to grow darker just before he spoke. " Boy I am Darth Revan Master of the force and lord of the true Sith, and from this moment one you and your friend belong to me."

As he finished his statement a light shined down on Jack and then other lights began shining down in areas around him. Jack could barley make who it was out but it felt like his brothers and sister had been here with him the whole time, he just wasn't strong enough to feel them. Sensing his thoughts Revan turn to Jack, " Yes they were here since the beginning but just like you they had no way to reach you. All of you are weak but I will change that and after I make you strong take your revenge and make the galaxy fear you and your kind. You all have seen what is to come use it to your advantage and force the galaxy to its knees.

Jack took an knee in front of Revan and at the same time the other 20 people in the force scape took one as well. Once again they were all connected and Jack felt whole again. They spoke the same sentence at once as the force scape rang with, " What would you have us do our master?"

Inside his mask Revan smiled, " Right now you all are unconscious and will remain that way for the next 10 hours and during this time I will train you. When you return you will train with the Mandlorains during the day and with me during the nights you will have no rest until I am stratified with your progress. Fail me and you will die... do you all still accept." In one voice they all shouted "YES!" " Good then let us begin...."


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