Hey man this is a nice piece of work keep up the good work.
Will zen be meeting new people soon hope that this will be like those stories where the mc grows slowly and let him develop.
Please don't make the mc sooo OP that the enemy will die so soon.
Also will you be updating daily or will once a week thank you for your hard work and please don't forget to update for now I will see if this story is worth reading or not thanks again. Peace
Hey man this is a nice piece of work keep up the good work. Will zen be meeting new people soon hope that this will be like those stories where the mc grows slowly and let him develop. Please don't make the mc sooo OP that the enemy will die so soon. Also will you be updating daily or will once a week thank you for your hard work and please don't forget to update for now I will see if this story is worth reading or not thanks again. Peace