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Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊
Hi, love this story so far. Looking forward for more chapter updates soon. If you can please update more frequently. Im really interested in this couples relationship and like to see how it develops.
Hi author, love the story so far. It seems light and funny. I understand you are not good in writing in English. Please see if can get some to help you proof read your chapters first before posting. It will make it easier to read. Looking forward for more chapter updates soon please. I still love the story so please don't stop updating 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Really like this novel but updating of chapters is not regular........................😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😶😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😏😏😏😏😏😏🙄😏😏🙄😏😏🙄😏😏😏😏😏🙄😏😏😏😏😏😏🙄🙄😏😏😏😏😏
Really the novel is good but more love chemistry of ML and FL want to see....so sometimes I get bored although the overall story is really good 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😀😊😊😊
This one of the good novel to read but it moving so slow the girl Yue still not have her happiness in her life it is moving so slow ...there is no good chemistry in between quian and Yue waiting for that moment... thankyou author
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Good story but the way of presentation is little bit disappointing, hope it is because of the instability in the content presentation and array of display, once the grammatical mistakes are avoided, the string will be there,and the novel will be truly wonderful
Reveal Spoiler All the way going ahead with such improvement,a quiet appreciable moves,nice to read on,with expectations and fun and enjoyment, presentation improved the quality
Reveal Spoiler Nice development, getting better day by day, watch out for grammatical mistakes, besides that the flow of the story is improving,the author is a talented one , expecting more stories from you
Reveal Spoiler It is nice to see that the quality of writing is improving still a lot of grammatical mistakes ,make sure to use a dictionary ,lt is something great, that you can write a novel,so improve your dialect and your efforts will be really appreciated
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Cupid had struck.....Waiting for progress from his side....but will she overcome her past and give him a chance.....story is nice but lot of grammatical mistakes
Getting more and more improving,a good sign, you can be a good writer, try to improve the language and more specific description, good attempt and apparently appreciating it
Reveal Spoiler So many grammatical mistakes that can be rectified carefully looks like first writing piece of the author,need lot of reading and research before attempting anyway nice to reaf
Reveal Spoiler Story line good,a lot of grammatical mistakes try to focus and improve the language,even though,the theme is somewhat weird,hope it will be evolved to be in an interesting way
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I hope you realize the male character that fell in love with the girl, very good the development of the story, congratulations author, you only need to correct the errors of writing
Haven't read it... Just a passerby... It's great though... Granpa's gut is telling me this... Yep yep... 11/10 recommend. Hahaha kill him killll no no reviveee loliii... Good luck.
The story line seems good so far but the only and major problem is grammatical error. It is to the point that it sometimes is hard to comprehend. I'll recommend the author to use some grammar app if you don't have an editor yet because story seems to have a potential. So I am trying hard to continue reading it for it's story.
I like the flow of the story... It was good and interesting.. But the question is, does the femakevlead and the male lead have sine sort of connection??? Except that he is her best friends cousin....
My reading Status: dropped/paused at CH. 21 Its to hard to read or rather to understand what is exactly happening. And this ist Not the fault of Bad storytelling nor the fault of a needlessly complicated Story, but the grammatic. Alot of broken english so that it gets hard to understand what is going in without reading the same sentence twice or more. IT reads Like a MTL Story. In one chapter the author used u instead of you and r instead of are... How the book currently Stands i cant recommend IT to anyone. Pls Author Just get an Editor! After that i am sure your Story will get alot of traction aslong as you keep the frequent updates and the Story doesnt drop from the quality you showed till ch. 21
Here is your Author ☺☺☺😊☺☺😊😊 This story is my imagination after reading many novel and story i also want to create something so here i am .😃😃😃😃😃 As for the story it is a story of two broken heart to meet and heal each other. Give this a chance ❤❤❤.
I just found your novel ...... have to say , I love that cover pic 💯 and also the description ❤ I hope you update the chapters soon , I'm waiting for your updates !!! Hwa-ee-ting !!!!
The story is good. The characters development in the story is also good There are a lot of grammatical errors in this novel Badly needed an editor to fix this novel because it has good plot
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Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊Thank you author plz updates daily i like your novel 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍❤😊❤😊❤😊😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😊❤😊❤😊❤❤😊😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊
Hi, love this story so far. Looking forward for more chapter updates soon. If you can please update more frequently. Im really interested in this couples relationship and like to see how it develops.
Hi author, love the story so far. It seems light and funny. I understand you are not good in writing in English. Please see if can get some to help you proof read your chapters first before posting. It will make it easier to read. Looking forward for more chapter updates soon please. I still love the story so please don't stop updating 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Really like this novel but updating of chapters is not regular........................😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😶😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😏😏😏😏😏😏🙄😏😏🙄😏😏🙄😏😏😏😏😏🙄😏😏😏😏😏😏🙄🙄😏😏😏😏😏
Really the novel is good but more love chemistry of ML and FL want to see....so sometimes I get bored although the overall story is really good 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😀😊😊😊
This one of the good novel to read but it moving so slow the girl Yue still not have her happiness in her life it is moving so slow ...there is no good chemistry in between quian and Yue waiting for that moment... thankyou author
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Good story but the way of presentation is little bit disappointing, hope it is because of the instability in the content presentation and array of display, once the grammatical mistakes are avoided, the string will be there,and the novel will be truly wonderful
Reveal Spoiler All the way going ahead with such improvement,a quiet appreciable moves,nice to read on,with expectations and fun and enjoyment, presentation improved the quality
Reveal Spoiler Nice development, getting better day by day, watch out for grammatical mistakes, besides that the flow of the story is improving,the author is a talented one , expecting more stories from you
Reveal Spoiler It is nice to see that the quality of writing is improving still a lot of grammatical mistakes ,make sure to use a dictionary ,lt is something great, that you can write a novel,so improve your dialect and your efforts will be really appreciated
Reveal Spoiler Cupid had struck.....Waiting for progress from his side....but will she overcome her past and give him a chance.....story is nice but lot of grammatical mistakes
Getting more and more improving,a good sign, you can be a good writer, try to improve the language and more specific description, good attempt and apparently appreciating it
Reveal Spoiler So many grammatical mistakes that can be rectified carefully looks like first writing piece of the author,need lot of reading and research before attempting anyway nice to reaf
Reveal Spoiler Story line good,a lot of grammatical mistakes try to focus and improve the language,even though,the theme is somewhat weird,hope it will be evolved to be in an interesting way
Reveal Spoiler I hope you realize the male character that fell in love with the girl, very good the development of the story, congratulations author, you only need to correct the errors of writing
Haven't read it... Just a passerby... It's great though... Granpa's gut is telling me this... Yep yep... 11/10 recommend. Hahaha kill him killll no no reviveee loliii... Good luck.
The story line seems good so far but the only and major problem is grammatical error. It is to the point that it sometimes is hard to comprehend. I'll recommend the author to use some grammar app if you don't have an editor yet because story seems to have a potential. So I am trying hard to continue reading it for it's story.
I like the flow of the story... It was good and interesting.. But the question is, does the femakevlead and the male lead have sine sort of connection??? Except that he is her best friends cousin....
My reading Status: dropped/paused at CH. 21 Its to hard to read or rather to understand what is exactly happening. And this ist Not the fault of Bad storytelling nor the fault of a needlessly complicated Story, but the grammatic. Alot of broken english so that it gets hard to understand what is going in without reading the same sentence twice or more. IT reads Like a MTL Story. In one chapter the author used u instead of you and r instead of are... How the book currently Stands i cant recommend IT to anyone. Pls Author Just get an Editor! After that i am sure your Story will get alot of traction aslong as you keep the frequent updates and the Story doesnt drop from the quality you showed till ch. 21
Here is your Author ☺☺☺😊☺☺😊😊 This story is my imagination after reading many novel and story i also want to create something so here i am .😃😃😃😃😃 As for the story it is a story of two broken heart to meet and heal each other. Give this a chance ❤❤❤.
I just found your novel ...... have to say , I love that cover pic 💯 and also the description ❤ I hope you update the chapters soon , I'm waiting for your updates !!! Hwa-ee-ting !!!!
The story is good. The characters development in the story is also good There are a lot of grammatical errors in this novel Badly needed an editor to fix this novel because it has good plot