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An actual life after death. I literally came back to life after dying. But into a very different world. Into a world were extraordinary heroes are as real as you and I, and so are the terrifying villains. A world that was once fiction is now my reality, and I find myself in the body of the world's most underestimated and underated mutant.
SI as the X-men mutant Iceman in the Marvel-verse.
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The updates are just taking too long to get into the story especially when he does one thing in one chapter and another in this one I was thinking he would just kill or cripple anyone who comes after him and at the beginning he said he didn't want to join the x men due to them being to soft granted he can continue to work with them and quit down the line but its starting to seem like hes going to have no chance but to stay. He also seems to start going soft like not killing people who want to steal your body parts in my opinion he should just kill em all.
It is very good I didn’t expect it to be that good I kept it in my library for a while not reading it but when I did I read it till the last chapter And as someone who never watched x men and still liked this fanfic The author did an awesome job 👏 I just hope there is more updates 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Its going good- EDGE. It starts to get a little fluff -EDGE. Does cool stuff with his powers -EDGE! SO MUCH edgyness. The main character acts like he murdered cities worth of people, smokes a cigarette, listens to piano music, and watches the sunset. It would be a real good fic if the internal monologues of edgyness went away, please!
This is a dope fanfic I love how he takes no **** and actually uses his knowledge to get ahead of everyone else as well as being brutal I hope he sticks to who he is right now and doesn't go soft or stay in the x men for long their just too annoying with their no kill policy and a lot of their members only do crime fighting its like they have no other lives. I also really like the how he uses his power I can see him using the water molecules in the air to teleport or doing some crazy naruto jutsu with mirrors or a dragon. I just hope the author continues to leave him ice cold, ruthless and calculating.
I felt my heart clench at so many turns I love this author soooooo much pls thanks for making cyclops a bit of a bad guy I always hated him Ahhhhhbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
MC is a beta to the max..... he is an omega level mutant and can do missions by himself if he wants to but he is a BETA..... waste of time reading
I like it a lot :3 Finally a good X-Men story and with a character like Ice man that's cool But my only real problem is the cringe love story between the mc and the emma frost clone like he died a grown ass man how dafuq is he gonna be getting puppy dog love at his age XD I dont mind a romantic love interest but for his age dont make it so cheesy the clone emma frost I can understand and i dont mind her being cheesey because shes young but for the mc it's hard to read sometimes the cringe is real when some 20-30+ guy acts like that
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I came here expecting to be disappointed, but I left completely satisfied. This novel is by far one of the best fanfics on this site. Hey, if you can’t take my word for it then just read the first chapter. I promise you that you’ll be hooked
It's one of the best fanfiction written in this website and I strongly recommend everyone to read it.Writing quality and character development is quite good the only problem is updates are irregular but the story is certainly worth waiting for
NOICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cool, awesome, tops, number one, blue ribbon material, gold medalist, first place, the best, aged to perfection, Five Stars, Ten out of Ten, must read!
This novel is going to be in one of the top five ...........................................................................................................................
The story was sooo good I re-read it twice and each time I do so I get these new details that I hadn't paid attention to before like how the mc gave himself a faded haircut with ICE (BADASSS!!!) how the MC jumbles out his real name. The SHEILD'S early intro was unexpected though ,really puts me on edge. (Great anime references btw ; ) )
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This book is definitely not what I expected. I expected a run of the mill marvel fan fic but this goes beyond that. I love the originalness that this book has. You are a great writer and I can't wait for the chapters to come.
Great story the mc uses his iceman powers like he's supposed to not like the dumb ass bobby. The mc is probably one of my favorites I've ever read before, he's not a crazy psycho but also not a wimpy noodle and the writing is great no bs mistakes.
Reveal Spoiler When it came to a superhero fan-fiction I honestly wasn't expecting Iceman. It's only been 2 chaps so far, so I can't say anything about the update frequency. The character background has been explained so beautifully. But I seriously hope that the author doesn't ruin the flow by making it all about ***. Homestly it would be such a waste of beautiful character development if the mc just turned out to be one of them s*x maniacs in the other fan fictions. Any ways hoping for more updates.
I was honestly not hoping for much on intro and grammar structure, but was not going to hold it against them as long as the writer tries their best, but I'm glad my expectations were wrong. So far it has a good intro, well written and the story was very engaging. I hope to read more from this writer.
Each chapter is unique in its own way that I strongly feel that I must write a review for each chapter becauseotherwise I feel that I will be undermining the story. Each chapter has its own myriad of information that add life to this story. So without further ado... **** CHAPTER 4 REVIEW***** (SPOILERS ) I'm hyped that mc has finally joined the X-men yipeee!!! It's also worth mentioning how the author firmly shows his stance on life and his outlook on life (MAD RESPECT) . Its admirable how the mc is humble and understands that he is not at the centre of the universe and that he is small compared to the universe. WHEREAS IN YOUR TYPICAL WANNABE- FANFICTION WHERE THE MC IS THE CENTRE OF ATTENTION WITH HIS OWN COMPANY, OWN LEGION OF FOLLOWERS, ANDDD NOT TO MENTION THE SHIT-TON OF WOMEN CALLING THEMSELVES MC'S HAREM AND ONLY COME IN THE STORYLINE AS A S*XUAL REFERNCE OR SOME TOOL TO SATE OFF THE MC'S LUST(BLEARGHH)!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll admit that may seem amusing at first but 30 or so chaps down the road ;the wonderful story you made turns out into some rrash that readers mone on from. Aannnny***aaayyyy(phew that was one long review), Hats off to the author for establishing a humble and down-to-earth MC. It may not mean much but it nust brightens the day when you indulge in this wonderful story.
Reveal Spoiler Badass chapter as usual. The dark part was unexpected ( who am I kidding ). So I guess the mc is No longer sunshine and rainbows. Will the shield have and blackmail material on him now , like how he killed people. Anyway two chaps back to back with whoop@ss fills me up with joy. Keep up the awesome work author-san.
Reveal SpoilerVolume 1
- 1 Chapter one 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter two 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 : COLD, COLD PAIN 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter four : COLD PLAY (I) 5 years ago
- 5 Night chills 5 years ago
- 6 The Cold man 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 5 years ago
- 9 Shit post OMAKE 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 : Cold hearts 5 years ago
- 11 Frost bitten 5 years ago
- 12 Interlude : a good boy 5 years ago
- 13 COLD HEARTS ARE HEARTS TOO 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter Fourteen : Dishes Best Served Cold 5 years ago
- 15 chapter Fifteen : Cold Burn 5 years ago
- 16 here comes the cold 5 years ago
- 17 Cold Hearted Saints 5 years ago
- 18 Gods and roses 4 years ago
- 19 Cold as can be 4 years ago
- 20 Eat, pray, live 4 years ago
- 21 Vote for your Story 4 years ago
I came here for some reason. As a fellow Author I always give five stars when I review and then pass on my thoughts. They are just my thoughts, I am not the god of Authors, so just assess or discard as you please. The grammar is excellent, and it was easy to read. The flow was good. The writing style is good, with the exception of far too much exposition. It could be I am partial to 3rd person and describing the scene, but for too large a portion the story was an inner monologue. Which in itself isnt a bad thing but the result of doing this weakens other important areas of the story. Character - one dimensional. This is the area that needs working on the most. To me, characters are much more enjoyable if they are not simply plot puppets advancing the story in the direction the author wants. They need to be living, breathing people. Other than the MC, the characters had a one-dimensional personality and a ****** one at that. When creating a character I prepare: traits, strengths, weaknesses, personality quirks and life goals= Motivation. That motivates them should dictate their actions. Not what the plot needs. World building. The descriptions, other than MC inner monologue thoughts were thin. As a reader its easier to imagine the world when its given descriptions and its workings are described. Good luck with everything Rain Reid. Good luck with your patreon and writing. No one is perfect and the more you write the better you get. So if you love it. I say. Keep writing.